1、MBA 联考英语-英文写作技巧与分析及答案解析(总分：160.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BPart One Editin(总题数：4，分数：20.00)1.1The greatest of my everyday fears is technology. 2Beginning when I couldnt master bike riding and extending to the present day. 3Fear kept me from learning to operate a jigsaw, start an outboard motor, or even using a
2、simple tape recorder. 4I almost didnt learn to drive a car. 5At age sixteen, Dad lifted the hood of our Chevy and said, All right, youre going to start learning to drive. 6Now, this is the distributor When my eyes glazed over he shouted, “Well, Im not going to bother if youre not interested!“ 7Fortu
3、nately, the friend who later taught me to drive skipped what goes on under the hood . 8My most recent frustration is the 35mm camera. I would love to take professional-quality pictures. 9But all the numbers and dials and meters confuse me. 10As a result, my unused camera is hidden away on a shelf in
4、 my closet, 11Just last week, my sister gives me a beautiful digital watch for my birthday. 12I may have to put it on the shelf with the camerathe alarm keeps going off, and you cant figure out how to stop it.（分数：5.00）_2.1I was six years old when, one day, my dog was struck, by a car while getting r
5、eady for school. 2My mother and I heard the terrifying sound of squealing brakes. 3In a low voice, she said, Oh, my GodBlackie. 4I remember trailing her out the door and seeing a car fill with teenagers and a spreading pool of bright blood on our cobblestoned street. 5To me, it seemed only a matter
6、of seconds until a police car pulled up. 6The officer glanced at the crumpled dog under the car. 7And drew his gun. 8My mother shouted, “No!“ 9She crawled halfway under the car and took the dog, like a sack of flour, out from under the wheels, 10Her housedress was splashed with blood, she cradled th
7、e limp dog in her arms and ordered the officers to drive her to the vets office, 11It was only then that she remembered me, I think. 12She patted my head, was telling me to walk up to school, and reassured me that Blackie would be all right. 13The rest of the story including Blackies slow recovery a
8、nd few more years of life, are fuzzy and vague now. 14But the sights and sounds of those few moments are as vivid to me now as they were twenty-five years ago.（分数：5.00）_3.1Being a waitress is an often underrated job. 2A waitress needs the tact of a diplomat, she must be as organized as a business ex
9、ecutive, and the ability of an acrobat. 3Serving as the link between customers and kitchen, the most demanding diners must be satisfied and the often-temperamental kitchen help must be kept tamed. 4Both groups tend to blame the waitress whenever anything goes wrong. 5Somehow, she is held responsible
10、 by the customer for any delay (even if its the kitchens fault), for an overcooked steak, or for an unavailable dessert. 6While the kitchen automatically blames her for the diners who change their orders or return those burned steaks. 7In addition she must simultaneously keep straight who ordered wh
11、at at each table, who is yelling for the check, and whether the new arrivals want cocktails or not. 8She must be sure empty tables are cleared, everyone has refills of coffee, and no one is scowling because a request for more rolls are going unheard. 9Finally the waitress must travel a hazardous rou
12、te between the busy kitchen and the crowded dining room; she has to dodge a diners leg in the aisle or a swinging kitchen door. 10And you must do this while balancing a tray heaped with steaming platters, 11The hardest task of tile waitress, though, is trying to maintain a decent imitation of a smil
13、e on her facemost of the time.（分数：5.00）_4.1The thirtieth anniversary party of my uncle and aunt was the worst family gathering Ive ever attended. 2On a hot Saturday morning in July, Mom and I drive out into the country to Uncle Teds house. 3It had already rained heavily, and the only place left to p
14、ark was in a muddy field. 4Then, you would not believe the crowd. 5There must have been two hundred people in Uncle Teds small yard, including his five daughters with their husbands and children, all the other relatives, all the neighbors, and the entire congregation of their church. 6Since the grou
