1、英语写作自考题-6 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)1. Benefits of Face-to-Face CommunicationFace-to-face communication is the first basic communication method. In the era of information technology, people are now faced with a myriad of communication options. Be it letters, emails, or telephone
2、conversations, none is more effective than face-to-face interaction, because it helps the speaker to convey a complete message, obtain immediate feedback, and build trusting relationship._In addition, face-to-face communication provides immediate feedback. If the message is ambiguous, the speaker ca
3、n clarify it right away. The listener can raise questions if he feels confused. Hence, the speaker can detect and prevent possible misunderstandings or confusion among the listeners. Since all the people involved in the interactive process can easily see each other, their approval, interest, or disr
4、egard can easily be deduced and dealt with. Renowned CEOs, like Bill Gates, attach much importance to face-to-face communication and highly appreciate the timely responses of the staff at business meetings.Lastly, face-to-face communication enhances the relationship between people. Its difficult to
5、build rapport only over emails or through phone calls. It seems that people tend to depend less and less on face-to-face talks to express their gratitude and appreciation, but this form of contact is extremely important for establishing trusting relationship. As an office worker, what would you feel
6、 when your colleagues come up to your desk and congratulate you on the great report you sent or the presentation you made recently? If a team leader calls his team members to the office just to say “thanks“ and pat their backs, the team will be sure to take a liking to him immediately.Even in the mo
7、dern world full of electronic communication devices, face-to-face communication remains the most Powerful human interaction. Without face-to-face communication, information recipients have to interpret an incomplete message, because much of the information gained in communication is derived from non
8、-verbal cues. They have no chance to question the speaker or clarify the information. Moreover, they are unlikely to feel warmth from or build trust on the message deliverer. Therefore, face-to-face interaction cannot be replaced by other forms of communication.（分数：20.00）_二、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)2. The C
9、hange of American Adult illiteracyIn the late 1980s there were an estimated 17 to 21 million illiterate adults in the United States, along with several million more whose ability to was minimal.The problem of extensive adult illiteracy first came to the attention of the United States government duri
10、ng World War I, when as many as 30 percent of the men enrolled into the armed forces were found to be either illiterate or barely able to read. In 1929. more than ten years after the war, President Herbert Hoover created the United States Advisory Committee on National Illiteracy. With the beginning
11、 of the Great Depression the committee ceased to function, and little attention was paid to the problem until well after World War .Since the 1960s adult illiteracy has become a focus of government and private institutional attention. The damage caused by the problem is not only the individual depri
12、vation among those who cannot read. The consequences for society and the economy are enormous. The burden of welfare and unemployment benefits is huge and the costs of lost productivity are even greater. The increasing complexity of the economy and the need for specialized training in so many areas
13、threaten to keep illiterates permanently out of the job market. Illiteracy tends to be passed from one generation to another, since adults who cannot read are unable to help their children learn to read.To combat adult illiteracy President Lyndon Johnson started the Adult Basic Education program in
14、1964. In addition to government assistance, there are hundreds of privately funded programs for teaching adults.Much adult training uses material that students need to know to get job certification. They want to know how to read want ads and how to fill out job applications. There is often no apprec
15、iation of reading for its own sake.（分数：20.00）_三、B(总题数：1，分数：60.00)3.E-mail is an entirely new means of communication, but it gains growing popularity rapidly. Write an essay (about 300 words) expressing your view on it.（分数：60.00）_英语写作自考题-6 答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)1. Benefits of F
16、ace-to-Face CommunicationFace-to-face communication is the first basic communication method. In the era of information technology, people are now faced with a myriad of communication options. Be it letters, emails, or telephone conversations, none is more effective than face-to-face interaction, bec
17、ause it helps the speaker to convey a complete message, obtain immediate feedback, and build trusting relationship._In addition, face-to-face communication provides immediate feedback. If the message is ambiguous, the speaker can clarify it right away. The listener can raise questions if he feels co
