1、考研英语写作-(一)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions：Youve been working for two years, and now you are planning to study in Sydney University for an MBA degree. Write a letter to their International Students Admission Office to1) introduce yourself briefly, and2) enquir
2、e about enrollment requirements.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_2.Directions：Write a letter to the Office of Property Management of your community,to give your advice on h
3、ow to improve community securityWrite your letter with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming“insteadDo not write the address（分数：20.00）_3.Directions:You have several experiences of buying books from Delta, an online bookstore, but the b
4、ooks were either delayed or damaged or something. Write a letter to the Customer Service of Delta to1) file a complaint, and2) make two or three suggestions.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the a
5、ddress.（分数：20.00）_4.Directions:Youve been told that your best roommate Zhichao in senior high school, who is studying in US now,has been admitted to the Graduate College of Cornell University. Write a letter to congratulate him on it.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign you
6、r own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_5.Directions:You are doing your UCLA application for graduate admission, and you need two reference letters. Please email your former foreign teacher and ask him to write one for you.You should write about
7、 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_考研英语写作-(一)答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions：Youve been working for two years, and now you are planning to study in Sydney U
8、niversity for an MBA degree. Write a letter to their International Students Admission Office to1) introduce yourself briefly, and2) enquire about enrollment requirements.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do no
9、t write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Sir or Madam,1I am writing to enquire about the enrollment requirements for MBA courses in Sydney University.I have two-year working experience as an executive assistant in the marketing department of Unilever China. 2For further personal development, I woul
10、d like to take MBA courses in one of the sufficiently qualified institutes, Sydney University in particular for its well-established reputation. 3May I have the honor of being given the specific information of your requirements of MBA applicants? 4Shall I make contact with you via the Internet in th
11、e first place?5Id appreciate the privilege of a timely reply. I may be reached by the contact information in my resume.Faithfully,Li Ming)解析：作文要求以“李明”的名义写一封询问信。根据题目内容，考生已有 2年工作经验，打算申请就读悉尼大学，特此写信询问相关招录信息。文章措辞应当礼貌谦逊，内容要全面周到。全文结构可以分为：开头点明写信目的；第二部分简要介绍自己的情况，表明申清原因，并询问有关信息；最后确认自己的联系方式，表明希望早日得到回复。 1开头直接点明
12、写信目的是询问信息。 2说明申请 MBA课程的具体原因是为了个人发展。 34询问是否可以获得具体的信息，措辞礼貌而谦虚，然后询问对方的联系方式。 5最后确认自己的联系方式，表明希望能够尽早得到答复。2.Directions：Write a letter to the Office of Property Management of your community,to give your advice on how to improve community securityWrite your letter with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET
13、2Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming“insteadDo not write the address（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Sir or Madam,I greatly appreciate this survey organized by your Office. 1As a resident in this community, I am writing to contribute to the improvement of the community security.I com
14、mute to my downtown company from Monday to Friday. Most of the time, I am not at home. 2Therefore, it would be comforting if outsiders entrance to this community is strictly controlled. 3For example, security guards should ask outsiders to register and issue them with temporary entrance tags.4I hope
15、 my advice would be of any help to your work and I am looking forward to seeing a safer community!Yours sincerely,Li Ming)解析：这是一篇典型的“分析+建议”型作文，要求考生向小区物业管理处写一封信，为如何改善社区治安献计献策文章结构力求清晰明了、重点突出。根据题目要求，信件应当在开头点明写信目的；接着从社区居民的角度为如何改善社区治安提出自己的具体建议；结尾提出希望建议能被采纳，同时对社区治安进行展望。 1As a resident in this community 点明
