1、专业英语八级写作-14及答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：1，分数：100.00)1.Directions: Some Chinese top athletes including some world champions chose to pursue their career abroad after retiring from national teams. This has provoked quite some controversy. Some people have strong objections to the out flow
2、of these players, believing it has minimized the advantages China has long had over foreign competitors. Others maintain that these individuals have right to choose their own way of life. Write an essay of about 400 words to express your view on this issue.In the first part of your essay you should
3、state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for conten
4、t, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：100.00）_专业英语八级写作-14答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：1，分数：100.00)1.Directions: Some Chinese top athletes including some world champions chose to pursue their career abroad a
5、fter retiring from national teams. This has provoked quite some controversy. Some people have strong objections to the out flow of these players, believing it has minimized the advantages China has long had over foreign competitors. Others maintain that these individuals have right to choose their o
6、wn way of life. Write an essay of about 400 words to express your view on this issue.In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written
7、to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：100.00）_正确答案：(参考范文1 Serving Abroad: Better Not to G
8、oNowadays some Chinese top athletes including some world champions have chosen to pursue their career abroad after retiring from national team. This has provoked quite a bit of controversy. Some people have strong objections to their behavior, which is believed to have harmed Chinas advantages over
9、foreign competitors. And others maintain that these people possess their own tree will about the decisions of future life. In my opinion, the disadvantages of these phenomena have outweighed the advantages.First of all, the outflow of these outstanding athletes will directly lead to the loss of elit
10、es and techniques, which is very harmful for Chinese sports development. Coaches with ample and enviable experiences are valuable resources for our country. If we cannot keep them, their service for foreign teams will pose significant threats to us. The famous volleyball player and previous coach of
11、 our national team, Lang Ping is a good example in this sense. Around 1999, she left for Italy retirement, and got employed by one of the top clubs there. Since then the performance of that team soared up out of many experts expectation. In 2004 Olympic Games, another example can be found with the A
12、ustralian volleyball team as a dark horse. The brilliant performance of the team was evidently attributable to the two former Chinese coaches.Secondly, everyone should contribute to the prosperity of their home country and top athletes are no exceptions. It is true that they have devoted their child
13、hood and youth to the tedious and strict training and cut-throat competition, yet it is equally true that the continuous development ot sports needs their rich experiences and hard-won skills. Thus there is no reason that they should leave aside the needs of our motherland and serve foreign countrie
14、s.Thirdly, as a side effect of economic development, more and more people have become money-oriented and self-centered. If these outstanding players just go abroad for the pursuit of money, a bad example might be set for younger athletes who lack experience and desire to succeed in the future. Witho
15、ut a reasonable appreciation for sports career, these young people could not live up to expectations of the nation and people and work for continued boom of the countrys sports. Under Chinese system, professional athletes are to a great extent supported by the state. Consequently the patrons are ent
16、itled to have a say for the beneficiarys future plan.In conclusion, I am strongly against the phenomena of athletes outflow. To repay the cultivation and trust from our nation, they should devote themselves into training young athletes.参考范文2 Serving Abroad: Just Go AheadCurrently there is a widespre
17、ad concern over the outflow of some top athletes who have chosen to pursue their career abroad after retiring from national teams. Although many people believe this phenomenon has harmed Chinas advantages over foreign competitors, I doubt whether the argument bears a reasonable examination towards o
18、nes own free will to make decisions about future life. From my point of view, such a move is closely related to ones own choice, which is also beneficial to international exchange and development.First of all, the outflow of these outstanding athletes will stimulate the exchange of techniques with f
19、oreign countries, which is very helpful for Chinese sports development. When coaches who are familiar with domestic training methods go abroad for his career, he will be exposed to new styles and modes of training along with his involvement in local clubs or national teams. Whats more, some coaches
20、with ample experiences, may learn more advanced theories and skills after serving abroad. They will broaden their horizon and bring better techniques to motherland. With special training methods flowing in, it will do good to domestic sports industry.Secondly, serving abroad is good for the individu
21、al career development. Everybody has the right to choose the life style he or she aspires. Some top athletes have retired from national team, which proves that they have contributed their fair, share to the country. We should understand and show respect to their pursuit to better living conditions a
22、nd career development, where the great source of constant self-improvement requires. Where individualism counts, the pressure from competition can help tap ones potential. In foreign countries where the environment is more convenient yet competition more fierce, they are better motivated to take the
23、 initiative to upgrade their knowledge and sharpen their skills. On the contrary, they will soon find themselves out of place of remaining at home after retirement.In conclusion, I show complete appreciation to athletes outflow because the best of foreign cultures can be taken back home to enhance further development of our sports industry. Serving abroad is helpful both to the Chinese sports development and to the athletes individual improvement. The core of issue is that we could provide adequate working and living conditions to attract them back.)解析：
