1、翻译三级笔译实务-6 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Engli(总题数：1，分数：60.00)1.Acid rain, is a form of air pollution, currently a subject of great controversy because of widespread environmental damage for which it has been blamed. It forms when oxides of sulfur and nitrogen combine with atmospheric moistu
2、re to yield sulfuric and nitric acids, which may then be carded long distances from their source before they are deposited by rain. The pollution many also take the form of snow or fog or be precipitated in dry forms. In fact, although the term “acid rain“ has been in use for more than a century it
3、is derived from atmospheric studies that were made in the region of Manchester, England the more accurate scientific term would be “acid deposition.“ The dry form of such precipitation is just as damaging as the liquid form, especially to trees and structures. Furthermore, some of the pollutants als
4、o associated with acid rain are not themselves acidic. The problem of acid rain may be said to have originated with the Industrial Revolution, and it has been growing ever since. The severity of its effects has long been recognized in local settings, as exemplified by the spells of acid smog in heav
5、ily industrialized areas. The wide destructiveness of acid rain, however, has come to be realized only in recent decades. One large area that has been studied extensively is northern Europe, where acid rain has eroded structures, injured crops and forests, and threatened or depleted life in freshwat
6、er lakes. In 1983, for example, published reports indicated that 34 percent of the forested areas of West Germany had been damaged by acid rain. The northeastern U.S. and eastern Canada have also been affected by this form of pollution, and other areas of the two countries are also showing increasin
7、g signs of damages, as are other regions of the world. Industrial emissions have been blamed as the major cause of acid rain. Because the chemical reactions involved in the production of acid rain in the atmosphere are complex and as yet little understood, industries have tended to challenge such as
8、sessments and to stress the need for further studies; and because of the cost of pollution reduction, governments have tended to support this attitude. Studies released by the U.S. government in the early 1980s, however, strongly implicated industries as the main source of acid rain.（分数：60.00）_二、BSe
9、ction Chine(总题数：1，分数：40.00)2.邓小平是中国改革开放的总设计师。邓小平提出了“建设有中国特色社会主义”的理论；支持在农村实行联产承包责任制，在城市推行打破“大锅饭”的各种经济责任制，建立公有制基础上的社会主义市场经济体制。同时，他倡导改革政治体制，如党政分开，下放权力，发扬民主等。 邓小平主张把改革和开放结合起来，设置经济特区。1979 年 7 月，国务院确定广东、福建两省试办经济特区。1992 年，邓小平视察南方，发表重要讲话，强调要抓住时机，关键是经济发展。 邓小平提出“科技是第一生产力”，提出要尊重知识，尊重人才，发展教育事业。 在解决香港和澳门回归问题上，邓小
10、平提出了用“一国两制”的方针实现祖国统一的构想，取得了成功。（分数：40.00）_翻译三级笔译实务-6 答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Engli(总题数：1，分数：60.00)1.Acid rain, is a form of air pollution, currently a subject of great controversy because of widespread environmental damage for which it has been blamed. It forms when oxides of sulfur and
11、nitrogen combine with atmospheric moisture to yield sulfuric and nitric acids, which may then be carded long distances from their source before they are deposited by rain. The pollution many also take the form of snow or fog or be precipitated in dry forms. In fact, although the term “acid rain“ has
12、 been in use for more than a century it is derived from atmospheric studies that were made in the region of Manchester, England the more accurate scientific term would be “acid deposition.“ The dry form of such precipitation is just as damaging as the liquid form, especially to trees and structures.
