2014年名校模拟试题分类汇编英语 专题21 短文改错及答案解析.docx

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1、2014年名校模拟试题分类汇编英语专题21短文改错（2014届辽宁五校协作体摸底试题）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜钱（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。NowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneral facedwit

2、h alotofpressure,whichisrathercommon.To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help, first of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not toohigh, in another words, dont put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly,

3、 find a way to relax youoccasionally,forexample,youcanlisten tomusic,go swimorjustsimplygowalking. Eventually,make friend with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They willunderstand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never getyour

4、selfstuckinthepressurefor“impossibleisnothing”.解析：1.考查副词的用法。此处修饰动词faced需要用副词generally。2.考查分词的用法。此处followingsuggestions意为：下面的建议。这里following意为：下面的，未来的。3.考查主谓一致。此处what作主语，谓语动词用单数形式。4.考查定语从句的关系词。此处先行词goal在定语从句中作主语，故用that或which。5.考查固定短语的说法。此处inaword意为：总之。 6.考查代词的用法。此处relaxyourself意为：使自己放松。7.考查固定短语的用法。去游泳

5、为：goswimming，和下面的gowalking相对应。8.考查名词的单复数的用法。和其他人交朋友，当然不是一个人，故用复数。9.考查并列连词的用法。几个并列的成分，最后一个前用并列连词。10.考查固定短语的表达。此处introuble意为：处于困境中。前面不用the。答案：1.general-generally;2.followed-following;3.lead-leads4.what-that/which;5.another-other;6.you-yourself;7.swim-swimming; 8.friend-friends;9.yourparents-or/and;10.

6、the-;（2014届四川省成都市高三摸底试题）短文改错（共10小题；每小题15分，满分15分） 下文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 TheAmericanCivilWarcametoendintheyear1865,whichtheNorthernersbeattheSoutherner.However,eventoda

7、y,manySouthernershadnotforgottentheirdefeat.OncesomeAmericantouristswerevisitingtothebattlefieldoftheCivilWarwithStella,awomanguidefromtheSouth.ShekepttellstoriesabouthowtheSouthernsoldiershadsurvivedpowerfullyforcesoftheNorthernerFinally,atourist,whowerefromtheNorth,stoppedStellaandsaid,“Andsurely,

8、theNorthernersmusthavewonatleastonevictory.”“NotaslongasImtheguide.”heanswered.解析：1.TheAmericanCivilWarcametoendintheyear1865，本句中to用作介词，后面接名词作宾语。End表示任何一个结果，泛指，故前面加不定冠词。End词首音素是元音，不定冠词用an。短语cometoanend结束。2.whichtheNorthernersbeattheSoutherner前文先行词intheyear1865，为下文从句逻辑时间状语，故引导词用when或者which前加介词in。 3.w

9、hichtheNorthernersbeattheSoutherner联系前文whichtheNortherners可知此处的是南方人。结合语境可知Southerner应用复数形式，故在后面加s。4.此处visit是及物动词，故其后直接接名词作宾语，to是多余的。5.However，eventoday，manySouthernershadnotforgottentheirdefeat联系本句时间状语eventoday，可知本句描述的是一直持续到现在的动作，故用现在完成时态。had改为have。6.Shekepttellstoriesabout，短语keepdoingsth.继续做某事，一直做某

10、事。动名词做宾语表示抽象的反复发生的动作。故将tell改为telling，讲述。7.theSouthernsoldiershadsurvivedpowerfullyforcesoftheNorthamberFinally，本句中powerful用作定语修饰名词forces，强大的军队。故将powerfully改为powerful。强大的。8.atourist,whowerefromtheNorth，本句中主语who表示单数含义，故谓语动词用is的过去时态was，将were改为was。9.“Andsurely，theNorthernersmusthavewonatleastonevictory.

11、”联系前文，可知此处表示转折关系，and表示顺接关系，故将and改为but，但是。 10.“NotaslongasImtheguide”heanswered联系前文Shekepttellstories描述，可知此处指的是这个女导游。故将he改为she。答案： 1.end加an2.which改为when或者which前加介词in3.Southerner应用复数形式，在后面加s4.去掉visiting后的to5.had改为have6.tell改为telling7.powerfully改为powerful8.were改为was9.and改为but10.he改为she（2014届浙江温州十校第一次联考

12、）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside aPatience is of a great importance in our daily life

13、. One day I waited for a bus to come at astop.30minutehadpassed,andnobuscame.Upsetandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkwithfoot.But nosoonerhadI left whenthebus arrived. I thought ifI waited for onemore minute, I wouldhavecaughtit.IfIhadchosentotakethenextbus,Iwouldhavehadtowait forother30minutes.Onlythen do I

14、realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in.NowwheneverIamclosetolosemypatience,Illthinkofthisexperience.解析：1.Patienceisofagreatimportanceinourdailylife.。importance为抽象名词，前面不可用冠词，所以a去掉。2.30minutehadpassed,。minute是可数名词，前面又有30，所以应用复数形式。minute改为minutes。3.30minu

