1、考研英语写作-(四)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）
2、_2.Directions:Study the following chart carefully and write an essay in which you should1) describe the chart briefly,2) analyze possible reasons for the trend, and3) give your point of view.You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （分数：20.00）_3.Directions:Study the following picture
3、carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) explain its intended meaning and then3) give your point of view.（分数：20.00）_4.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture
4、 briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_5.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) explain the intended meaning and3) give your point of view.（分数：20.00）_考研英语写作-(四)
5、答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1On
6、an early morning, an aged couple is carrying a set of cleaning equipment, led by their grandson, heading for his school. The boy is striding cheerfully, not because he is on duty for his class that day, but because his work will be done by his grandparents, who are following their beloved grandchild
7、 wearily, exhausted with deepening frowns.2This cartoon has reflected a serious social phenomenon that children nowadays tend to be increasingly dependent that they hand over their own responsibilities to their parents or much senior generation like their grandparents.3The major reason for this phen
8、omenon is that most children in China nowadays are the only child in the family. They have been soaked in parental love from birth, and may easily become spoiled or even over-protected. As a result, some of them are even at a loss how to make the bed after entering universities. 4Should they go on l
9、ike this, they would find it most difficult to get themselves involved in an adult society later. Therefore, parents or grandparents, instead of taking things over, had better encourage the children to stand more on their own feet, that is, to grow up mentally as well as physically.)解析：在本幅图片中，一个背着书包
10、的孩子正昂首阔步走在去学校的路上，后面紧跟着背着清洁用品、弯腰驼背、一脸疲惫的两个老人。根据图片及文字标注可知，孩子耍到学校值日打扫卫生，但真正将要做清洁工作的是他身后的祖父祖母。漫画通过对比，反映出一种普遍的社会现象，即“一人上学，全家受累”。根据题目要求，文章可分为三部分：首先简单交代图画内容：接着点明漫画的寓意：现在的孩子不能完全独立，很依赖家人；最后表明自己对此社会现象的看法。 1首段先对图片进行描述，构思出一个合理且完整的故事。图片中是一个背着书包昂首阔步的孩子，后面紧跟着背着清洁用品、一脸疲惫的两个老人。 2用 This cartoon has reflected 句型说明图片反映
11、的社会问题，即孩子们缺乏独立性。 3第三段以The major reason for this phenomenon is that 开头，引出此现象背后的主要原因，即家长的溺爱。最后引申到家长应采取的正确做法。2.Directions:Study the following chart carefully and write an essay in which you should1) describe the chart briefly,2) analyze possible reasons for the trend, and3) give your point of view.You
12、should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1The bar chart shows the number of the applicants for the national entrance examinations for postgraduate schools from 1997 to 2010. With the exception of 2008 and 2009, the corresponding figures display a dominant ascending trend
13、.2The trend reflects that more and more college graduates choose to continue their studies after graduation. 3 Of all the reasons accounting for it, such as the growing popularity of certain fields and the expansion of enrollment, misgivings about unemployment are the primary one.4It is true that fu
14、rther postgraduate education can postpone ones employment to some extent, but it cannot guarantee a better job. The gap between education background and practical skills has long been recognized, so that 5some companies prefer a graduate with three-year work experience to a fresh graduate with Maste
15、r degree but without any on-site practice. 6Moreover, postgraduate education is a choice designed for those who are suitably determined to dedicate themselves to academic researches, the choice not being a universal one. It is quite predictable that more cases of unemployment will arise provided tha
16、t the supply of postgraduates exceeds the demand of the job market. 7All in all, the entrance examinations for postgraduate schools are not the sole way to a better life.)解析：本篇作文主题非常贴近考生的现实生活，考生既可以跳出自己的身份评论当前的考研热现象，也可以从自己参加考研的出发点谈谈感想。图表反映出的现象(考研人数总体而言逐年递增)比较容易描述，本文的重点在于怎样写好现象、分析与评论，只要言之成理，无重大语言错误，皆可
17、获得较理想的得分。 1简单两句话，描述出柱形图表的主要内容。 2点明图表具体反映的事实。 3从各种可能的原因中，分析主要原因。 4It is true that，but起到先抑后扬的效果。 5指出高学历、无工作经验的人未必是用人单位的首选。 6进一步又指出：研究生教育其实更适合那些立志于学术研究、且适合搞学术研究的学生，并不是人人适用。3.Directions:Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should1) describe the picture b
18、riefly,2) explain its intended meaning and then3) give your point of view.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1What the picture shows is very vivid and impressive. Water flows out of the bucket at its shortest board and the chain tends to break at its most vulnerable ring. 2Moreover, just as the words written by an an