13、 Furthermore, some of the pollutants also associated with acid rain are not themselves acidic. The problem of acid rain may be said to have originated with the Industrial Revolution, and it has been growing ever since. The severity of its effects has long been recognized in local settings, as exempl
14、ified by the spells of acid smog in heavily industrialized areas. The wide destructiveness of acid rain, however, has come to be realized only in recent decades. One large area that has been studied extensively is northern Europe, where acid rain has eroded structures, injured crops and forests, and
15、 threatened or depleted life in freshwater lakes. In 1983, for example, published reports indicated that 34 percent of the forested areas of West Germany had been damaged by acid rain. The northeastern U.S. and eastern Canada have also been affected by this form of pollution, and other areas of the
16、two countries are also showing increasing signs of damages, as are other regions of the world. Industrial emissions have been blamed as the major cause of acid rain. Because the chemical reactions involved in the production of acid rain in the atmosphere are complex and as yet little understood, ind
17、ustries have tended to challenge such assessments and to stress the need for further studies; and because of the cost of pollution reduction, governments have tended to support this attitude. Studies released by the U.S. government in the early 1980s, however, strongly implicated industries as the m
18、ain source of acid rain.（分数：60.00）_正确答案：()解析：酸雨是一种空气污染，正引起激烈的争论，因为人们把广泛的环境破坏归咎于酸雨。酸雨是这样形成的：硫和氮的氧化物与空气中的水蒸气相结合而产生硫酸和硝酸，硫酸和硝酸可以在空气中漂浮到距离产生地很远的地方，然后随雨水落下。污染物可能采取雪或雾的形式，也可能以干燥的形式落下。其实，“酸雨”一词虽已用了一个多世纪这个词是从英国曼彻斯特地区进行的大气研究工作中产生的更为精确的科学术语应当是“酸降”。这种以干燥的形式和液体形式落下的东西具有同样的破坏力，对树木和建筑物来说尤其是这样。此外，有些与酸雨有关的污染物本身并无酸性
19、。 酸雨问题可以说起源于工业革命，从那时起就越来越严重。酸雨的严重性，在局部地区早就为人们所认识，工业化程度较高的地区不时出现的酸性烟雾就是明证。然而，酸雨具有广泛的破坏性，只是在近几十年才为人们所认识。曾在一片很大的地区进行广泛的研究，那就是北欧。在那里，酸雨腐蚀了建筑物，损害了农作物和林木，危及甚至已经灭绝了淡水湖泊里的生物。例如，有公开发表的报告说，1983 年西德森林覆盖的地方，有 34受到酸雨的破坏。美国东北部和加拿大东部地区也都受到这种污染，两国的其它地区也有迹象受到日益严重破坏的迹象，世界上其它地区也是这种情况。 人们认为工业废气是产生酸雨的主要原因。由于在大气层形成酸雨所涉及的
20、化学作用是复杂的，而且人们至今知之甚少，工业部门对上述评价一直持有异议，并强调需作进一步的研究。同时由于减轻污染耗资巨大，政府部门也一向支持这种态度。然而美国政府于二十世纪八十年代初发表的研究报告强调指出工业部门是产生酸雨的主要来源。 采分点解析 1acid rain 分析 基本素质采分点。 acid rain 直接按照字面意思译成“酸雨”即可。 2It forms when oxides of sulfur and nitrogen combine with atmospheric moisture to yield sulfuric and nitric acids, which may
21、then be carded long distances from their source before they are deposited by rain. 酸雨是这样形成的：硫和氮的氧化物与空气中的水蒸气相结合而产生硫酸和硝酸，硫酸和硝酸可以在空气中漂浮到距离产生地很远的地方，然后随雨水落下。 分析 理解结构采分点。 原句是个复合句，在翻译成汉语时，采用断句的方法。It forms 可以翻译成“它是这样形成的”，后面接着详细列出。Which 引导的非限定性定语从句可以单独翻译，which 所代的先行词要译出：硫酸和硝酸可以在空气中漂浮到距离产生地很远的地方。从句 before the
22、y are deposited by rain 不翻译成状语从句，连词也不译成“在之前”，这不符合汉语习惯，考虑与句子前半部分的连贯，译成“然后随雨水落下”。在选词上应该注意：不译成 moisture“潮湿，湿度”； source 不译成“根源”；deposit“堆积，沉淀”，指通过雨来进行沉淀，译成“降下酸雨”。 oxides of sulfur and nitrogen 属于基本素质采分点，译成“硫和氮的氧化物”。 Oxide：氧化物。Sulfur：硫磺，Nitrogent：氮。 3The pollution may also take the form of snow or fog or
