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1、大学英语四级-写作 1 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on College Students Entrepreneurship. You should write at l

2、east 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_2.Directions : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and then express your views on Academic Fraud. You should write

3、 at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and then express your views on Sustainable Development. You

4、 should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and then express your views on Food Safety. Yo

5、u should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and then express your views on the Protection

6、 of Intangible Cultural Heritage. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_大学英语四级-写作 1 答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should

7、start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on College Students Entrepreneurship. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 College Students EntrepreneurshipThe scene drawn in

8、 the above picture is this: the college student, with a life buoy around waist, is intending to jump into the “commercial sea“ and start his business in spite of the different attitudes of people standing rear. The picture describes a prevailing phenomenon of college students entrepreneurship. In re

9、cent years, college graduates are encouraged to start their own business instead of pursuing employment. People hold different views toward this burgeoning phenomenon. Those who favor it argue that college students are of energy, audacity, and enthusiasm which compose the essential qualities of an e

10、ntrepreneur. Moreover, having accomplished the higher education, they have acquired some theoretical knowledge which offers a deep insight into some matters. But people who object to this practice insist that college students are subject to setbacks and failures due to their lack of social experienc

11、e and sufficient preparation. Personally, college students have both strengths and weaknesses in starting business. As long as they can make most of the former and minimize the latter, they will create their own colorful world. After all, one can“t learn to swim unless he goes into water. 解析 1第一段考生应

12、简要地描绘图中的情景(a brief description of the picture)，并点明其主题，即大学生创业现象。 2第二段考生可阐述人们对此现象的不同看法和态度。可以分正反两个方面进行论述，即支持此举的人，他们支持的原因；反对此举的人，他们反对的理由，两种观点形成对比。 3第三段考生可基于以上观点提出自己的看法，如认为大学生创业利大于弊，因而鼓励大学生扬长避短，迎难而上。2.Directions : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your ess

13、ay with a brief description of the graph and then express your views on Academic Fraud. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Academic FraudFrom the cartoon above, we can see that the professor is criticizing his

14、 student sternly for his cheating in the thesis. It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to a most unfavorable social phenomenon of academic fraud. In recent years, academic fraud has become increasingly a serious concern in universities as well as in some academic instituti

15、ons. There“s little doubt that it will exert a disastrous impact on academic field and our society. First of all, such nonfeasance or misconduct will hinder even ruin the academic study and scientific research of a country. Furthermore, the plagiarism of some reputable professors and researchers wil

16、l severely challenge and abuse the public trust in intellectual integrity, even go further to foster a climate of dishonesty in the society. Besides, the habitual fraud would be a lethal defect in one“s personality, which will lead him to achieving nothing. For the reasons above, I would say that it

17、“s imperative that all the relevant departments join in the efforts to fight against this disgraceful phenomenon. Only when every member of the society realizes the harm brought by academic fraud can we put an end to it. 解析 1第一段考生简要地描绘该图传递的信息内容(a brief description of the picture)，随之点明主题，即学术造假。 2第二段考

18、生可就主旨阐明自己的看法和态度(express your views on Academic Fraud)，即指出学术造假现象日趋严重，它所带来的危害不容忽视。接下来就展开层层论述，说明学术造假对学术界以及整个社会带来的严重危害。 3第三段考生可基于上文的危害论述，呼吁全社会齐心协力，共同致力于打击学术造假的行动。3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the gr

19、aph and then express your views on Sustainable Development. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Sustainable DevelopmentThis graph brings a topic of sustainable development, which has become a hot issue in these

20、 years. The graph demonstrates clearly the interrelationship between the sustainable development and the development of society, economy as well as environment, and more important, the far-reaching significance of sustainable development. Sustainable development is a process that envisions a desirab

21、le future state for human societies in which living conditions and resource-use continue to meet human needs without destroying the balance of natural environment. It is aimed at achieving the sustainability and harmony between human activities and resources. Unfortunately, many people neglect the n

22、eeds of our descendants in order to pursue the immediate interests. They destroy forests without planting more, discharge sewage directly into rivers without any treatment, and exploit energy with little restraint. From what has been discussed above, we should bear in mind that our children also dep

