1、大学英语六级写作-17 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Part Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.You should write an essay entitled The Value of Modesty by commenting on the remark “Modesty is not only an ornament, but also a guard to virtue.“ You can give examples to illustrate your point.写作导航1通过格言来诠释谦虚的价值和意义；2解释为什么谦虚能够带来成
2、功，并以富兰克林为例证；3得出结论，建议大家牢记谦虚，保持虚怀若谷的心态。（分数：20.00）_2.You should write an essay entitled It Pays to Plan by commenting on the saying “It wasnt raining when Noah built the ark.“ You can give examples to illustrate your point.写作导航1通过俗语来诠释计划的重要意义；2解释为什么计划如此重要，并以 CEO来举例说明；3得出结论，建议大家做事情之前都应该制定详细的计划。（分数：20.00
3、）_3.You should write a short essay on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life.写作导航1指出宿舍生活未必和谐；2简要阐述和谐的宿舍生活带来的好处；3从生活方式、处理矛盾等方面阐述如何创造和保持和谐的宿合生活；4进行总结。（分数：20.00）_4.You should write a letter of thanks based on the outline given below in Chinese.在你生病住院期间，同班同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写信来表达你的感激之情，并告知现状。写作导航1对同学的探望表示感
4、谢；2阐述同学的探望对自己带来的帮助；3表明目前自己的现状；4再次表示感谢并落款。（分数：20.00）_5.You should write a short essay on the topic Excess Spending on Campus.写作导航1指出大学生花费过多这一校园现象；2从家庭教育、生活水平、兴趣爱好、校园爱情等方面阐述该现象产生的原因；3提出支持节约、反对浪费的观点。（分数：20.00）_大学英语六级写作-17 答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Part Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.You should write an es
5、say entitled The Value of Modesty by commenting on the remark “Modesty is not only an ornament, but also a guard to virtue.“ You can give examples to illustrate your point.写作导航1通过格言来诠释谦虚的价值和意义；2解释为什么谦虚能够带来成功，并以富兰克林为例证；3得出结论，建议大家牢记谦虚，保持虚怀若谷的心态。（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(The Value of Modesty“Modesty is not only
6、 an ornament, but also a guard to virtue.“ Joseph Addison once said. Modesty not only makes one look beautiful and well-mannered, but also serves as a guarantee to his excellent character. Apparently people may lose their fine qualities if they are not modest.Simple as Addisons remark may sound, it
7、contains abundant life philosophy. Modesty can prompt us to go farther and achieve greater success. Those who are modest will never be content with their current achievements; instead, they will work constantly to accomplish a higher target. Take Benjamin Franklin as an example: He was once a printe
8、r of humble origins, so if he was simply satisfied with small achievements, it would be impossible for him to attain enormous achievements in so many fields such as science, politics and literature.We should always keep in mind the significance of modesty in our life. We need to keep an open mind to
9、 accept new things, absorb new information, acquire new knowledge and seize new opportunities. “Success consists in industry and modesty.“ A philosopher once said.)解析：2.You should write an essay entitled It Pays to Plan by commenting on the saying “It wasnt raining when Noah built the ark.“ You can
10、give examples to illustrate your point.写作导航1通过俗语来诠释计划的重要意义；2解释为什么计划如此重要，并以 CEO来举例说明；3得出结论，建议大家做事情之前都应该制定详细的计划。（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(It Pays to Plan“It wasnt raining when Noah built the ark.“ You must be familiar with the humorous saying. It informs us of the significance of plan since Noah is planning fo
11、r the unexpected weather in the futurehe commences building the ark when its still sunny and peaceful.Why does plan play an indispensable role in our life? Making plan will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more detailed plan we make, the mo
12、re likely we are to make full use of time, enhance our work efficiency, and get fully prepared in advance for unexpected cases. For example, a CEO, the head and decision-maker of a corporation, has to draw up a detailed plan for routine work; otherwise, it would be impossible for him to deal with al
13、l sorts of complicated things smoothly.Accordingly, we should draw up detailed plans before we start to do anything and do things as planned. “He who fails to plan, plans to fail.“ A famous philosopher also once said.)解析：3.You should write a short essay on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life.写作
14、导航1指出宿舍生活未必和谐；2简要阐述和谐的宿舍生活带来的好处；3从生活方式、处理矛盾等方面阐述如何创造和保持和谐的宿合生活；4进行总结。（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(On a Harmonious Dormitory LifeDormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory can be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory li
15、fe is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, you can have a good rest and put your heart into study. On the other hand, you will have a good mood and enjoy being together.There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to
16、 evaluate your lifestyle and try to get rid of your bad habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, youll just have to learn to tolerate each other and coexist. Thirdly, youll have to share with each other and make good friends.In conclusion, you should make every effort t
17、o build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.)解析：4.You should write a letter of thanks based on the outline given below in Chinese.在你生病住院期间，同班同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写信来表达你的感激之情，并告知现状。写作导航1对同学的探望表示感谢；2阐述同学的探望对自己带来的帮助；3表明目前自己的现状；4再次表示感谢并落款。（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(A Letter for Gratitude
18、Dear Classmates,First of all, please allow me to say “Thank you“ to all of you. It is very kind of you to spare your valuable time during the period of final examinations and come to see me.Your visit has brought me much confidence and power to overcome the illness. During the first several days in
19、hospital, I felt quite lonely, anxious and frightened. I was almost collapsed by some pessimistic thoughts. But then you shown up, along with your smiling faces and warm words. Your appearance has made me feel that I am the luckiest person in this wonderful world. Now I regard the illness as nothing
20、 but a chance to harden myself. These days my condition has obviously improved thanks to the careful treatment by the doctors and nurses. I will probably get recovered in a couple of weeks. I hope that I can see you earlier.Again, special thanks go to all of you.Sincerely Yours,Li Ming)解析：5.You shou
21、ld write a short essay on the topic Excess Spending on Campus.写作导航1指出大学生花费过多这一校园现象；2从家庭教育、生活水平、兴趣爱好、校园爱情等方面阐述该现象产生的原因；3提出支持节约、反对浪费的观点。（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Excess Spending on CampusA recent survey indicates that the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college student
22、s have no concept of thrift in their mind at all.The following factors contribute to this excess spending. First of all, as the only child of their families, many students are the apples in their families eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. Some are even spoiled and take spending mone
23、y from their parents for granted. In addition, with the improvement of living standards, parents can also afford higher expenditure of their children. Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which can be quite costly. Finally, campus love is another possible factor causing too much spending.From my point of view, college students should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.)解析：
