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1、专业英语四级（作文）-试卷151及答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_2.Recently, more and more food scandals such as poisonous milk power and illegal cooking oil are exposed to the public. What makes food unsafe? How to deal with it? These questions have aroused enormous pub

2、lic concern. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: On Food Safety You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a na

3、tural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_3.Stress is an indispensable spice in life. Some stresses are good for us if we cope with

4、them appropriately. However, when the stresses undermine our mental or physical health, they are dangerous. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: How to Deal with Stress? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the secon

5、d part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of m

6、arks.（分数：2.00）_4.A research suggests that just 15 minutes of exercise a day can boost life expectancy by three years and cut death risk by 14%. People who keep doing daily exercise are usually stronger than those who dont. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: The Imp

7、ortance of Daily Exercise You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevan

8、ce, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_5.Sub-health is a hidden threat to our health. According to a recent survey, sub-health concerns 60% of the middle-aged and elderly people. And females are more s

9、usceptible to sub-health than males. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: How to Cope with Sub-health? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last par

10、t, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_6.Some people suggest that schools should open psych

11、ological courses for college students, because these courses are helpful to students mental health. What is your opinion? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Is It Necessary to Open Psychological Courses for College Students? You are to write in three parts. In the

12、first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure t

13、o follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_专业英语四级（作文）-试卷151答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Recently, more and more food scandals such as poisonous milk power and illegal cooking oil are exposed to the public. What makes f

14、ood unsafe? How to deal with it? These questions have aroused enormous public concern. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: On Food Safety You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with

15、appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： On F

16、ood Safety Food safety is such a serious issue that depresses many parents, who swarm into Hong Kong to purchase milk powders. When the supply in the local market is drained, the government puts a quota on milk powders taken out of the region. To restore the confidence of mainland buyers, I think we

17、 should strengthen the law enforcement of government bodies. The reason why enterprises in the Chinese mainland dare to put their profits before public health is because of the inaction of the authorities concerned. For instance, inspection department is supposed to authorize regular and irregular c

18、hecks on the food products, but this is hardly the case in many cities. As the saying goes, when the cat is away, mice will play. Thats why we see so many kinds of unsafe food in our market. Watchdog departments should be more active to launch raids into the manufacturing sites and perform more freq

19、uent tests on food pro-ducts. Once problems are identified, the public shall be warned about the potential threats of a food product and the enterprise concerned shall be punished according to law. With a firm grip from the law enforcement agencies, enterprises must behave themselves. In conclusion,

20、 we should strengthen law enforcement to solve the food safety issue in China.)解析：解析： 本题属于“自由发挥型”作文，涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“食品安全”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从香港奶粉限购入题，指出应该加强政府机构的执法力度来解决食品安全问题。 第二段：阐述原因。首先，中国大陆的企业之所以敢唯利是图，罔顾民众健康，原因在于有关部门的不作为。引用习语“猫儿不在，老鼠就猖獗”；其次，在执法部门强而有力的执法力度下，企业一定会规规矩矩的。 第三段：应该加强执法力度解

21、决中国的食品安全问题。3.Stress is an indispensable spice in life. Some stresses are good for us if we cope with them appropriately. However, when the stresses undermine our mental or physical health, they are dangerous. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: How to Deal with Stre

22、ss? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficienc

23、y, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： How to Deal with Stress? In the fast-moving society, most of us feel stressful and have to cope with occasional mental breakdown. Stress is a major cause of health and ment

24、al problems, which deserves our attention. To deal with stress, I think we could adopt a two-pronged approach. First of all, we should know when to let go. Many people are stuck in a futile attempt to secure a client or save a dead-end career path. They are not willing to let go, so they cling on to

25、 the stress-induced project or work. Bit by bit, as they are disappointed by the crude reality, they are more likely to suffer serious anxiety. Therefore, knowing when to let go is the wisdom of life, which greatly reduces our stress. Secondly, we should talk to our friends and family members freque

26、ntly to relieve the stress. Stressed people often feel suffocated and cornered. At this point, if we talk to our friends or family members, the tension will be relieved by talking and sharing. They could also give us some solutions from another perspective. In conclusion, to avoid stress, we had bet

27、ter master the wisdom of letting go and share our stress with friends and family members.)解析：解析： 本题属于“问题解决型”作文，涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“如何应对压力”提出个人的意见。 按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从当代社会的压力入题，指出应该采取两方面的措施来应对压力。 第二段：阐述原因。首先，我们应该知道什么时候放手，不要做不必要的挣扎；其次，我们应该多和朋友和家人交谈以减缓压力，交谈能使紧张情绪会得到分担和缓解。 第三段：我们要掌握何时放手的智慧并与朋友家人分担我们

