1、英语写作自考题模拟 11及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.The following passage is incomplete with one body paragraph missing. Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words. Make sure that your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided. My Views on Forced Retirement Pol
2、iciesIn China, when a worker reaches his pensionable age, he is forced to retire from his position. This policy reflects the government“s concern for old workers. Obviously, after an exhausting life revolving around his job, a worker is tired out and increasingly shows inflexibility both in mind and
3、 in action. It“s better for him to relax in retirement with all the strains relieved. Continuing to work can only harm his health. Despite its good intentions, I think forced retirement according to age doesn“t make sense. Forcing a person to retire, especially before the due date is a common thing
4、in recent years, which can actually impair his or her emotional and physical health. Retirement marks another turning-point in one“s life. Withdrawal from employment to complete domesticity has a profound impact on them. Apart from exerting financial pressures, it brings enormous psychological troub
5、les. For a worker, retirement is associated with the anticipated deprivation of his participation in work which provides him most of happiness and contentment. Even his initial “honeymoon“ period is overshadowed by the annoying prospect of being put on the scrap heap. This kind of psychological prob
6、lems, which is brought about by forced retirement, often leads to quick deterioration of the retiree“s health. To break the monotony of life in retirement, many retired people seek alternative sources of satisfaction or income that employment or other friendship based activities such as playing game
7、s and helping maintain traffic can provide. Then why cannot they continue to work in their familiar fields since they are looking for alternative outlets for their energies? （分数：20.00）_2.Read the following passage carefully and compose a “top outline“ for it. Women“s Liberation in AmericaSince the m
8、iddle of the 20th century, American women have been seeking greater independence. No longer content with their traditional roles as housewives, women have joined together to create the “Women“s Liberation Movement“. The basic causes can be traced to three events: the development of effective birth c
9、ontrol methods, the invention of appliances for the home, and the advent of World War . The first cause was the development of effective birth control methods, freeing women from the endless cycle of childbearing. As a result of having a choice as to if and when to have children, women acquired the
10、freedom and the time to pursue interests outside the home. The second event was the development of labor-saving appliances for the home, resulting in more leisure time and freedom for women. For example, fifty years ago, a housewife spent an average of twelve to fourteen hours per day doing housewor
11、k. Due to the invention of machines such as vacuum cleaners, washers and driers, dishwashers and microwave ovens, a housewife can now take care of her daily chores in about five hours. The third event that stimulated the liberation of women was World War 11. During the war, most men were in the mili
12、tary. Consequently, women had to fill the vacancies in the labor force. Women by the thousands went to work in factories and businesses. This was a great change for the majority of American women, and they discovered that they could produce airplanes and manage a business as well as change diapers a
13、nd bake cookies. These three events planted the seeds of a great change in society. The effects of this change are being felt at all levels; in the family, in business and in the government. One of the biggest effects of the greater independence of women is being felt in the home. Because so many wo
14、men are working, men are learning to share the household tasks of cooking, cleaning and even caring for children. In some families, husbands now stay at home while the wife earns the family income. It should be pointed out, however, that this is the exception, not the rule. In most families in the U
15、.S. the husband still earns most of the money, and the wife still does most of the housework. The effects of women“s liberation are also being felt on the job. More and more women are working, and they are demanding equal salaries and equally responsible positions. Many businesses encourage women to
16、 advance to management level, and every year, the nation“s schools produce more women doctors, lawyers and accountants. Politics and government are still other areas that are feeling the effects of the women“s movement. Although the U.S. does not appear ready to accept a woman president, as some cou
17、ntries of the world have, women are being elected to public office in increasing numbers. The U.S. currently has three women governors, which is the highest office in the state. In 1984, a woman was a vice-presidential candidate. A few years earlier, this would have been unthinkable. In conclusion,
18、women in the U.S. are acquiring greater independence which is causing sweeping changes in society. While some men may not be happy with this, they should remember that it was they, the men, who created the conditions leading to the liberation of women: men made war, male scientists developed birth c
19、ontrol, and businessmen earned a lot of money selling vacuum cleaners and dishwashers. （分数：20.00）_3.Children are always fascinated about fairy tales. Write a short expositive essay (about 300 words) examining the effects of fairy tales on children. （分数：60.00）_英语写作自考题模拟 11答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.
