1、考研英语（写作）-试卷 55 及答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.The Chinese Science and Technology Papers Being Included in SCI A. Study the charts carefully and write
2、an essay of 160-200 words. B. Your essay should cover these three points: 1) the change of the numbers of the Chinese science and technology papers being included in SCI 2) possible reasons 3) your predictions （分数：2.00）_4.What Is the Electricity Used for? A. Study the chart carefully and write an es
3、say of 160-200 words. B. Your essay should cover these two points: 1) what the electricity is used for 2) possible reasons （分数：2.00）_5.Extracurricular Activities and the Time Spent on Them A. Study the following charts carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. B. Your essay should cover these t
4、hree points: 1) the main extracurricular activities students take part in and the time they spend on them 2) possible reasons 3) your suggestions （分数：2.00）_6.On College Students“ Driving to Campus A. Title: On College Students“ Driving to Campus B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given o
5、pening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Along with their growing prevalence, private cars have penetrated into a wealth of citizens“ lives.“ OUTLINE: 1. Present situation 2. People“s concerns 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_
6、7.On College Graduates“ Starting Their Own Business A. Title: On College Graduates“ Starting Their Own Business B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Nowadays
7、there is a growing tendency for college students to start their own business instead of hunting for a job after graduation.“ OUTLINE: 1. Some college students“ starting their own business after graduation 2. The reasons for this phenomenon 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_考研英语（写作）-试卷 55 答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90
8、分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.The Chinese Science and Technology Papers Being Included in SCI A. Study the charts carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. B. Yo
9、ur essay should cover these three points: 1) the change of the numbers of the Chinese science and technology papers being included in SCI 2) possible reasons 3) your predictions （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As is shown in the chart, the number of Chinese science and technology papers published in SCI journ
10、als has been on the rise. The proportion of Chinese papers against the world total has generally been increased, except for two minor dips in the years of 2005 and 2008. But as the table further shows, the world ranking of the number of Chinese papers has been going up, from 8th in 2001 to 2nd in 20
11、09, and remained in 2nd up to 2011. The impressive research output in science and technology in China, represented by the papers published in SCI journals, might be attributed to the following reasons. First, more research funds have been granted to researchers in universities and institutes, enabli
12、ng them to undertake more scientific research. Second, more and more postgraduate students with Ph.D. degrees have graduated. They become assistants, participants or even chief researchers of many national-level research projects, contributing to publishing more papers. Given this trend and the gove
13、rnment“s increasing input in scientific endeavors, I believe that the number and proportion of Chinese papers published in SCI journals will continue to increase for the next few years.)解析：解析： 柱状图和表格反映了中国科技论文占世界论文总数的比例是上升的，世界排名也是稳步上升。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下： 第一段简要描述图表。 第二段指出该趋势的可能原因：其一，大学和研究所得到更多的
14、研究资助，让他们能从事更多的科学研究。其二，投入研究的人员增加，发表的论文数也会增多。 第三段提出个人预测：从中国政府对科研的投入来看，SCI 收录中国科技论文的数目会不断增加。4.What Is the Electricity Used for? A. Study the chart carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. B. Your essay should cover these two points: 1) what the electricity is used for 2) possible reasons （分数：2.00
15、）_正确答案：(正确答案： As can be seen in the pie chart, a major share, or 52.5%, of the electricity is used for heating rooms and water, followed by that consumed for ovens, kettles, and washing machines (17.5%). The remaining share is taken up equally by the category of “lighting, TV, radio“, and that of “v
16、acuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools“, with each representing 15%. I think two possible reasons might explain this consumption behavior. First, these households might be located in the high-latitude areas, which are prone to be affected by cold and even freezing weather. Consequently, these f
17、amilies have to use more than half of the electricity for heating purpose in order to keep themselves warm. Second, these households are quite modernly equipped, as another half of the electricity is consumed by various household appliances to serve the purposes of cooking food, keeping the house cl
18、ean and entertainment. In final analysis, this pie chart explains that electricity is a vital part of our daily life, which not only meets our basic needs for survival, but also our spiritual needs for relaxation and enjoyment.)解析：解析： 这幅饼形图反映了电力的用途组成。从图中可见，大部分电力用于供暖和家电。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下： 第一段
19、描述图表：电力主要用于房间的供暖和水的加热，其次是用于烤箱、水壶和洗衣机。 第二段指出造成该结构的可能原因：其一，这些家庭可能处于高纬度地区，受寒冷甚至冰寒天气的影响，需要大量的电力供热和供暖。其二，这些家庭所用的设备比较现代化。 第三段总结全文。5.Extracurricular Activities and the Time Spent on Them A. Study the following charts carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. B. Your essay should cover these three poin
20、ts: 1) the main extracurricular activities students take part in and the time they spend on them 2) possible reasons 3) your suggestions （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： The bar chart and the pie chart illustrate the main extracurricular activities students commit themselves to and the time they spend on them.