28、的压力。4.A research suggests that just 15 minutes of exercise a day can boost life expectancy by three years and cut death risk by 14%. People who keep doing daily exercise are usually stronger than those who dont. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: The Importance of

29、Daily Exercise You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content

30、 sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： The Importance of Daily Exercise We are living in a competitive society, where pressure is mounting. To make a living, many people squeeze the valuable time to e

31、xcel at their work. While they are committed to work, they neglect the importance of daily exercise. First of all, daily exercise can keep us healthy. If we stay in the office all day long, it is better that we spend half an hour jogging. This would relax the tension in our spinal cord. Daily exerci

32、se also facilitates the metabolism in our body and speeds up the blood cycle. Besides, after one long days work, our mind gets tired. It is helpful to exercise to get our body tired because this will lead to a sound sleep, which reenergizes our body and mind. Secondly, daily exercise provides an opt

33、ion to be temporarily away from the work at hand. It is not uncommon that we are stuck in a certain project or experience brain drain at a certain point. If we go out and stretch our limbs and do some sports, our mind is relaxed and we might have a sudden brainstorm incidentally. In conclusion, dail

34、y exercise is beneficial to our physical health and it is also helpful in relaxing our mind to come up with great ideas.)解析：解析： 本题属于“给定观点型”作文，涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“每天运动的重要性”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从生活压力大入题，指出当投入工作的时候，人们忽略了每天做运动的重要性。 第二段：阐述每天运动的重要性。首先，每天做运动有益健康，有利于新陈代谢，加速血液循环；其次，每天做运动能让我们暂时从手头的工作

35、解脱出来。 第三段：每天运动有益于健康，而且也可以舒缓精神以便进发更好的创意。5.Sub-health is a hidden threat to our health. According to a recent survey, sub-health concerns 60% of the middle-aged and elderly people. And females are more susceptible to sub-health than males. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following

36、 topic: How to Cope with Sub-health? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for cont

37、ent relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： How to Cope with Sub-health? Sub-health, by Merriam-Websters definition, means a condition of reduced vigor in the absence of overt ailment

38、. It is a potential threat to our well-being and needs to be dealt with. To cope with sub-health, we must exercise more often and take in food periodically. First of all, doing exercises on a regular basis helps improve our vigor and stamina. The major cause of sub-health is the excessive pressure f

39、rom work. If we do some exercises, such as yoga and jogging, the stress would be relieved and we would feel vigorous and energetic. Sub-health is an in-between state where our body is susceptible to diseases. It is, therefore, crucial to reverse this state and restore the health by doing exercises.

40、Secondly, a periodic eating schedule is also helpful to cope with sub-health. It is reported that another major cause of sub-health among office people is the irregular consumption of food. When they are immersed in some urgent projects, they would put whatever food is handy into their mouth or even

41、 skip meals. The digestive system is thus impaired, which potentially threatens the immune system. That is why we should develop a regular eating habit. In conclusion, sub-health could be controlled and eliminated by physical training and habitual intake of food.)解析：解析： 本题属于“问题解决型”作文，涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题

42、要求考生对“如何应对亚健康”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从字典对亚健康的定义入题，指出应对亚健康，我们应该参加更多的锻炼，三餐定时。 第二段：阐述原因。第一，经常做运动可以让我们精力充沛、活力四射。我们可以做瑜伽、慢跑舒缓压力；第二，三餐定时也有助于应对亚健康，三餐不定时对消化系统和免疫系统都有害。 第三段，我们可以通过身体锻炼和三餐定时控制亚健康状态。6.Some people suggest that schools should open psychological courses for college students, because these co

43、urses are helpful to students mental health. What is your opinion? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Is It Necessary to Open Psychological Courses for College Students? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the sec

44、ond part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of

45、 marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Is It Necessary to Open Psychological Courses for College Students? In recent news coverage, we learnt that a 20-year-old college student jumped to his death because of a breakup and that a shy boy quit university because of his persecution mania. Under this context, I t

46、hink it is very necessary to open psychological courses for college students. First of all, students would get some basic knowledge and coping tactics in psychological courses, which provide them with a measuring ruler, with which students can understand themselves better. For instance, if they learn about some early symptoms of a certain m