1、专业英语八级(翻译)-试卷102及答案解析 (总分:12.00,做题时间:90分钟)一、TRANSLATION(总题数:6,分数:12.00)1.PART IV TRANSLATION(分数:2.00)_2.老纪说:“爸爸现在正做饭,哪有工夫陪你玩?等吃完饭一定让你骑个够,撒谎是小狗。”(分数:2.00)_3.都市寸土千金,地价炒得越来越高,今后将更高。拥有一个小小花园的希望,对寻常之辈不啻是一种奢望,一种梦想。 我想,其实谁都有一个小小花园,这便是我们的内心世界。人的智力需要开发,人的内心世界也是需要开发的。人和动物的区别,除了众所周知的诸多方面,恐怕还在于人有内心世界。心不过是人的一个重要
2、脏器,而内心世界是一种景观,它是由外部世界不断地作用于内心渐渐形成的。每个人都无比关注自己及至亲至爱之人心脏的健损,以至于稍有微疾便惶惶不可终日。但并非每个人都关注自己及至亲至爱之人的内心世界的阴晴。(分数:2.00)_4.一个人的生命究竟有多大意义,这有什么标准可以衡量吗?提出一个绝对的标准当然很困难;但是,大体上看一个人对待生命的态度是否严肃认真,看他对待工作、生活的态度如何,也就不难对这个人的存在意义做出适当的估计了。 古来一切有成就的人,都很严肃地对待自己的生命,当他活着一天,总要尽量多工作、多学习,不肯虚度年华,不让时间白白地浪费掉。我国历代的劳动人民以及大政治家、大思想家等等都莫不
3、如此。(分数:2.00)_5.乔羽的歌大家都熟悉。但他另外两大爱好却鲜为人知,那就是钓鱼和喝酒。 晚年的乔羽喜爱垂钓,他说:“有水有鱼的地方大都是有好环境的,好环境便会给人好心情。我认为最好的钓鱼场所不是舒适的、给你准备好饿鱼的垂钓园,而是那极其有吸引力的大自然野外天成的场所。”钓鱼是一项能够陶冶性情的运动,有益于身心健康。乔羽说:“钓鱼可分三个阶段:第一阶段是吃鱼:第二阶段是吃鱼和情趣兼而有之:第三阶段主要是钓趣,面对一池碧水,将忧心的烦恼全都抛在一边,使自己的身心得到充分休息。” .(分数:2.00)_6.中国是世界四大文明古国之一,地大物博,拥有茂密的深林、壮丽的山河、如利剑直插云霄的高
4、峰、雄伟壮丽的瀑布、秀丽的湖泊及富有中华文化光辉的名胜古迹,令世界各国人民神往。但是,更重要的是,中国具有五千多年的历史,遗留下无数的历史文物,包括珍贵珠宝、古迹名胜、宫殿及数不尽的雄伟建筑,令人惊叹不已。这种种原因都促使中国成为许多人梦寐以求的旅游胜地。(分数:2.00)_专业英语八级(翻译)-试卷102答案解析 (总分:12.00,做题时间:90分钟)一、TRANSLATION(总题数:6,分数:12.00)1.PART IV TRANSLATION(分数:2.00)_解析:2.老纪说:“爸爸现在正做饭,哪有工夫陪你玩?等吃完饭一定让你骑个够,撒谎是小狗。”(分数:2.00)_正确答案:(
5、正确答案:Lao Ji replied, Im now preparing dinner. Ill let you ride on me to your hearts content after dinner. Is that okay? If I dont keep my word, Ill be dammed! )解析:解析:“撒谎是小狗”是地道的汉语,翻译时不能直译,应考虑上下文的意思,其中的“撒谎”是指“不守信用,说话不算数”,因此不应译为lie,而是If I dont keep my word。“小狗”也不可直译为Ill be a dog,因为“狗”在英语中的形象与汉语并不对等,汉语
6、中的“狗”是骂人的话,故译文采用了Ill be dammed的意译手法。3.都市寸土千金,地价炒得越来越高,今后将更高。拥有一个小小花园的希望,对寻常之辈不啻是一种奢望,一种梦想。 我想,其实谁都有一个小小花园,这便是我们的内心世界。人的智力需要开发,人的内心世界也是需要开发的。人和动物的区别,除了众所周知的诸多方面,恐怕还在于人有内心世界。心不过是人的一个重要脏器,而内心世界是一种景观,它是由外部世界不断地作用于内心渐渐形成的。每个人都无比关注自己及至亲至爱之人心脏的健损,以至于稍有微疾便惶惶不可终日。但并非每个人都关注自己及至亲至爱之人的内心世界的阴晴。(分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确