15、tehadpassed,andnobuscame.。等了30分钟，但是没有汽车来。应该是转折关系。and改为but。4.Idecidedtowalkwithfoot.。固定短语onfoot，所以with改为on。5.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.。固定句型nosoonerthan，所以when改为than。 6.IthoughtifIwaitedforonemoreminute。waited动作应发生在动词thought之前，所以应该用过去完成时，waited前面加had。7.Iwouldhavehadtowait forother30minutes

16、.“再30分钟，又30分钟”应该是another30minutes，所以other改为another。8.OnlythendoIrealizemyproblem.事情发生在过去，所以do改为did。 9.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastetheeffortthatwehaveputin.修饰动词应该用副词，所以possible改为possibly。10.Now whenever I am closeto losemy patience.be close to短语中to是介词所以lose改为losing。答案：1.great前的of去掉2.minuteminutes3

17、.andbut4.withon5.whenthan6.waited前加had7.otheranother8.dodid 9.possiblepossibly10.loselosing（2013届河南省六市高三第二次联考）短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改

18、均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Itsreportedthatmanypeoplediedoftrafficaccidentseachyear.Roadsafetyhasarousedthe widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially forthe ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously i

19、n ourdailylife.While usedtheroad,wemustwalkonthepavementandlearntoprotectus.Besides,cardriversshouldobeythetrafficrules,thatisbothgoodforthemselvesandothers.In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly.Afterall,lifeisnotasmallmatter.解析：1.根据后面的eachyea

20、r可知，用一般现在时，故改为die。2.此处attention是名词，修饰名词用形容词，故改为wide。3.Manyrules作主语，用被动语态的形式，所以加been。4.theones和trafficcrashes是同位语，不用介词for，故去掉for。5.takeseriously意为：对严肃对待。所以将make改为take。6.此处we和use之间是主动关系，故用现在分词。 7.代词错误，此处意为保护我们自己，所以改为反身代词ourselves。8.that不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以改为which。9.考查固定短语。Inaword意为：总之。10.动名词短语作主语用单数，所以用is。

21、答案： 1.died-die2.widely-wide3.have后加been4.去掉for5.make-take6.used-using7.us-ourselves8.that-which9.the-a10.are-is（2013届黑龙江大庆市高三第二次模拟）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）请对下面的短文进行修改。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅 涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

22、2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life.At about 9:00 a.m., I go to thebookstore with my friends.There was a lot of new books. I didnt know what one to buy becausethese books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called TheEart

23、hquakeofTangshanbutsomepeoplewerewaiting outsidethebookingoffice.It tookusabouttwo hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friendsevenburstintotear.Thatsareallywonderfulfilm.Itisveryworthseeing.Whatahappyday!IhopetomorrowIwillbeevenhappier. 解析：1.TodayisSund

24、ay.Theskyisfullofsunshine,sodoesmylife.(上文用的是“is”，所以下文仍用“is”=mylifeisalsofullofsunshine)2.At about9:00a.m., I go to thebookstore with my friends.(我跟朋友去书店是过去发生的事情，要用一般过去时)3.Therewasalotofnewbooks.(主语是“books”为复数。所以要将was改成were)4.Ididntknowwhatonetobuybecausethesebooks wereallusefultome.(what用于无范围的指代，而w

25、hich用于有一定范围内的指代。)5.At10:00,wewenttocinema.(去看电影“gotothecinema”为习惯表达)6. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside thebookingoffice.(上下文没有转折关系，而是承递关系)7.Ittookusabouttwohourstoseeit.Havingbeenseenthefilm,(“see”的逻辑主语就是句子的主语“”，它们之间是主动关系，不是被动关系。) 8.everyonewasdeep

26、lymoving.(现在分词作表语说明主语所具有的性质或特征，而过去分词表语说明主语所具有的心理感受，这儿是指人的心理感受“被感动了”)9.Someofmyfriendsevenburstintotear.(“burstintotears突然大哭起来”是固定搭配)10.Thatsareallywonderfulfilm.Itisveryworthseeing.(修饰worth的副词习惯要用well，而不能用very)Whatahappyday!IhopetomorrowIwillbeevenhappier. 答案：1.doesis2.gowent3.waswere4.whatwhich5.在c

27、inema前加the6.butand7.去掉been8.movingmoved9.teartears10.verywell（2014届陕西汉中洋县实验中学高三第一次月考）短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分， 满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记

28、分。MyparentsandIwenttotheparkonlastSunday.Therewerelotsofvisitorsstoodinfrontoftheticketwindow.Wewaitedalongtime andbuythreetickets. In theTiger Mountainofthepark,I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunate, I got separated from my pare

29、nts. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck.Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions.Worse still, I hadno money,so I had towalkhome,coveredasmuchas5kilometers.解析：1.考查短语。当有last或next这样的时间短语前不用加介词，故去掉on。2.考查非谓语动词或定语从句。因为已经有谓语动词were，所以stand与visitors之间是主动关系，故用standing。或在stoo