15、nd was soaked and light rain was falling. 7Mom and me went under the big rented canopy with everybody else. 8We couldnt move between the tables, and the humidity fogged my glasses. 9After wiping my glasses, I seen that there was a lot of food. 10It was mainly cold chicken and potato and macaroni sal
16、ads, I ate a lot just because there was nothing else to do. 11We were surprised that Uncle Ted and his wife were doing all the work themselves. 12They ran back and forth with trays of food and gathered trash into plastic bags staggering with exhaustion. 13It didnt seem like much of a way to celebrat
17、e. 14Mom was upset that she didnt get to speak with them. 15When we left, I was hot, sticky, and sick to my stomach from overeating. 16But quickly pushed our car out of the mud and got us on the road. 17I have never been happier to leave a party.（分数：5.00）_二、BPart Two Guided(总题数：1，分数：35.00)In this pa
18、rt, you are asked to write an essay or a letter according to the outline given. Your composition should be about 150 words. Remember to write clearly and logically. After writing, please check your composition in terms of the following writing basics: unity, support, coherence, and error free senten
19、ces.（分数：35.00）(1).Significance of Education on TV(1)电视教育为许多人提供了受教育的机会。(2)电视教育起的作用。(3)政府应采取的措施。（分数：5.00）_(2).How to Face Failures(1)每个人都会遇到失败。(2)对于强者，失败是成功之母。(3)我们对失败的态度。（分数：5.00）_(3).How I Overcome My Difficulty in Learning English(1)你在英语学习中有哪些困难?(2)你是如何克服这些困难的?(3)这些方法给你带来的收获。（分数：5.00）_(4).Bicycle-A
20、n Important Means of Transport in China(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及。(2)和汽车的比较。(3)自行车在中国的前途。（分数：5.00）_(5).Sports(1)每一个人都热爱体育运动。(2)不同的人喜爱不同的体育运动。(3)我喜爱的体育运动。（分数：5.00）_(6).The Generation Gap(1)年长者与年轻人之间存在代沟。(2)存在代沟的原因。(3)如何消除代沟。（分数：5.00）_(7).Advantages and Disadvantages Of Home Computers(1)家用电脑的普及。(2)家用电脑的好处。(3)家用
21、电脑带来的问题。（分数：5.00）_三、BPart Three Writ(总题数：21，分数：105.00)5.For this part, you are asked to write a composition of no less than 150 words on “How to Succeed in a Job Interview?” on the outline given in Chinese below： (1)面试在求职过程中的作用 (2)取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是（分数：5.00）_6.For this part, you are a
22、sked to write a composition of at least 150 words with the title “On Success“ according to the following instruction. “When people succeed, it is because of hard work and luck has nothing to do with success.“ Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above. Use specific reasons and examples to exp
23、lain your position.（分数：5.00）_7.For this part, you are asked to write a composition of no less than 150 words on “The Internet and Our Life“ .Use at least one example to support your view point. Remember to write clearly.（分数：5.00）_8.For this part, you are asked to write a composition of no less than
24、150 words on “Computers: Our Electronic Brain”. Use at least one example to support your view point. Remember to write clearly.（分数：5.00）_9.You wall have about thirty minutes to write at least 150 words on this task. Describe one event in your life to date that demonstrates your ability to do well in
25、 business.（分数：5.00）_10.For this part, you are asked to write a composition of no less than 150 words on “Why Pursue a Graduate Degree?“ You can describe your reasons and motivations for pursuing a graduate degree in your chosen program of study. Remember to write clearly.（分数：5.00）_11.You may want to
26、 start your own business and be a boss yourself. What qualities a person needs to possess to be a good boss? Write a short composition of about 150 words with the title “Qualities of a Good Boss“.（分数：5.00）_12.People are never satisfied with what they have. They always want something more or somethin
27、g different. Do you agree or disagree? Use reasons to support your opinion.（分数：5.00）_13.Some people believe that growing up in a large family, with several sisters and brothers, offers more advantages than disadvantages. Other people think that being the only child is more advantageous. Write a shor
28、t composition of about 150 words in which you discuss the advantage and disadvantages of each position. Explain which position you support.（分数：5.00）_14.Some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to be cooperative. Others take the opposite view and say that learning to be competit
