1、大学英语四级-写作 2及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on Happiness. You should write at least 120 words but no mor
2、e than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on Tourists Flooding to Tourist Attractions in Swarms. You
3、should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Role Reversal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given b
4、elow. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. 1. Role reversal is increasingly emphasized 2. Why people attach great importance to role reversal 3. I plan to. （分数：20.00）_4.Directions: Suppose your pen friend John from an American university is in a dilemma considering whether to learn Chinese or Japanes
5、e as a foreign language. He writes to you asking your advice. Write him a letter by giving your opinion concerning this matter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Do not sign your own name and the address at the end of your letter. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数
6、：20.00）_5.Directions: Suppose you are chosen to be a two-week exchange student to an American university. Write your pen friend John a letter telling him about this news and your plans and inquiries while you are in America. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Do not sign
7、 your own name and the address at the end of your letter. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_大学英语四级-写作 2答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description
8、 of the picture and then express your views on Happiness. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 HappinessPeople nowadays are attaching great importance to happiness in daily life. Many studies and researches conc
9、erning happiness are conducted home and abroad. As the cartoon shows, actual causal factors for this sense vary from people to people and different people hold different viewpoints towards happiness. Firstly, many adults consider that happiness comes from wealth. The greater amount of wealth such as
10、 luxurious houses and expensive cars they possess the happier they become. Secondly, some regard that happiness is closely connected with love. Their happiness stems from their being wanted and loved. Thirdly, some others link their happiness with their satisfying basic requirements such as possessi
11、ng a position and being paid on time. Many children equal their happiness with less homework. Actually, people attribute their happiness to different aspects according to their concrete situations. As for me, I feel happy when I study and live to the expectations of my beloved ones who live happily,
12、 healthily and comfortably in harmonious atmosphere. I feel happy when I can offer beneficial help to others and make positive contributions to the society. 解析 1第一段是短文话题的介绍段落，考生要直接点明本文要阐述的话题即幸福感，并按照图画所传递的信息说明不同的人处于不同的情况下具有不同的幸福感。 2第二段是短文的重点展开段落，考生可按照本文的主旨分析产生幸福的原因，亦可同本范文一样说明大多数人对幸福感的不同诠释。结合自己的体会和背景、
13、根据漫画所表达的内容、按照一定的逻辑关系、罗列一些最为常见的看法和观点。写作时可以运用我们学习过的一些写作方法如举例法、对比法和因果法等。 3第三段是文章的总结概括段，考生要简明扼要地再次点明自己对阐述话题的态度和看法，说明自己要采取的行动、做出的安排或对未来的展望等。2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express
14、your views on Tourists Flooding to Tourist Attractions in Swarms. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Tourists Flooding to Tourist Attractions in SwarmsA controversial issue for holidays and weekends is the fac
15、t that many people rush to tourist attractions in swarms. Almost all interesting spots can witness stream after stream of people coming in during some vocational and festival days. Some undesirable consequences may result from the explosive crowdedness in these places that almost everyone can feel.
16、Firstly, crowdedness exists everywhere. Traffic jams accompany tourists on roads as well as on those spots. Rather than enjoying themselves in the natural or artistic beauty, tourists spend most time waiting in line. Secondly, tourist attractions are characterized by rubbish and garbage. Some people
17、 tend to behave themselves in an uncivilized manner by throwing unwanted things randomly and sanitation workers are inadequate. Thirdly, chaos may appear here and there because so many people are jostling each other in a crowd wherever they go. To solve the problem of being dirty, noisy, chaotic and
18、 crowded in tourist attractions, governments at all levels should make feasible plans and take effective measures. Individual tourists should make their outgoing activities more rationally. 解析 1第一段是短文话题的介绍段落，考生要直接点明本文要阐述的重点话题，即每逢节假日等旅游旺季，旅游景点人满为患，各种问题如脏乱差等都会突显出来。 2第二段是短文的重点展开和详述段落，考生可按照本文的主旨对旅游景点游客爆
19、棚的原因加以分析，亦可同本范文一样分析和讨论在著名的旅游景区都会有哪些不良现象的出现。写作时要结合自己的背景知识按照一定的逻辑关系，条理清楚地罗列出一些最为普遍而突出的方面，可以利用我们学习过的一些归纳和演绎方法完成这个核心段落的展开。 3第三段是文章的概括总结段，考生要简明扼要地再次点明自己对阐述话题的态度和看法，呼吁政府部门和其他人士采取相应的行动尽快解决出现的问题。短文结束时也可说明自己要下定的决心，对该方面情况未来的发展趋势做出预测等。3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay en