23、 be precipitated in dry forms. 污染物可能采取雪或雾的形式，也可能以干燥的形式落下。 分析 选词用词采分点。 precipitate 指“沉淀，猛地落下”。这里也是指以干燥的形式降落到地面上。 4Furthermore, some of the pollutants also associated with acid rain are not themselves acidic. 此外，有些与酸雨有关的污染物本身并无酸性。 分析 理解结构采分点。原文的 associated with acid rain 作为 pollutants 的定语，说明此种污染物是与酸雨有
24、关的，在译文中翻成“的”。 5it has been growing ever since 从那时起就越来越严重 分析 理解表达采分点。 grow 一词指的是酸雨逐渐变得厉害，严重，所以，这里不能翻成“变得、增长”，要用“严重”表达为佳。 6The severity of its effects has long been recognized in local settings, as exemplified by the spells of acid smog in heavily industrialized areas. 在局部地区早就为人们所认识，工业化程度较高的地区不时出现的酸性烟
25、雾就是明证。 分析 理解表达采分点。 as exemplified by the spells of acid smog in heavily industrialized areas 可以从后面往前翻译，即工业化程度较高的地区不时出现的酸性烟雾就是明证。setting 指“环境”，但根据上下文，该词实际上指的是“地区，区域”，所以译成“局部地区”。 spells 指“断断续续的，不时的”。 7One large area that has been studied extensively is northern Europe, where acid rain has eroded struc
26、tures, injured crops and forests, and threatened or depleted life in freshwater lakes曾在一片很大的地区进行广泛的研究，那就是北欧。在那里，酸雨腐蚀了建筑物，伤害了农作物和林木，危及甚至已经灭绝了淡水湖泊里的生物。 分析 理解结构采分点。 该句采用断句的方法翻译。前半句为一个 that 引导的定语从句：那被广泛研究的大面积土地；.where acid rain.后面半句是由 where 引导的地点状语从句，说明在北欧这片土地上酸雨所造成的危害。因此翻译的时候要分成两个句子来译。即，that has been s
27、tudied extensively is northern Europe“曾在一片很大的地区进行广泛的研究，那就是北欧”。where acid rain has eroded structures, inured crops and forests. and threatened or depleted life in freshwater lakes 译成“在那里，酸雨腐蚀了建筑物，损害了农作物和林木，有可能危及甚至已经灭绝了淡水湖泊里的生物”。 8.showing increasing signs of damages, as are other regions of the world
28、.也有迹象受到日益严重的破坏，世界上其它地区也是这种情况。 分析 选词用词采分点。 increasing 指“逐渐增多的”。因后面跟的是 signs of damage，因此，“逐渐增多的破坏”即为“破坏日益严重”。 9industrial emissions 工业废气 分析 选词用词采分点。 emission，指(光，热等的)“散发，发射”。这里的“工业散发”应该就是指工业所排放的废弃物。而能够排放到空中导致酸雨产生的废弃物，应该以废气为主，因此，译成“工业废气”为宜。 10Because the chemical reactions involved in the production o
29、f acid rain in the atmosphere are complex and as yet little understood, industries have tended to challenge such assessments and to stress the need for further studies; and because of the cost of pollution reduction, governments have tended to support this attitude, 由于在大气层形成酸雨所涉及的化学作用是复杂的，而且人们至今知之甚少
30、，工业部门对上述评价一直持有异议，并强调需作进一步的研究。同时由于减轻污染耗资巨大，政府部门也一向支持这种态度。 分析 选词用词采分点。 .industries have tended to challenge such assessments and to stress the need for further studies 中的 rand to 和 challenge 一般指“倾向于”；“向挑战”。在本文中tend to challenge such.表达倾向于挑战这些评价时，实际上指的是“不相信或不支持这些评价或怀疑此类评价”，所以可以翻成“对上述评价表示怀疑或持有异议”。 11Stu
31、dies released by the U.S. government in the early 1980s, however, strongly implicated industries as the main source of acid rain. 然而美国政府于二十世纪八十年代初发表的研究报告强调指出工业部门是产生酸雨的主要来源。 分析 选词用词采分点。 release 指“释放，放弃，免除”。在这里根据文意翻译成“发表或发布”更为贴切。二、BSection Chine(总题数：1，分数：40.00)2.邓小平是中国改革开放的总设计师。邓小平提出了“建设有中国特色社会主义”的理论；
