1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）-试卷 228及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Network Language following the outline given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1网络语言在日常生活
2、中日益流行 2人们对此看法不一 3我的看法是（分数：2.00）_3.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Sub-health Condition following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1现代社会许多人处于亚健康状况 2分析亚健康现象出现的原因 3摆脱亚健康，应该怎么做（分数：2.00）_4.For this part,
3、you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Outdoor Exercise in Modern Life following the outline given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1现代生活中人们普遍缺乏户外运动 2造成这一现象的原因 3改变这种现状的方法（分数：2.00）_5.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short e
4、ssay entitled On Foreign Language Learning at An Early Age following the outline given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1如今，很多家长让低龄孩子学习外语 2对此现象，人们看法不一 3你的观点是（分数：2.00）_6.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Is A Tutor Necessary?
5、following the outline given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1许多中小学生都请家教 2这种做法有人赞同，有人反对 3我认为（分数：2.00）_大学英语四级改革适用（作文）-试卷 228答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short es
6、say entitled On Network Language following the outline given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1网络语言在日常生活中日益流行 2人们对此看法不一 3我的看法是（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Recently, using network language in daily communication has become very popular among the youth. When talking with ot
7、hers, they tend to use some special words, abbreviations or synonyms which are widely acknowledged in the online community. People hold different opinions towards this phenomenon. Some people agreed that many of the network languages are more vivid and interesting than ordinary ones. Therefore, they
8、 believe that using network language can not only enrich our ways of expression but also entertain us. In contrast, others argue that the network language shouldnt be mixed in daily communication, otherwise the harmony and beauty of standard expressions can be damaged. Moreover, the misuse of networ
9、k language has a bad impact on childrens language learning. As far as I am concerned, it is acceptable to use some network language in oral communication on some informal occasions. However, its much wiser to use standard language in order to show your sincerity and respect on formal occasions.)解析：3
10、.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Sub-health Condition following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1现代社会许多人处于亚健康状况 2分析亚健康现象出现的原因 3摆脱亚健康，应该怎么做（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Experts say that quite a number of peo
11、ple who are 18 to 45 years old are under sub-health condition. They are not suffering from obvious diseases but their physical functions are in a weak state. Why are these people, who are in their golden ages, in sub-health condition? First, people aged between 18 and 45 are so busy with their study
12、 or work that they cant spare enough time for physical exercise. Second, air pollution and water pollution affect our lives so badly that we could hardly maintain a good health. In order to get rid of sub-health, it is of great importance that we do outdoor exercise frequently to remove weariness an
13、d have our body refreshed. Besides, governments should try harder to protect the environment so that people have fresher air to breathe and cleaner water to drink.)解析：4.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Outdoor Exercise in Modern Life following the outline
14、given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1现代生活中人们普遍缺乏户外运动 2造成这一现象的原因 3改变这种现状的方法（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In recent years, it has become a widespread problem that people, especially those who live in cities, dont have enough outdoor exercise. Consequently, more and more p
15、eople are under subhealth condition and they are apt to fall sick. The major reasons for people lacking outdoor exercise can be listed as follows. Firstly, the increased competition in modern society forces people to sacrifice their exercise time for hard work. Secondly, the business and housing bui
16、ldings spring up like mushrooms everywhere; therefore, more and more vacant lands for people to do exercise are occupied. Considering the seriousness of this problem, effective efforts should be made. Most importantly, people should value health more than work so that they could spare more time for
17、physical training. Furthermore, it is necessary that more parks be opened up for free so that people could have a place to go when they need outdoor exercise.)解析：5.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Foreign Language Learning at An Early Age following the out
18、line given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1如今，很多家长让低龄孩子学习外语 2对此现象，人们看法不一 3你的观点是（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In recent years, parents have attached greater importance to their childrens education at an early age than before. Foreign language learning, for its obvious val
19、ue in modern world, has become the first choice. Different opinions can be perceived with regard to this phenomenon. One voice is that the earlier children start to learn a foreign language, the more they can benefit from it for the reason that foreign language learning achieves most at an early age
20、. In contrast, other people argue that foreign language learning deprives children of me time they should spend exploring the world, which is irreplaceable in their growth. For my part, foreign language learning should never be put before children master their mother tongues, for childrens language
21、skill needs to develop enough to accept a different language system.)解析：6.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Is A Tutor Necessary? following the outline given belowYou should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 1许多中小学生都请家教 2这种做法有人赞同，有人反对 3我认为（分数
22、：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Tutors have become more and more popular in recent years. Many parents hire tutors for their children lest their children be left in a disadvantageous position. This phenomenon arouses much controversy. Some think that school education is not enough for children. A tutor can make
23、up for the inadequacy of school education and teach children according to their capabilities. But other people look at this with certain uneasiness. They believe a tutor often adds to childrens study burden rather than improves their study. So far as I am concerned, whether a tutor is necessary or n
24、ot depends on each childs practical situation. There are cases in which children do get much help from tutors. But there are also instances that tutors prove to be more harmful than helpful. Therefore, parents can hire a tutor when their children really need one. However, they should never do so as a result of following suit.)解析：