20、The following passage is incomplete with one body paragraph missing. Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words. Make sure that your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided. My Views on Forced Retirement PoliciesIn China, when a worker reaches his
21、pensionable age, he is forced to retire from his position. This policy reflects the government“s concern for old workers. Obviously, after an exhausting life revolving around his job, a worker is tired out and increasingly shows inflexibility both in mind and in action. It“s better for him to relax
22、in retirement with all the strains relieved. Continuing to work can only harm his health. Despite its good intentions, I think forced retirement according to age doesn“t make sense. Forcing a person to retire, especially before the due date is a common thing in recent years, which can actually impai
23、r his or her emotional and physical health. Retirement marks another turning-point in one“s life. Withdrawal from employment to complete domesticity has a profound impact on them. Apart from exerting financial pressures, it brings enormous psychological troubles. For a worker, retirement is associat
24、ed with the anticipated deprivation of his participation in work which provides him most of happiness and contentment. Even his initial “honeymoon“ period is overshadowed by the annoying prospect of being put on the scrap heap. This kind of psychological problems, which is brought about by forced re
25、tirement, often leads to quick deterioration of the retiree“s health. To break the monotony of life in retirement, many retired people seek alternative sources of satisfaction or income that employment or other friendship based activities such as playing games and helping maintain traffic can provid
26、e. Then why cannot they continue to work in their familiar fields since they are looking for alternative outlets for their energies? （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：Today Chinese people are living longer than ever before. The average span of life has increased to the age of seventy-five. And research indicates
27、 that workers aged fifty-five to sixty-five perform as well as younger workers in all but heavy physical jobs. Moreover, older workers tend to be more stable, skillful and experienced than younger workers. In many instances they prove to be an economic asset to the drive for modernization of our cou
28、ntry rather than a financial cost to our society. If they continue to work on a part-time basis or in a way their health permits, they can still make great contributions, and more importantly, enjoy their remaining time in a meaningful way. 解析 本题要求补充一个最后的总结性的段落。这篇文章观点明晰，表达了作者在退休问题上的基本观点。 第一段：在中国，当一个
29、人达到一定的年龄时，政府就会要求他退休，这已经成了一项政策。无疑，考虑到老工人的健康问题，让他们退休是有道理的，他们有机会好好地休养一下。但作者认为年龄并不是强制老工人退休的理由。 第二段：强制工人按年龄退休甚至提前退休(在中国很普遍)其实是不利于他们的身体和精神健康的。除了经济上的压力，老工人还面临着精神上的压力。对于一个工人来说，退休意味着自己将退出那个带给自己成就感的岗位，这对身体的打击是很大的。 第三段：退休的人为了避免生活的单调，他们都参加一些能带来额外收入或满足感的活动。如果是这样的，为什么不能让他们继续在自己熟悉的领域中从事他们曾经的工作以释放他们充足的能量呢? 可见，最后一段必
30、须是接着第三段的问题写下去的。那么就应该分析让退休工人在熟悉的工作岗位上继续工作的原因。可以简单地分为这样几种：一是人们的平均寿命现在普遍延长，五六十岁正是人精力相对旺盛的时期，还可以做好自己的工作。二是老工人与年轻人相比，更稳重，技术更熟练，经验更丰富。三是在很多情况下，他们在退休后的工作中也能干出很好的成绩，他们不但不是国家的负担，还能成为建设者。最重要的是，让他们重返工作岗位能使他们以一种有意义的方式度过余生。 下面来组织句子： 1)比以前活得长 live longer than before 2)平均寿命 the average span of life 3)延长寿命 increase
31、/prolong one“s life 人们的平均寿命已经延长到了 75岁。The average span of life has increased to the age of seventy-five. 4)岁的人 people aged.或 people who are.years old 5)和表现得一样好 perform/do as well as 调查表明，55 岁到 65岁的人除了一些体力活以外，可以和年轻人干得一样好。The research indicates that workers aged fifty-five to sixty-five perform as wel
32、l as younger workers in all but heavy physical jobs. 6)tend to有样的趋向 老工人比年轻人更稳重，技术更熟练，经验更丰富。Older workers tend to be more stable, skillful and experienced than younger workers. 7)我国现代化建设的经济力量 an economic asset to the drive for modernization of our country 在很多情况下，他们被证明是我国现代化的经济力量而不是负担。In many instance
33、s they prove to be an economic asset to the drive for modernization of our country rather than a financial cost to our society. 8)作出巨大的贡献 make great contribution 如果他们继续做兼职或者在他们身体健康允许的情况下，他们依然会做出巨大的贡献，更重要的是，用一种有意义的方式，度过他们的余生。If they continue to work on a part-time job or in a way their health permits
34、, they can still make great contributions, and more importantly, enjoy their remaining time in a meaningful way.2.Read the following passage carefully and compose a “top outline“ for it. Women“s Liberation in AmericaSince the middle of the 20th century, American women have been seeking greater indep