29、ive is the best preparation. Write a composition of about 150 words to tell which one you agree and explain why.（分数：5.00）_15.Write a letter of application for the position as Director of a Computer-Aided Learning Center. Try to make the letter interesting and show that you have enthusiasm for the jo
30、b. Also state the qualifications you have for the job and your work experience.（分数：5.00）_16.You will have about thirty minutes to write at least 120 words on this task. As an executive of Home she has to dodge a diners leg in the aisle or a swinging kitchen door. 10And you must do this while balanci
31、ng a tray heaped with steaming platters, 11The hardest task of tile waitress, though, is trying to maintain a decent imitation of a smile on her facemost of the time.（分数：5.00）_正确答案：()解析：Being a waitress is an often underrated job. A waitress needs the tact of a diplomat, the organization of a busine
32、ss executive, and the ability of an acrobat. Serving as the link between customers and kitchen, the waitress must satisfy the most demanding diners and keep the often-temperamental kitchen help tamed. Both groups tend to blame the waitress whenever anything goes wrong. Somehow, she is held responsib
33、le by the customer for any delay (even if its the kitchens fault), for an overcooked steak, or for an unavailable dessert.) At the same time, the kitchen automatically blames her for the diners who change their orders or return those burned steaks. In addition, she must simultaneously keep straight
34、who ordered what at each table, who is yelling for the check, and whether the new arrivals want cocktails or not. She must be sure empty tables are cleared, everyone has refills of coffee, and no one is scowling because a request for more rolls is going unheard. Finally, the waitress must travel a h
35、azardous route between the busy kitchen and tile crowded dining room she has to dodge a diners leg in the aisle or a swinging kitchen door. And she must do this while balancing a tray heaped with steaming platters. The hardest task of the waitress, though, is trying to maintain a decent imitation of
36、 a smile on her facemost of the time4.1The thirtieth anniversary party of my uncle and aunt was the worst family gathering Ive ever attended. 2On a hot Saturday morning in July, Mom and I drive out into the country to Uncle Teds house. 3It had already rained heavily, and the only place left to park
37、was in a muddy field. 4Then, you would not believe the crowd. 5There must have been two hundred people in Uncle Teds small yard, including his five daughters with their husbands and children, all the other relatives, all the neighbors, and the entire congregation of their church. 6Since the ground w
38、as soaked and light rain was falling. 7Mom and me went under the big rented canopy with everybody else. 8We couldnt move between the tables, and the humidity fogged my glasses. 9After wiping my glasses, I seen that there was a lot of food. 10It was mainly cold chicken and potato and macaroni salads,
39、 I ate a lot just because there was nothing else to do. 11We were surprised that Uncle Ted and his wife were doing all the work themselves. 12They ran back and forth with trays of food and gathered trash into plastic bags staggering with exhaustion. 13It didnt seem like much of a way to celebrate. 1
40、4Mom was upset that she didnt get to speak with them. 15When we left, I was hot, sticky, and sick to my stomach from overeating. 16But quickly pushed our car out of the mud and got us on the road. 17I have never been happier to leave a party.（分数：5.00）_正确答案：()解析：The thirtieth anniversary party of my
41、uncle and aunt was the worst family gathering Ive ever attended On a hot Saturday morning in July, Mom and I drove out into the country to Uncle Teds house. It had already rained heavily, and the only place left to park was in a muddy field. Then, I could not believe the crowd. (Pronoun point of vie
42、w corrected.) There must have been two hundred people in uncle Teds small yard, including his five daughters with their husbands and children, all the other relatives, all the neighbors, and the entire congregation of their church. Since the ground was soaked and a light rain was falling, Mom and I went under the big rented canopy with everybody else. We couldnt move between the tables, and the humidity fogged my glasses. After wiping my glasses, I saw that there was a lot of food. It was mainly cold chicken an