7、答案:In my opinion, everyone in fact has a small garden, which is their inner world. Human intelligence needs to be developed, so does the inner world. The difference between men and other animals, in addition to many well-known ones, may also exist in their inner worlds. The heart is merely an import
8、ant organ, but the inner world is a view of life that gradually takes shape under the constant influence of the outside world on ones mentality. Everyone is so concerned about the physical health of his heart and the hearts of his beloved ones that a slight disease would cause great anxiety. But not
9、 everyone is concerned about the brightness or cloudiness of their own inner worlds and those of their beloved ones.)解析:解析:1本文为带有哲学思辨色彩的议论文体,故译文总体上采用一般现在时。 2第1句的“内心世界”译为inner world,“其实”可译成in fact,需要注意的是它所修饰的是“谁都有一个小小的花园”,所以翻译时应注意它的正确位置,可译成everyone in fact has a small garden。 3第2句的“人的内心世界也是需要开发的”用so
10、does结构替代,避免重复。 4第3句的“人和动物”应译成men and other animals,将“人”和“动物”并列比较时,“人”不宜译成people。“众所周知的诸多方面”可译为many well-known ones,简洁地道。 5第5句的“以至于”可译为英语sothat句型;因为此句主要将作为生理学概念的“心脏健康”和作为心理学概念的“心理健康”进行比较,可将“心脏的健损”译成physical health(well being)of his heart;将“内心世界的阴晴”译成the brightness or cloudiness of their own inner wor
11、ld,即精确表达原文的含义,又保留原文的修辞手段,符合原文的文体特征。4.一个人的生命究竟有多大意义,这有什么标准可以衡量吗?提出一个绝对的标准当然很困难;但是,大体上看一个人对待生命的态度是否严肃认真,看他对待工作、生活的态度如何,也就不难对这个人的存在意义做出适当的估计了。 古来一切有成就的人,都很严肃地对待自己的生命,当他活着一天,总要尽量多工作、多学习,不肯虚度年华,不让时间白白地浪费掉。我国历代的劳动人民以及大政治家、大思想家等等都莫不如此。(分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确答案:What is the significance of life? Are there any cri
12、teria for its measurement? Difficult as it is to advance an absolute standard, it is not so hard to form a sound evaluation of the very meaning of a persons existence by roughly judging his attitude towards life and work. Throughout the ages, all people of accomplishment took their lives seriously.
