1、考研英语（写作）-试卷 9 及答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：8，分数：10.00)1.Section III Writing_2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information._3.Your dormitory at the college is neighboring a very busy snack street. You are always woken up in the early
2、hours by all kinds of loud noises outside and it smells bad whenever the windows are open. You suffer a lot from lacking sleep and uncomfortable breathing. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college. 1. You should write about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the
3、letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_4.Write a notice in about 100 words for the library to inform the readers that it“ll close during the Spring Festival. 1. You should write about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. 3. Do not write th
4、e address.（分数：2.00）_5.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information._6.Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You
5、should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_7.Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20
6、points) （分数：2.00）_8.Study the following picture and write an essay in which you should: 1. describe the picture, interpret its meaning; 2. present specified example; 3. conclude the essay with your personal opinion. You should write 160-200 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_考研英
7、语（写作）-试卷 9 答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：8，分数：10.00)1.Section III Writing_解析：2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information._解析：3.Your dormitory at the college is neighboring a very busy snack street. You are always woken up in the earl
8、y hours by all kinds of loud noises outside and it smells bad whenever the windows are open. You suffer a lot from lacking sleep and uncomfortable breathing. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college. 1. You should write about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of th
9、e letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction concerning the present accommodation. The room I live in is overwhelmingly noisy and unpleasantly smelly. All my dissatisfaction is attributed to the sna
10、ck street directly outside my dormitory. For one thing, various noises in the street are always extremely piercing from early morning till midnight. For another, unspeakable smells of tail gases, fuels and rotten foods make me sick frequendy. To handle this tough situation, I hope our school can neg
11、otiate with the snack street for an ideal solution. Moreover, I would be thankful if able to move to another dormitory immediately, preferably far away from the snack street. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei)解析：解析： 投诉信主要用于利益受损或者生活受扰时，旨在表达作者的不满和抗议；但投诉和抱怨只是途径，最终目的是解决问题或补偿损失。因此考生在写投诉信的时候，除了说明投诉对象、投诉原因以及所受影响外
12、，还需要提出建议或者督促对方采取措施，以便解决问题。如此一来，投诉信才能真正发挥效用。本文中的投诉对象、原因及影响在指令要求中均已说明，考生应结合这些信息提出自己的建议和解决方案。虽然是投诉信，但也要做到叙述客观，语气礼貌。 第一段：表明目的，提出投诉。首句点明写信目的投诉住宿问题，并详述问题表现在哪些方面。 第二段：充分延展，阐明缘由。先揭示问题的根源紧邻的餐饮街；再根据指令要求，从噪音和气味两方面论述自己受其困扰。 第三段：提出建议，表明愿望。针对当前问题，提出个人建议；同时表明自己希望更换宿舍的愿望。4.Write a notice in about 100 words for the
13、library to inform the readers that it“ll close during the Spring Festival. 1. You should write about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Notice To provide readers with better service and give full play to the social serv
14、ice function of the library, we plan to close it and upgrade its bibliographic search and management system during the Spring Festival. Because of this, all the servicescard handling, reading, lending and the likewill be suspended within this period and book-return deadline will be postponed accordi
15、ngly. But readers can still visit the official website for inquiry on account that the electronic database will not be affected by the upgrade program. The library will open at regular hours right after the Spring Festival. We apologize for the inconvenience this may cause. XXX Library Dec. 25, 2015
16、)解析：解析： 本篇为通知类应用文，考生需明白，通知本质上也是信函，属于一封公开信，考生可以按照信函的行文结构去写，但是要注意通知类应用文的特殊格式(即标题和落款)。就本篇闭馆通知而言，考生应给出闭馆原因、开馆时间及相关服务调整或变动情况的详细说明。建议采用一段式结构，语气要正式，语言应简洁得体，避免使用太过华丽的词藻。写作中可依如下思路行文： 首先，开门见山，点出通知的主题图书馆闭馆，并说明闭馆的原因。 其次，详细介绍图书馆闭馆期间各项业务调整情况。 最后，告知开馆时间并表示歉意。5.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words base
17、d on the following information._解析：6.Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案
18、： In the above picture, a man encounters a door symbolizing a barrier while moving forward. Here is one eye-catching sentence reading: the so-called barrier will become an opened door in case you could conquer it; otherwise it still is a barrier. This sentence gives a fresh definition of barriers in
19、 life, a definition subtly emphasizing the decisive role an individual plays in overcoming barriers. It“s a normal thing that various difficulties or barriers will arise in our daily life. Because nothing could go smoothly forever, the barrier exists objectively no matter who we are and what we do.
20、However, it is actually a “double-edged sword“either the resistance or the impetus. The key is how to comprehend and utilize it. On the one hand, if we“re not confident and brave enough when running into any barriers, we would question ourselves , even probably giving up our dreams with various excu
21、ses. In consequence, we“re inhibited from moving on. On the other hand, on condition that we take the initiative in conquering it, and then switching it to the driving force, the barrier is not fearful, even growing a powerful impetus. Thorns necessarily exist on the way to success. Only those who c
22、ould change the barrier into effective impetus have opportunities to succeed. Therefore, when we are in difficulties, we should cease concentrating upon difficulties themselves but focus upon solutions instead.)解析：7.Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you
23、should 1. describe the drawing briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： This picture lively depicts a scene: a man stands helplessly in a comer with a paint brush in his right hand and a pain
24、t bucket beside his left foot. Sadly, he found himself unable to retreat out when completing the paint work soon. This is just because he has chosen a wrong direction at the very beginning. How obtuse he is! As is implied in this picture, a correct direction is proven to be the precondition for succ
25、ess. Life is about choosing; therefore it“s really vital to choose a correct direction before actions. If heading in the wrong direction and not being aware of it, we may find that what we have done is of no avail and totally wrong. Take the man in the picture as an example; the larger area he paint
26、s, the farther he departs from success. Conversely, had he taken a wise direction before painting, the outcome would be completely different now. With necessary investigations and corresponding knowledge prior to actions, we“ll choose the right direction and make unremitting efforts towards our goal
27、sthus, success becomes only a matter of time. In conclusion, we should deeply realize that how vital the correct direction is, especially when we are about to take actions.)解析：8.Study the following picture and write an essay in which you should: 1. describe the picture, interpret its meaning; 2. pre
28、sent specified example; 3. conclude the essay with your personal opinion. You should write 160-200 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As is symbolically shown in the picture, it is a lighthouse that guides a ship out of darkness, in which, obviously, the lighthouse i
29、s a symbol of faith while the ship represents life. It goes without saying that faith is to life what a lighthouse is to a ship. Life is a long but one-directional road. Only when the faith is defined, will people acquire the driving force, have a clear objective and build a better future. Here are
30、two typical examples. The world famous musician Beethoven, with the belief in music, never stopped creating music composition even in case of his total deafness, so his Symphony of Fate has endured for more than two centuries. Rather, the founder of classical physics, Newton, began to distance himse
31、lf from the scientific research he firmly pursued once in his later years and finally fell into the abyss of idealism and theism. By this token, one, only with the faith in heart, can overcome various difficulties and reach the final success, or he will lose everything. Life is like a colossal ship sailing on the sea, in which at any moment we will meet storms or reefs, but if we insist on our faith, the ship of life will never sink. In other words, where there is faith, there is a way.)解析：