30、d前加who，who引导的是定语从句，先行词是visitor。3.考查动词。这里and连接的是两个并列的动词，and前的动词是waited前后动词的时态应该一致，故用过去式bought。4.考查连词。这里是连词so.that如此以致于。so后跟形容词或副词。5.考查形容词。frightened人感到害怕；frightening令人害怕的，这里修饰动物，指的是令人害怕的动物。6.考查副词。Unfortunate是形容词“幸运的”；Unfortunately是副词，用副词来修饰整个句子。7.考查短语。这里是短语haveahardtimedoing做某事有困难。 8.考查代词。这里用代词代替pare

31、nts故用them。9.考查副词。Alone独自地；根据withoutanycompanions没有人的陪伴表示的人的感情色彩的lonely“寂寞”。10.考查非谓语动词。这里cover“走”，它与逻辑主语I之间是主动关系，故用现在分词covering。 答案：1.onlastSunday去掉on2.stoodstanding或前加who3.buybought4.tooso5.frightedenedfrightening6.UnfortunateUnfortunately7.hadharda8.himthem9.alonelonely10.coveredcovering（2013届浙江鲁迅中

32、学适应性考试）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and areplaying sports regular. But t

33、he problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet thepublic growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.Therefore,itisdifficulttorentabasketballfieldandimpossibletofindafreeone.Itseems thatallcourts in the city were always full.Weather permitt

34、ed, we can playin outdoors. But on rainy daysor in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge isexpensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses willencouragemorepeopletoparticipateinsports.解析：1.theimportanceexercisi

35、ng锻炼的重要性，所以应加of。2.areplayingsportsregular。副词修饰动词。regular改为regularly。3.meetthepublicgrowingdemand应该用名词所有格修饰demand，公众增长的需要。public改为publics。 4. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficulttorentabasketballfield根据上下文此处应为转折关系Therefore改为However。5.It seem

36、s that all courts in the city were always full文章叙述现在事情所以应用一般现在时态。were改为are。6. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors此处没有连词，所以应是独立主格做状语， permitted改为permitting。7.wecanplayinoutdoors. outdoors是副词，前面不用介词，所以去掉介词in。8.wehavetoturntoindoorcourts.Therearenotmuchinmycity,此处指的是场地courts，所以应用修饰复数名词的many代替muc

37、h。9.thechargeisexpensive。价格费用等词，不用expensive修饰，而用high或者low。10.soeasieraccesseswill encouragemorepeopletoparticipate insports.access“通道，接近的权利，机会”不用复数形式，比如haveaccessto。答案：1.importance后加of2.regularlyregular3.publicpublics4.ThereforeHowever5.wereare 6.permittedpermitting7.in去掉8.muchmany9.expensivehigh10.

38、accessesaccess（2013届浙江桐乡市高三模拟）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 LastMondaymorning,ourEnglishteachertoldustoputourwritingbookonthedesksothathecouldcheckthem.Hon

39、estspeaking,IreallywonderedwhatwouldhappenthatifhefoundoutIdid not finish his homework. So I took out my Chinese writing book instead of my English book.When the teacher found this out, I pretended to be very surprising, “Oh , Im very sorry, but Ithink that was my English book because they have a sa

40、me cover. I can take my English writingbook to school in the afternoon!” On listening this, the teacher said, “OK!” I narrowly escapedpunished.NowIrealizeIwaswrong.解析：1. Last Monday morning, our English teacher told us to put our writing book on the desk so thathecouldcheckthem.(修饰语our告诉我们不只是一本book，

41、应该是许多books)2.Honestspeaking,(修饰现在分词speaking应该用副词形式Honestly)3.Ireallywonderedwhatwouldhappenthatifhefoundout(后面已经有if引导条件状语从句) 4.Ididnotfinishhishomework.(要与主语I指代一致，I的物主代词应该为my)5. So I took out my Chinese writing book instead of my English book. When the teacher foundthisout,Ipretendedtobeverysurprisi

42、ng,(指人的心理感受要用过去分词)6.“Oh ,Imverysorry,butIthinkthatwasmyEnglishbook(原来以为是指“过去的事”，应该用一般过去时)7.becausetheyhaveasamecover.(same常常和the连用)8.IcantakemyEnglishwritingbooktoschoolintheafternoon!”(是带来而不是带走)9.Onlisteningthis,theteachersaid,(listening是不及物动词，后面不可以带宾语。同时这儿也不是指“倾听”而是“听见，听到”)10.“OK!”Inarrowlyescapedpunished.NowIrealizeIwaswrong.(escaped后面要跟宾语，故应该用名词或动名词的被动式，被惩罚)答案：1.booksbooks 2.honesthonestly3.去掉that4.hismy5.surprisingsurprised6.thinkthought7.athe8.takebring9.listeninghearing10.punishedpunishment或在punished前加being