21、 To be exact, students spend 93 minutes daily on doing homework, which accounts for the biggest share (39%) of their spare time. It is followed by watching TV (46 minutes) and listening to music (34 minutes), representing 19% and 14% respectively. Doing exercise (25 minutes) and using computers (30
22、minutes) account for a mediocre share, representing 10% and 13% , while students only spend 12 minutes (5%) on doing house chores. From this finding, it could be deduced that students are, on the one hand, overwhelmed by the excessive study load, which almost squeezes out their spare time that could
23、 otherwise be spent on taking exercise or helping with their family chores. On the other hand, students seem to know how to overcome or counteract the stress from study. That“s to say, they will relax themselves by watching TV, listening to music and using computer. To improve the existing extracurr
24、icular activities structure, schools and teachers are advised to decrease students“ study load, freeing up more time for them to promote physical health and family bonding.)解析：解析： 柱状图和饼形图反映了学生的主要课余活动及其所占的时间比例。由图可知，学生相当一部分的课余时间用于做作业和看电视。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下： 第一段简要捕述图表。 第二段指出造成该结构的可能原因：学生的学业负担比较大
25、，但是他们懂得抽时间放松 第三段提出个人建议：学校和教师最好能减轻学生的学习负担，给他们腾出更多的时间去锻炼身体并促进家人间的亲密度。6.On College Students“ Driving to Campus A. Title: On College Students“ Driving to Campus B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should star
26、t with the given opening sentence: “Along with their growing prevalence, private cars have penetrated into a wealth of citizens“ lives.“ OUTLINE: 1. Present situation 2. People“s concerns 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Along with their growing prevalence, private cars have penetrated into a weal
27、th of citizens“ lives. Even some college students today drive their own cars to campus. This phenomenon has aroused great social concerns. Many people believe that driving cars to campus may have quite some bad influences on campus. In the first place, students“ soaring ownership of cars may put tre
28、mendous pressure on the limited capacity of campus roads, which were originally designed mostly for walk and bicycles. Additionally, private cars may burden the campus with unnecessary costs of possible environment maintenance, noise control, etc. With more cars on the roads, more concerns are raise
29、d on the security of the students. Finally, once driving private cars becomes a trend among students, it might bring in more peer pressures. Students might unconsciously compare with each other. And those who cannot afford a car might feel inferior or become less confident. From what has been discus
30、sed above, I believe college students“ driving to campus should be forbidden. To be more specific, it will be advisable for the universities to reverse this rising trend among students by setting strict regulations.)解析：解析： 本文是一篇议论文，讨论大学生开车上学的现象。文章内容可安排如下： 第一段概述私家车流行，甚至有大学生开车上学的现象，引出话题 第二段详述大学生开车上学带来
31、的不良影响：给校园有限的空间带来负担，增加校园维护成本并威胁学生人身安全等 第三段提出自己的看法：大学生开车上学这一行为应该被制止。7.On College Graduates“ Starting Their Own Business A. Title: On College Graduates“ Starting Their Own Business B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE
32、below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Nowadays there is a growing tendency for college students to start their own business instead of hunting for a job after graduation.“ OUTLINE: 1. Some college students“ starting their own business after graduation 2. The reasons for this pheno
33、menon 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Nowadays there is a growing tendency for college students to start their own business instead of hunting for a job after graduation. The following reasons may account for this phenomenon First and foremost, college students are faced with an employment market
34、 with fierce competition, which means jobs that are provided are not enough to satisfy everyone. Thus with the growing number of college graduates who are not able to find ideal jobs, they are forced to try setting up their own business. Moreover, some ambitious college students are not satisfied wi
35、th being employed by others. Instead, they try to develop and prove their talents by running their own business. Last but not least, along with the government“s encouragement and support, the media“s reports on business role models have stimulated more college students“ enthusiasm to take this way.
36、In my opinion, it is a good choice for college students to start their own business, since it can improve students“ comprehensive abilities at the utmost. However, it is also a very difficult process, requiring enough fund, firm determination, clear mind, and ability to endure hardship. Therefore, graduates should think“ it over and over again and make full preparation before launching the business.)解析：解析： 本文是一篇议论文，要求对“大学毕业生创业”这一现象进行讨论。文章内容可安排如下：第一段描述大学生自主创业的现象。 第二段分析大学生自主创业的原因：就业市场竞争激烈；一些学生志向远大，不甘于被人雇用：政府的鼓励和支持等等。 第三段提出“我”对大学生创业的看法：大学生创业是个好选择，但必须先深思熟虑。
