1、BEC商务英语（高级）写作模拟试卷 124及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 The bar chart below shows the predicted numbers of participants on three courses at the Wakeley Business College during the coming year. Each course is offered four times a year.Using the information from the chart, write a short report comparing the predict
2、ed enrolments for the three courses for the coming year.Write 120-140 words. 二、 PART TWO 2 For an experimental period, your company has operated a scheme allowing certain employees in your department to work from home for part of the week. The Managing Director has asked you to write a report on the
3、 scheme. Write the report for the Managing Director: explaining why it was decided to allow some staff to work from home giving details of how the scheme operated saying what the positive and/or negative aspects of the scheme have been making a recommendation concerning the future of the scheme. 3 Y
4、ou have recently had a number of problems with a local company which supplies you with goods for your workplace. You have been asked to write a letter of complaint to the supplier about the situation. Write your letter to the supplier: referring to the goods your company regularly buys from them des
5、cribing the various problems you have had explaining how the situation might be dealt with stating what will happen if the situation does not improve. 4 The Training Director of the company you work for is considering hiring a business training consultancy to provide the following courses: Appraisin
6、g Staff, Software Applications and Giving Effective Presentations. You have been asked to write a proposal for the Training Director giving your views on these courses. Write a proposal for the Training Director: saying which course you would like to attend and why explaining how another of the cour
7、ses would benefit one of your colleagues advising against running one of the courses. BEC商务英语（高级）写作模拟试卷 124答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Report: Enrolments Prediction For The 3 Courses In Next Year Location: Wakeley Business College Effective Management: Generally speaking the predicted number of parti
8、cipants fluctates in the next year. In spring session, the number is the lowest, which is only 50. Then it reaches the peak of 80 in both summer and autumn session. At last it drops to 80 in winter. Customer Communications: The number change chart is different with that of effective management. In s
9、pring it is 60 and drops to 50 in summer, which is same with in autumn. Then, it reaches the peak of 90 in winter. Marketing in Practice: As the change of the course of customer communication, the numbers in spring and winter are larger than in summer and autumn. It reaches the peak of 120 in spring
10、, then drops sharply to only 70 in summer. But in autumn and winter, it increases steadily, which is 80 and 100 respectively. Conclusion: marketing in practice may be the most popular course of the largest number of predicted patlclpants, especially in Spring and Winter. Fewest students are thought
11、to participate in the course of customer communications especially in summer and autumn. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 We decided to allow certain of our employees to work at home and so we will follow a model which is already in place in some other countries where our company is located. The reason behind i
12、s that not enough desks are available in our data quality department. I have already spoken to the concerned employees and they will not have a problem to do 90% of their work at home. It makes sense that everyone of them is coming into the office one day per week, but on different one. For example:
13、 employee one on Monday and employee two on Tuesday, etc. The reason for that is to give feedback to Mr. X (the boss) and to have the possibility to ask open questions. What is now required from us? We have to make sure that the employees receive laptops and get Internet connection at home. When tha
14、t is given we have only to think about a workplan. One positive aspect is that they dont have to drive the long distance to our office. All employees of the data quality department are living on the countryside and our office is downtown. Therefore they can save a lot of time which they can use to w
15、ork accordingly. 3 【正确答案】 Dear Sirs, I am writing with reference to Order 50/52/01 which I received from you yesterday. Unfortunately, I must complain about the quality of the goods and delay in delivery. My company has been purchasing the stationery you offer for few years now. So far, we have not
16、encountered any serious problems. But this time I have no choice, but to inform you about the situation. The pencils you delivered were broken and pens were of different kind than we ordered. Moreover, the boxes were marked incorrectly. The consignment arrived two days after agreed date, which cause
17、d us inconvenience, because we had promissed our customers early delivery. Last month we ignored the fact that the exercise books you had delivered were of different colours that expected. But this time we are going to send you all the goods back. They should be replaced and delivered to us as soon
18、as possible. What is more, we must ask you for a 15% discount. Unless the problem is solved quickly, we will have to undertake legal steps, as this kind of situation is unacceptable. Please treat the matter as urgent. We are looking -forward to your prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Purchasing Directo
19、r. 4 【正确答案】 To: Training Director From: Date: 26.11.2005 Subject: Business training Reasons We have 3 different courses which we could offer our employees. Appraising staff, software Applications and Effective Presentations. Recommendations First of all, every course causes the equal amount of costs
20、. In that reason, I compare which course would be the most effective. Secondly, we need a large number of staff who want to take part in the recommended course. I suggest, we offer the software Applications course, because this is the fast increasing area in our business and everybody should be inte
21、rested in the new technology. In the daily business I realise how fast the technology is changing. In addition to that course, our board of directors may visit the course for presentations skills. They would have benefits because they are often in public and have to know how to communicate to the cl
22、ients. Furthermore, the course for Appraising Staff will not be offered. Our surveys have shown that the relationship between employees has been perfect. Possible drawbacks It may have a number of staff who prefers to work instead of visite a course. In that reason, I would offer the courses by e-mail and the members may register or not, what means that the candidates who are coming, are motivated to reach their personaly goals.