19、onymous author, 3it is the same with peoples development, in which the worst aspect of ones character plays a decisive role. 4The philosophy indicated here is that overall quality is determined by weaknesses rather than strengths.Nowadays in China, the rich can afford all the luxuries while the poor
20、 can hardly maintain their living. Children from rich families not only receive education in school, but also have tutors at home. 5In sharp contrast, poor children learn in shabby classrooms if they ever have a chance. However, the poor, like the shortest board of a bucket, determines the overall l
21、evel of a countrys development. If their living standard remains rather low, they may become the vulnerable link of a chain, posing potential threat to social stability.6Therefore, I think, the poor deserves more attention and aid. Governments should not only focus on prosper regions or people, but
22、also realize the poor counts a lot.7Therefore, I sincerely advocate that the government attach more importance to the poor since they may count more than expected.)解析：图片中有一个木桶和一根铁链，水正不断地从木桶中最短的那块木板流出，而铁链在最脆弱的一环发出“我快不行了”的哀号。图片生动地表明：无论事物本身有多牢固，只要出现一处纰漏，都将触一发而动全身，造成严重后果。即使考生无法在第一时间从图中直观地提炼出此要点，也可从图片下方的
23、标注得到提示。根据题目要求，文章结构可以分为三部分：首先对图画内容进行简单捕述，接着点明漫画的寓意，最后表明自己的观点。 1描述图片的典型开头。 2Moreover 这一信号词表明更重要的信息即将出现。 3it is the same with把漫画传递的信息进一步过渡到社会现实中来。 5短语 In sharp contrast 表明前后内容具有对比关系，即对富家子弟及来自贫闲家庭的孩子在受教育的条件方面进行比较。 6用 Therefore，I think就上述现象给出自己的观点。 7Therefore，I sincerely advocate that也是引出观点的典型句型。4.Direct
24、ions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1Thunderstruck with his mouth widely opened, the man cartooned is stunned by the bag he has bo
25、ught on the Internet. What is being hyped up as a genuine bag proves to be a fake and substandard one. 2Such an unhappy experience of online shopping may have already given many of us an unforgettable lesson. The products sent to us seem never in accordance with the presented pictures or the attract
26、ive descriptions on the Internet. 3Are we too vulnerable? Or is online shopping too deceitful?4On the one hand, do not throw away the apple because of its core. Online shopping, thanks to its low-cost storage and the convenient express delivery service, has made it possible that we can complete a de
27、al anytime without going outdoors. The temporary inadequate supervision is in no position to outweigh its convenience. On the other hand, remember that the Internet is never a fairy-tale world but another real world.5As consumers, we are supposed to check a sellers credit, identify inferior products
28、 and choose proper methods of payment on our own. To play safe, wed better shop in those websites of long-established credit standing.)解析：图中一名男性消费者在号称“绝对正版”的某网店订购了一个手提包，待打开寄来的包裹一看竟是假货，当即大吃一惊。图片形象地反映出当前互联网贸易中存在以假乱真、以次充好的现象。根据题目，考生应当首先对图片内容加以阐释，接着表明自己对网上购物的观点。因此，文章结构可以分为：开头解释图片内容，说明消费者在网上购物的过程中上当受骗的现象
29、；第二部分表明观点，说明在网上购物存在弊端，但其优点也不可否认；最后提出个人建议。 1首句以伴随状语开头，生动地描述出了图中消费者的惊讶表情。 3以问题结束第一段，引起思考，自然过渡到下一段。 4第二段层次分明，脉络清晰：首先，在网上购物快捷实惠，优点不容忽视；另一方面，在网上购物也存在弊端。 5最后，作者给出建议：消费者应该尽量选择在信誉高的网站购物。5.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the pict
30、ure briefly,2) explain the intended meaning and3) give your point of view.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1The picture gives a vivid description that the same fish, put into two different-sized aquaria, faces different situations. It is the natural leader dominating all the tiny fish in the small aquarium while it
31、 becomes a follower subordinated to other bigger fishes in the larger water world. 2 Similarly, we are faced with such circumstances in the human society and have ever been in a dilemma whether to stick to the familiar conditions or change to a new or even more undesirable setting.The imaginary figu
32、re Dumbledore in the movie Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets said, 3“It is not our abilities that show what we truly are. It is our choices.“ I partly agree with his opinion. More often than not, our lifestyle is determined by the choices we make accumulatively. However, our abilities are neve
33、r of little influence as said-they direct the choices we may make.4As for me, I would rather choose to be a small fish at first in the bigger pond, where I exert myself to find and develop and practice my abilities. When time ripe, I would build new frontiers-my own little pond which is to develop i
34、nto a wider one with my sustained efforts.)解析：图中有两个鱼缸，同样一条吐着 4 个泡泡的鱼在小鱼缸里个头最大，显得尤为突出；而在大鱼缸里则毫不起眼。漫画通过对比反映出人们时常面临的一个两难选择：究竟是“宁做鸡头不做凤尾”，还是甘当陪衬，换得广阔天地呢?这还得看每个人自己的抉择。根据题目要求，文章结构可以分为三部分：首先简单交代图画内容，描述同一条鱼儿在不同鱼缸里的不同境遇；接着点明漫画的寓意在于，不同的选择会带来不同的人生道路和际遇：最后表明自己的观点和选择。 1描述图片的典型开头。图片中同一条鱼儿在大小两个鱼缸里显示出很大差异。 2用 Similarly“类比”自然地将图片的含义引申到人类社会中。 3用引言对图片含义进行分析，说明许多情况下人们的命运由自己的抉择而定。同时，个人的能力对个人决定有所影响。 4用 As for me,I would rather choose to 来表达自己的观点和选择：先在“大水池”中锻炼自己，然后建立自己的“小水池”，把它发展为“大水池”。