35、endence. No longer content with their traditional roles as housewives, women have joined together to create the “Women“s Liberation Movement“. The basic causes can be traced to three events: the development of effective birth control methods, the invention of appliances for the home, and the advent
36、of World War . The first cause was the development of effective birth control methods, freeing women from the endless cycle of childbearing. As a result of having a choice as to if and when to have children, women acquired the freedom and the time to pursue interests outside the home. The second eve
37、nt was the development of labor-saving appliances for the home, resulting in more leisure time and freedom for women. For example, fifty years ago, a housewife spent an average of twelve to fourteen hours per day doing housework. Due to the invention of machines such as vacuum cleaners, washers and
38、driers, dishwashers and microwave ovens, a housewife can now take care of her daily chores in about five hours. The third event that stimulated the liberation of women was World War 11. During the war, most men were in the military. Consequently, women had to fill the vacancies in the labor force. W
39、omen by the thousands went to work in factories and businesses. This was a great change for the majority of American women, and they discovered that they could produce airplanes and manage a business as well as change diapers and bake cookies. These three events planted the seeds of a great change i
40、n society. The effects of this change are being felt at all levels; in the family, in business and in the government. One of the biggest effects of the greater independence of women is being felt in the home. Because so many women are working, men are learning to share the household tasks of cooking
41、, cleaning and even caring for children. In some families, husbands now stay at home while the wife earns the family income. It should be pointed out, however, that this is the exception, not the rule. In most families in the U.S. the husband still earns most of the money, and the wife still does mo
42、st of the housework. The effects of women“s liberation are also being felt on the job. More and more women are working, and they are demanding equal salaries and equally responsible positions. Many businesses encourage women to advance to management level, and every year, the nation“s schools produc
43、e more women doctors, lawyers and accountants. Politics and government are still other areas that are feeling the effects of the women“s movement. Although the U.S. does not appear ready to accept a woman president, as some countries of the world have, women are being elected to public office in inc
44、reasing numbers. The U.S. currently has three women governors, which is the highest office in the state. In 1984, a woman was a vice-presidential candidate. A few years earlier, this would have been unthinkable. In conclusion, women in the U.S. are acquiring greater independence which is causing swe
45、eping changes in society. While some men may not be happy with this, they should remember that it was they, the men, who created the conditions leading to the liberation of women: men made war, male scientists developed birth control, and businessmen earned a lot of money selling vacuum cleaners and
46、 dishwashers. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：1. Women seeking greater independence 2. Three causes for women“s liberation A. Development of effective birth-control methods B. Invention of appliances for the home C. The advent of the World War 3. Three effects of women“s liberation A. In the home B. In busines
47、s C. In the government 4. Men creating conditions for women“s liberation 解析 一般来讲，提纲有两种常见类型，即Topic outline和 Sentence outline。前者是指用文中的关键词和短语(Thesis 除外)组成的提纲，而后者则指用主谓结构俱全的句子组成的提纲。比较而言，前者较难把握。 提纲有简有繁，在保证正确的前提下，可以往复杂写，但最简单的提纲要至少写出两层关系，即 main ideas and sub-ideas。 写提纲时的注意事项： 1)有 1必有 2，有 A必有 B，指在提纲的各个层次中不可以
48、只出现唯一的 Main idea或是 Sub-idea。 2)避免在同一提纲当中同时使用句子和短语关键词，即在 Sentence outline中不可以出现作为关键词的短语或单词，反之亦然。 3)切记，提纲中 Thesis的内容永远使用完整的句子来表达，即便是在 Topic outline中，并且，这个句子永远是陈述句，不要用疑问句、感叹句或是祈使句来填充这一位置。 下面就本道题进行详细分析： 这是一篇关于美国解放运动的文章，全文共分 9个自然段。 第一段：自从 20世纪中期以来，美国妇女不再满足于传统的家庭主妇的角色，不断寻求着独立。而引起妇女解放运动的原因主要有三个：有效节育措施的不断完善；家用电器的不断发明；第二次世界大战的爆发。 第二段：随着节育措施的不断完善，妇女有了更多的选择余地，从而使她们有时间做自己感兴趣的事。 第三段：家用电器的不断完善，也使妇女有了更多的闲暇时间。 第四段：第二次世界大战的爆发，大多数男人都上了战场，这时，妇女成了主要的劳动