20、titled On Role Reversal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. 1. Role reversal is increasingly emphasized 2. Why people attach great importance to role reversal 3. I plan to. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 On
21、 Role ReversalWe are living in the new era with more elaborate divisions of labor and more specialized fields of trades or professions. To have a better understanding of our environment and to enjoy a more prosperous life, we have no choice but to attend matters and receive others comprehensively, r
22、eversing our views and roles wisely. Why is role reversal repeatedly emphasized today? On the one hand, only by reversing our visual angles can we have an all-round picture of things and people. The story of the blind men trying to size up the elephant teaches us a lot about doing things partially o
23、r lopsidedly. On the other hand, when we put us in others“ boots and see things from different perspectives, we can make decisions and get along with others more appropriately and harmoniously. Much misunderstandings and contradictions come from our not reversing our roles intellectually. Since we h
24、ave to deal with others in our daily life for various reasons, we ought to highlight the importance of role reversal. I will continue to behave myself modestly by respecting and learning from others. 解析 1第一段考生要按照写作提纲的提示，直接说明在高度发达的当今社会，人们越来越重视换个角度看问题的做法，强调换位思考是我们的明智选择。 2第二段考生可以利用涌泉思维法列举各式各样的换位思考的好处，如
25、这样做可以对人物或事件有全面彻底的认识，从而帮助我们在处理人事关系上做到客观公正。在展开讨论时，为了论证自己的观点，考生可以从正反两个方面进行阐述或用具体的例子给予支撑。写作时还可以用到因果法、定义法、对比法和数据法等进行论证说明，增强说服力。 3第三段是短文的概括总结段，考生需要对全文的描写做出言简意赅的定论，再次阐明换位思考的至关重要，升华自己的观点和建议。4.Directions: Suppose your pen friend John from an American university is in a dilemma considering whether to learn Ch
26、inese or Japanese as a foreign language. He writes to you asking your advice. Write him a letter by giving your opinion concerning this matter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Do not sign your own name and the address at the end of your letter. Write your essay on Ans
27、wer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Dear John, I am very glad to hear from you and learn that you are considering learning Chinese or Japanese as a foreign language. Taking all things into consideration, I sincerely advise you to choose Chinese rather than Japanese out of the following reasons. F
28、irstly, Chinese language is more popular than Japanese nowadays both at schools and in the society. Many people choose to learn it for their brighter future as China is developing dramatically and influentially worldwide. Secondly, Chinese is beautiful in both form and pronunciation compared with Ja
29、panese. Numerous Chinese forms with the same Chinese characters are created magically by numerous Chinese artists. Chinese reads and sounds pleasantly musical and rhythmical as we frequently find in oral and written Chinese. Thirdly, Chinese language is more overwhelmingly used in recording human be
30、ings“ cultural relies and scientific development than Japanese historically observed. Above all, people can benefit greatly if they become able Chinese language users. I am always available if you have any problems in learning Chinese. I hope honestly to communicate with you in Chinese in the near f
31、uture. 解析 1第一段考生要简要地点明收到对方来信后自己的心情等信息，并就信中提到的相关问题做出简单的答复，摆明自己的观点，切忌拖泥带水。 2第二段考生可围绕对方提出的核心问题“选择学习汉语还是日语”展开讨论，详细说明自己的看法并给出理由。写作时可采用归纳或演绎等逻辑顺序进行叙述，有理有据来论证自己的观点才能说服和打动对方，劝说对方接受你的建议。论证时一定要观点明确，不能优柔寡断，唯唯诺诺。 3第三段考生可再次总结说明自己的态度，对整个书信重点信息做以概括，预祝朋友在学习上取得进步、生活中万事顺遂等，同时表明自己对友情的重视和为朋友服务的义不容辞。5.Directions: Suppos
32、e you are chosen to be a two-week exchange student to an American university. Write your pen friend John a letter telling him about this news and your plans and inquiries while you are in America. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Do not sign your own name and the addre
33、ss at the end of your letter. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Dear John, I have an exciting piece of news to tell you that I am luckily chosen to visit your university with other five school mates next term. I am writing to seek advice from you about our plan and schedu
34、le. Hoping you can be some help. We will be there for two weeks and we will be fully occupied during the weekdays. Being free for the two-day weekend, we want to know if we can do the following things for the time being. In the first place, we want to watch a real American basketball match in a real
35、 American court. Most of us are basketball fans. Secondly, we want to make a trip to the Stature of Liberty, which is quite popular among us Chinese. Most importantly, we need to buy some souvenirs for our friends and relatives. Can you give us some recommendations and guide us finishing this special task? I am anxious to see you and hope we can have a good time together in your motherland. Best regards for you and your family!