32、支持在农村实行联产承包责任制，在城市推行打破“大锅饭”的各种经济责任制，建立公有制基础上的社会主义市场经济体制。同时，他倡导改革政治体制，如党政分开，下放权力，发扬民主等。 邓小平主张把改革和开放结合起来，设置经济特区。1979 年 7 月，国务院确定广东、福建两省试办经济特区。1992 年，邓小平视察南方，发表重要讲话，强调要抓住时机，关键是经济发展。 邓小平提出“科技是第一生产力”，提出要尊重知识，尊重人才，发展教育事业。 在解决香港和澳门回归问题上，邓小平提出了用“一国两制”的方针实现祖国统一的构想，取得了成功。（分数：40.00）_正确答案：()解析：Deng Xiaoping was
33、 the chief architect of Chinas reform and opening-up policies. He put forward the theory of “building socialism with Chinese characteristics,“ supported the implementation of the household responsibility system with remuneration linked to output in the countryside, the introduction of various forms
34、of responsibility system aimed at breaking the practice of everyone eating from the same “big pot,“ and the establishment of a socialist market economy system on the basis of public ownership. At the same time, he advocated reform of the political system, such as by separating the functions of the P
35、arty and the government, delegating power to lower levels, develaping a democratic style of work, etc. He advocated combining reform with opening-up and establishing special economic zones (SEZs). In July 1979 the State Council decided to set up SEZs in Guangdong and Fujian provinces on a trial basi
36、s. In 1992, he made an inspection tour of southern China and issued important instructions, emphasizing that it was necessary to seize the opportunities and take economic development as the key. He pointed out that “science and technology are the primary productive forces,“ and urged that it was nec
37、essary to show respect for knowledge and talented people and develop education. To achieve the reunion of Hong Kong and Macao with the motherland, he put forth the idea for realizing the reunification of the country on the principle of “one country, two systems“. 采分点解析 1邓小平是中国改革开放的总设计师。Deng Xiaoping
38、 was the chief architect of Chinas reform and opening-up policies. 分析 基本素质采分点。 “改革开放政策”是常见的时事词汇。“总设计师”译为 the chief architect。 2邓小平提出了“建设有中国特色社会主义”的理论；支持在农村实行联产承包责任制，在城市推行打破“大锅饭”的各种经济责任制，建立公有制基础上的社会主义市场经济体制。He put forward the theory of “building socialism with Chinese characteristics, “ supported the
39、 implementation of the household responsibility system with remuneration linked to output in the countryside, the introduction of various forms of responsibility system aimed at breaking the practice of everyone eating from the same “big pot,“ and the establishment of a socialist market economy on t
40、he basis of public ownership. 分析 理解结构采分点。 首先了解句子主干，主干是邓小平提出了理论，支持两类责任制，和体制的建立。其中，“建设有中国特色社会主义”，“联产承包责任制”，“大锅饭”都是常用的时事词汇。 31992 年，邓小平视察南方，发表重要讲话，强调要抓住时机，关键是经济发展。 In 1992, he made an inspection tour of southern China and issued important instructions, emphasizing that it was necessary to seize the opportunities and take economic development as the key 分析 理解结构采分点。 原文是几个单句组成的复句，译文将后两个小分句译成现在分词引导的定语，使得句子结构更紧凑。 4科技是第一生产力。Science and technology are the primary productive forces。 分析 基本素质采分点。 “科技是第一生产力”是常见的时事词汇。 5一国两制 one country, two systems 分析 基本素质采分点。 “一国两制”亦是常见的时事词汇。