13、As long as they were alive, they devoted themselves to more work and study and would not let a single minute slip by in vain. And the same is true of the common laboring people as well as the great statesmen and thinkers in our country over the centuries.)解析:解析:1第1段为评论性文字,故宜采用一般现在时;第2段追述历史,以古证今,故应转换
14、成过去时。 2第1段第1句的第1个分句虽非一个独立的问句,但若将其单独译为问句,则与第2个分句形成连续发问的效果,发人深思。 3第2段第1句较长,可译为两句。“不肯”可译为would not;“古来”,亦即“古往今来”之意,可译成Throughout the ages或Throughout the history,“严肃地对待”可译成takeseriously。 4第2段第2句的“莫不如此”译为the same is true of。5.乔羽的歌大家都熟悉。但他另外两大爱好却鲜为人知,那就是钓鱼和喝酒。 晚年的乔羽喜爱垂钓,他说:“有水有鱼的地方大都是有好环境的,好环境便会给人好心情。我认为最
15、好的钓鱼场所不是舒适的、给你准备好饿鱼的垂钓园,而是那极其有吸引力的大自然野外天成的场所。”钓鱼是一项能够陶冶性情的运动,有益于身心健康。乔羽说:“钓鱼可分三个阶段:第一阶段是吃鱼:第二阶段是吃鱼和情趣兼而有之:第三阶段主要是钓趣,面对一池碧水,将忧心的烦恼全都抛在一边,使自己的身心得到充分休息。” .(分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确答案:In his later years, Qiao Yu has developed a penchant fondness for fishing. He once remarked that a place with water and fish ar
16、e normally blessed with a nice surrounding, which in return keeps you in a good mood, and I believe the best fishing places are not commercial fishing centers where you are provided with all conveniences with fish kept hungry for easy capture, but those naturally-formed places in the wilderness, whi
17、ch exert a special appeal. According to him, fishing is an activity conducive to the cultivation of good temperament and good physical as well as mental health. He further claims that the pleasure of fishing can be divided into three states: the first consists of mere fish-eating; the second combine
18、s fish-eating with the pleasure (enjoyment) of fishing; while the third consists in the pleasure of fishing alone when, facing a pond of clear water, you put aside all your vexations and annoyances and enioy the complete mental and physical relaxation.)解析:解析:1本文介绍乔羽的垂钓乐趣及他对垂钓乐趣的独到见解,故总体上采用一般现在时。 2第1
19、句的“喜爱”可译为以下短语:become enamored of,be fond of,take to等。“有水有鱼的地方大都是有好环境的”中“大都”可译成normally,“有好环境”可译成be blessed with a good surrounding贴近原文的风格,译出乔羽说话时的感情色彩;这里的“环境”译成surrounding比较贴切,也可译成scenery;“陶冶性情”可译为conducive to the cultivation of good temperament或help refineimprove onestemperament;翻译“身心健康”时应增加good一词,
20、即译成good physical and mental health。6.中国是世界四大文明古国之一,地大物博,拥有茂密的深林、壮丽的山河、如利剑直插云霄的高峰、雄伟壮丽的瀑布、秀丽的湖泊及富有中华文化光辉的名胜古迹,令世界各国人民神往。但是,更重要的是,中国具有五千多年的历史,遗留下无数的历史文物,包括珍贵珠宝、古迹名胜、宫殿及数不尽的雄伟建筑,令人惊叹不已。这种种原因都促使中国成为许多人梦寐以求的旅游胜地。(分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确答案:China is one of the four countries in the world with an ancient civiliza
21、tion. It has a vast territory with such abundant natural resources as dense forests, magnificent waterfalls, majestic and beautiful rivers and lakes, and mountains whose peaks reach high into the skies like so many gargantuan swords. Besides, it contains historic remains of glorious Chinese antiquit
22、y. All these make China a singularly attractive place to tourists around the world. But, most importantly, China is possessed of a history of over five thousand years with innumerable historical relics left over from the long past, such as priceless pearls and jewels, historic sites and scenic spots
23、, palaces and edifices of architectural richness, all of which have won peoples admiration. You are sure to find great enjoyment of all these attractions in China, a much-admired dream land!)解析:解析:1本段总体时态为一般现在时。原文介绍中国人文地理情况,内容比较丰富,翻译时需要尽可能保持原文信息的完整,不可疏漏。 2第2句可先译出句子主干China is possessed of,用介词短语(with引
24、导)修饰a history of over fivethousand years,继而用such as列举innumerable historical relics的具体内容,再以定语从句作结,结构上显得有起伏。 3“具有”用be possessed of译,是书面表达,常用于正式文体中。这里也可选择动词possess或have来翻译。 4“惊叹”按“赢得赞赏”之意译为短语win ones admiration,不宜译成surprise,startle或take ones breathaway。 5考虑到本文需要实现劝说外国人来中国旅游这一功能,最后一句可译为You are sure to find greatenjoyment of all these attractions in China,a much-admired dream land!