1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 94 及答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.Offering Your Seat Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) d
2、escribe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_4.The Goal Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments.（分数：2.00）_5.The Im
3、portance of Diligence Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_6.Save Water Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
4、1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments.（分数：2.00）_7.Energy Crisis Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）
5、_考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 94 答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.Offering Your Seat Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you shoul
6、d 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As can be seen in the picture, a young student is offering his seat to an elderly man on the bus. Around them, a middle-aged man and a young mother with a baby are both smiling at the
7、m. His act wins him the appreciation from the others. In my eyes, this picture actually aims to encourage people to offer seats to those in need. In Chinese tradition, being always ready to help others is a moral act that is highly valued. Thus, offering seats on the bus should also be a voluntary a
8、ct welcomed and appreciated by the society. For those elderly people and pregnant women, they do need more care from us, because if the bus stops suddenly, they are more inclined to fall down and get injured without a seat. Offering a seat for them is actually providing convenience for them and at t
9、he same time it can bring the helper a sense of happiness and satisfaction. In a word, it is advisable to encourage the young to offer their seats to those in need. This is an act that benefits both sides.)解析：解析： 这幅图描绘了公交车上一名年轻学生给老人让座，车上的乘客均微笑表示赞许。可见，该图片倡导人们主动让座。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下： 第一段简要描述清楚图片
10、的内容，指出图片的意图：旨在鼓励大家为有需要的人让座。 第二段展开论述，指出在公共汽车上让座应该是社会所欢迎和赞赏的自愿行为，以老人和孕妇遇上刹车容易摔倒受伤为例，说明让座是利他也是利己的行为。 第三段总结全文：应鼓励人们让座，这对双方都有益。4.The Goal Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comm
11、ents.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In the picture, there are two students. The boy is staring at his exam paper marked 59.5, while the girl is fixing her eyes on her exam paper marked 99.5. They both have the same thought“Just 0.5 point short of my goal“. The intention of the picture is to tell us the impor
12、tance of setting a reasonable goal. The boy is not ambitious compared with the girl, which makes them so different in what they have achieved. Prom my point of view, a reasonable goalthe goal you can attain if you try hardhas two main functions. Firstly, a reasonable goal is like a beacon, which giv
13、es you hope. The girl in the picture is a case in point. She might be a bit frustrated at the exam. Yet, her goal of getting a full mark will encourage her to keep on working hard. Secondly, a reasonable goal is like an engine that drives us forward. If we are all like the unambitious boy in the pic
14、ture, we will end up living a mediocre life, sluggish and lazy. In conclusion, setting an ambitious but reasonable goal will give us hope and strength to live an extraordinary life.)解析：解析： 这幅图片刻画了两名学生面对发回的试卷的情景。两个人离他们的目标都只差 05 分，女孩的目标是满分，而男孩则是及格。写作时可从“设置合理的目标”这一角度加以讨论。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下： 第一段描绘
15、图片，指出图片向读者传递了设立合理目标的重要性。 第二段提出个人看法：合理的目标主要有两方面的作用。其一，目标像灯塔一样，给我们希望。其二，目标就像引擎那样让我们不断前进。 第三段总结全文：远大而合理的目标能给予我们希望与力量，以过上不平凡的生活。5.The Importance of Diligence Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning
16、, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As is vividly shown in the picture, there is a boy, whose head looks like a balloon floating in the air, which symbolizes his extraordinary talents. But he is actually chained to an enormous lead ball, which represents “laziness“. The picture intend
17、s to raise the alarm to those gifted children that talent alone is not enough to guarantee a brilliant future for them. Being industrious is another key factor for success. In my opinion, hard work is like the engine of a car, which gives us sustainable power to move forward. Usually, hard-working p
18、eople are more down-to-earth and are more patient. They would not rush themselves into anything. Instead, they are willing to spend time and energy on what they really care about, and opportunities often favor those who are prepared. For example, my roommates, Jack and Peter, both applied for a posi
19、tion as management trainee in a foreign company. Jack, who had great speech skills, did not prepare a single word for his interview. Peter, who was less confident, spent two weeks researching the information of the company. During the interview, Jack tried to sweet-talk the HR into hiring him, but P
20、eter actually got the job offer because of his insightful understanding of the position. Clearly, hard work, though it takes some time, will reward us amply.)解析：解析： 这幅图片刻画了一名男孩天分极高，但是由于懒惰却无法“腾飞”。可见，不管天分多高，如果不加以努力也难以成才。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下： 第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：光凭天分不足以取得成功，成功还需要勤奋。 第二段提出个人看法：辛勤劳动就像汽车的
21、引擎，给我们前进的动力。举两名室友为例，有天分而疏于准备与无天分而尽心准备，其结果是后者胜于前者。 第三段总结全文：勤奋工作尽管要费些时间，但最终还是会给我们很大的回报6.Save Water Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In the pi
22、cture, four men are gathering under a shower. They are staring at the shower expectantly, but only a drop of water comes out from it. Under the picture, the caption reads: “If you waste water today, you wont have any water for bath in the future.“ The intended message in this picture is that we shou
23、ld cherish water, the valuable resource, which will dry out one day if we do not learn to save it. As a matter of fact, water is as valuable as fossil fuels and other natural resources. Some people might think that water is infinite and could be recycled again and a-gain. Therefore, they never bothe
24、r to think about saving it. Water is, indeed, renewable, but fresh water and clean water are rather limited. For instance, in some African countries, people are inaccessible to fresh water or clean water. They live an inconvenient life and are prone to diseases transmitted by dirty water. If we dont
25、 cherish water, the situation in the picture may occur in the future. To sum up, saving water is of great importance. It is necessary for everyone to economize on water resources.)解析：解析： 这幅图片刻画了 4 个汉子聚集在花洒下等待洗澡水的情况。从图解可知，本图意在提醒读者要学会珍惜用水，不要随意浪费水资源。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下： 第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：如果我们不懂得
26、节俭用水，终有一天，水资源会枯竭。 第二段展开讨论水资源如化石燃料和其他自然资源一样珍贵。例举一些国家和地区仍用不上淡水和干净水，引起读者对水资源分布不均的重视，从而珍惜用水。 第三段总结全文。7.Energy Crisis Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_正确答案
27、：(正确答案： In the picture, a man is driving a car, but the car is not powered by fuel, but a dog. The dog, motivated by a bone hanging in front of it, is running on the top of the car. Underneath the picture, the caption reads: “Gasoline is not available.“ This picture, in its funny yet ironic way, por
28、trays a disheartening scene for us: the energy crisis is looming large, unless we do something to tackle it. I believe its very urgent to solve energy crisis, and two measures can be taken for this goal. First, people should be educated to save energy. Do not take gasoline, gas and electricity for g
29、ranted We should cherish them as if they were about to run out shortly. Second, we should develop new energy resources. For example, we can transform solar energy or wind energy into electric energy that can power cars. To conclude, with these actions, I think we could still drive our cars around in the future, which wont have to be powered by a running dog.)解析：解析： 这幅图片刻画了一只狗在汽车装置上不断奔跑，为主人的汽车提供动力。从图解可以看出，作者的意图是要引起我们对“能源危机”的关注。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下： 第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：除非我们采取措施，否则能源危机将日趋严重。 第二段提出个人看法：采取两方面的措施来应对能源危机。其一，倡导人们节约能源。其二，开发新的能源。 第三段总结全文。