23、end on Earth“s natural resources and we should not deprive them of such necessities. The inconsiderate attitude towards the welfare of our children and grandchildren, as well the indifference to the outcome of such reckless actions, can only turn Earth into a cold and lifeless planet. 解析 1第一段考生要简明扼要

24、地描绘该图传递的信息内容(a brief description of the graph)、阐释各个要素之间的相互关系，并点明主旨。 2第二段考生可就主旨阐明自己的看法和态度(express your views on Sustainable Development)，即对可持续发展的重要意义的理解和认识，并进一步指出在这一方面依然普遍存在的社会现象和主要问题，将可持续发展的重要意义和发生在身边令人失望的现状进行对比，形成反差，突显问题的严重性和紧迫性。3第三段考生可从问题的严重后果入手，提出自己的观点，发出警示，呼吁大家注重可持续发展。4.Directions: For this part

25、, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and then express your views on Food Safety. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Food Safety

26、What can we say at seeing such a picture? People nowadays worry so much about the safety of their food that they inspect it as the Snow White should do with the toxic apple. But it“s challenging to do so because the potential threats in the food are even complicated today. Though the causes for food

27、 safety crisis may be very complex, there are three main factors which can account for it. To begin with, excessive chemicals including pesticides and fertilizers are used in order to increase the production or speed up the growth. Secondly, the abundance of innovative additives like preservatives a

28、nd pigments are poisoning our food. Besides, the overuse of genetically-modified technology in food makes the matter even worse. Bread is the stall of life. The issue of food safety can“t be neglected any longer for it“s a matter of life and death which involves everyone. Technology is both a blessi

29、ng and a curse for mankind. Man should exploit it scientifically and reasonably for his own survival. 解析 1作文第一段，简单描绘图画内容。这是必须的，也是题目中强制要求的(a brief description of the picture)。描述的时候，只要将图中的人物关系和主题含义说清楚就可以，直接说明该图的含义，即它所反应的社会问题。 2作文第二段，对主题现象及其成因进行层层剖析。这幅画的主题很清晰，即食品安全问题。我们的食品正在被各种添加剂及化学物质所污染，而导致这一问题的原因很多，

30、我们可以进行层层剖析(express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big)。因此，第二段通篇阐述引发食品安全危机的各种因素。简言之，分析原因，剖析主题。 3作文第三段，建议，倡议。这一段强调食品安全的重要性，即“民以食为天”，它攸关人类的生死存亡。因此指出“水能载舟，亦能覆舟”，人类只有科学合理地利用现代科技，才能保证自身的生存。5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a s

31、hort essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and then express your views on the Protection of Intangible Cultural Heritage. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Protection of Int

32、angible Cultural HeritageIn this picture, a boy is enquiring his classmate, who is playing with anipad, about the usage of the abacus. Neither of them can tell what it is, let alone use it! Such an image draws our attention to the pressing situation that some intangible cultural heritage like abacus

33、, paper-cutting and embroidery is endangered even facing extinct. Faced with this fact, some people may show total indifference. However, I firmly insist that the intangible cultural heritage be protected for the following reasons. First, most intangible cultural heritage is the embodiment of people

34、“s exploration of science or pursuit for beauty, which should never be forgotten even though our life is flooded with an overwhelming variety of high-tech products. Second, any form of intangible cultural heritage is the wisdom crystallization of a nation, which deserves us to inherit and carry forw

35、ard. Thirdly, every intangible cultural heritage is a dazzling pearl in the treasury house of the world culture. In brief, the protection of intangible cultural heritage allows of no delay. It is imperative for us to take effective measures to keep it vivifying and flourishing. 解析 1作文第一段，简单描绘图画内容(a

36、brief description of the picture)。描述的时候，只需简要地描绘图中两个男孩子的对话，并阐明该图反映的现象即可。 2作文第二段，阐述图画含义并阐释个人观点。这幅图画反映的是以算盘为例的非物质文化遗产濒临消亡的现状，所以提炼主题，提出保护非物质文化遗产刻不容缓，(express your views on the protection of intangible cultural heritage)。因此，第二段重点分析非物质文化遗产对于一个民族甚至是全人类的重要意义。 3作文第三段，总结，呼吁。这一段再次强调保护非物质文化遗产的紧迫性，指出继承并发扬非物质文化势在必行。