16、写信人身份，说明建议的重要性。 23用Therefore点明因果关系，以亲身体验表明社区治安的重要性，同时以 For example举例的方式就如何改善社区治安给出建议。 4以 I hope以及 I am looking forward to向收信人表达自己的希望及展望。3.Directions:You have several experiences of buying books from Delta, an online bookstore, but the books were either delayed or damaged or something. Write a letter
17、 to the Customer Service of Delta to1) file a complaint, and2) make two or three suggestions.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Sir or Madam,1I really need your he
18、lp with this. I have been buying books from Delta for nearly 8 years, but recently the books sent to me were either delayed or damaged. 2 As one of your reliable buyers, I am terribly disappointed.3Here are my two suggestions. More options for express delivery should be offered, that is, we customer
19、s can choose the most suitable delivery method ourselves. Sometimes, what we care more is not the fees charged but the time taken. Another suggestion is that you take more effective ways to protect your products, such as filling more sponge in the gaps and using harder wrappers.4Id be more than grat
20、eful ff those unhappy experiences would never happen again. I greatly appreciate your help.Yours faithfully,Li Ming)解析：作文要求考生向某网上书店写一封投诉信，指出购买图书过程中发现的问题，并提出相应建议。文章结构力求清晰明了、重点突出。根据题目要求，信件应当在开头点明写信目的，即阐明购买商品过程中发现的主要问题；接着提出解决问题的具体建议；结尾表达写信人的期待：这样的问题不再发生。并表示感谢。 1以 I really need your help with this开头，直接提
21、醒收信人对某问题的注意。同时，言简意赅地点明投诉的内容。 2As one of your reliable buyers 点明写信人身份，说明问题的重要性。 3第二段主要提出对该书店的建议。第一个建议是提供更多的快递选择：第二，对书籍采取有效的保护方式。 4最后期待上述问题不再发生。最后一句与开头呼应，完整地体现了本篇投诉信的主旨。4.Directions:Youve been told that your best roommate Zhichao in senior high school, who is studying in US now,has been admitted to th
22、e Graduate College of Cornell University. Write a letter to congratulate him on it.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Zhichao,1Congratulations on your being admitt
23、ed to the Graduate College of Cornell University! Are you going further studies in the same field as youve been taking up in the undergraduate years?2It has been nearly four years since we met last time at the graduation ceremony. Will you be back during this summer vacation? You know, Facebook coul
24、d never compare with a face-to-face chat. I still have a vivid recollection of the days when we studied and lived in the same dorm and you were always the best joke-teller.3Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. 4Congratulations and all best wishes for an even more prosperous futur
25、e!Yours truly,Li Ming)解析：这是一封祝贺信。在得知高中最好的室友被国外某大学录取后，向其表示祝贺。信件开头应表明写信的目的；接着阐述对过去的美好回忆以及对室友的惦记；最后再次表示祝贺和祝愿。 1开门见山，以Congratulations on sth.结构点明写信的目的。 2It has been nearly four years since 句型将文章内容过渡到对过去的怀念，使得这一处转折在结构和文意上都很自然。 3Looking forward to doing表达出自己对未来的期待。 4Congratulations and all best wishes for
26、 再次表达了自己的美好祝愿。5.Directions:You are doing your UCLA application for graduate admission, and you need two reference letters. Please email your former foreign teacher and ask him to write one for you.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.
27、Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Sir/Madam,1I am writing with an earnest request to win your support for my UCLA application for graduate admission.2Two recommendation letters are fundamental to the success of my application, and I believe that one from you is def
28、initely to add due weight. It was my great honor to have taken your course for a full semester, and 3it is since your comprehensive introduction of American educational system that I have begun to be enchanted by the dream of studying in UCLA. My further academic exploration would bear little hope w
29、ithout your support.4I am looking forward to your reply. May joy and health be with you all the time.Yours sincerely,Li Ming)解析：这是一篇请求信。要求考生给以前的外教写一封信，请求他为你写一封去美国加州大学洛杉矶分校读研究生的推荐信。根据题目要求，信件应当在开头点明给这位老师写信的目的；接着详细阐明这位老师在你学业生涯中的重要性，即为什么要找这位老师写推荐信；然后在信中表明你迫切需要得到他的帮助；最后以礼貌语结束邮件。 1以 Im writing with an earnest request to win your support开头，直接阐述此次写倩的目的和诚意。 2表达收信人及其推荐信的重要性，add due weight 简短有力地说明收信人的份量。 3强调句 it isthat突出阐明了收信人对写信人学业道路选择上的重要影响，收信人的支持将有莫大的帮助。 4提出希望尽快得到收信人的回复，并向收信人致以最诚挚的问候。