18、nfused. Hence, the speaker can detect and prevent possible misunderstandings or confusion among the listeners. Since all the people involved in the interactive process can easily see each other, their approval, interest, or disregard can easily be deduced and dealt with. Renowned CEOs, like Bill Gat
19、es, attach much importance to face-to-face communication and highly appreciate the timely responses of the staff at business meetings.Lastly, face-to-face communication enhances the relationship between people. Its difficult to build rapport only over emails or through phone calls. It seems that peo
20、ple tend to depend less and less on face-to-face talks to express their gratitude and appreciation, but this form of contact is extremely important for establishing trusting relationship. As an office worker, what would you feel when your colleagues come up to your desk and congratulate you on the g
21、reat report you sent or the presentation you made recently? If a team leader calls his team members to the office just to say “thanks“ and pat their backs, the team will be sure to take a liking to him immediately.Even in the modern world full of electronic communication devices, face-to-face commun
22、ication remains the most Powerful human interaction. Without face-to-face communication, information recipients have to interpret an incomplete message, because much of the information gained in communication is derived from non-verbal cues. They have no chance to question the speaker or clarify the
23、 information. Moreover, they are unlikely to feel warmth from or build trust on the message deliverer. Therefore, face-to-face interaction cannot be replaced by other forms of communication.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(To begin with, face-to-face communication affords the speaker the opportunity to deliver his
24、complete message. In a face-to-face interaction, emotions, moods and expressions come forth to the surface, which are not seen or felt from written words or words spoken on the telephone. Through eye contact, facial expressions and body language, the speaker gives the listener a thorough idea of his
25、 point of view. All these factors influence how the same words are received. For example, by leaning forward on his chair, opening his arms and moving his hands in a forceful manner, the speaker can convey interest and leadership.)解析：解析 浏览全文可知，这篇文章为说明文。它可分成三个大的部分：开头段，数个主体段和结论段。开头段是第一段。它由导入语和主题句组成。面对
26、面的交流是人们最基本的沟通方法(这是导入语一)。在信息技术快速发展的时代，人们可以通过各种形式来实现面对面的交流(这是导入语二)，因为只有面对面的交流才能表达完整的信息、获得及 时的反馈并建立双方信任的合作关系。(导出主题句) 第三段：讲到面对面的交流能为我们提供及时的反馈(main idea)。首先，如果信息传递的不准确或者模糊时，讲话者可以立即进行解释。听者如果有疑问，也可以立即进行提问。其中比尔盖茨也曾指出面对面交流的重要性以及在生意上信息反馈的及时性。 第四段：提到面对面的交流也能加强双方的合作关系(main idea)。如今采用面对面沟通的方式来表达感谢的人越来越少了。但是面对面交流
27、是建立双方信任关系的重要方式。第五段：属于结论段，是对全文的总结和概括，是对主题句的强调和深化。 很显然，面对面的交流的第2 个好处在第三段了详尽了阐述，第 3 个好处在第四段作了详尽的阐述。那么可推知第三段应阐述二面对面交流能表达完整的信息。为了保持文章风格的一致，阐述方式可参照第三、四段。二、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)2. The Change of American Adult illiteracyIn the late 1980s there were an estimated 17 to 21 million illiterate adults in the United S
28、tates, along with several million more whose ability to was minimal.The problem of extensive adult illiteracy first came to the attention of the United States government during World War I, when as many as 30 percent of the men enrolled into the armed forces were found to be either illiterate or bar
29、ely able to read. In 1929. more than ten years after the war, President Herbert Hoover created the United States Advisory Committee on National Illiteracy. With the beginning of the Great Depression the committee ceased to function, and little attention was paid to the problem until well after World
30、 War .Since the 1960s adult illiteracy has become a focus of government and private institutional attention. The damage caused by the problem is not only the individual deprivation among those who cannot read. The consequences for society and the economy are enormous. The burden of welfare and unemp
31、loyment benefits is huge and the costs of lost productivity are even greater. The increasing complexity of the economy and the need for specialized training in so many areas threaten to keep illiterates permanently out of the job market. Illiteracy tends to be passed from one generation to another,
32、since adults who cannot read are unable to help their children learn to read.To combat adult illiteracy President Lyndon Johnson started the Adult Basic Education program in 1964. In addition to government assistance, there are hundreds of privately funded programs for teaching adults.Much adult tra
33、ining uses material that students need to know to get job certification. They want to know how to read want ads and how to fill out job applications. There is often no appreciation of reading for its own sake.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(The extension of adult illiteracy A. Having an estimated 1721 million illi
34、terate adults in the U.S. B. Having seven million more with minimal reading ability . The payment attention of the U.S. government to the problem of extensive adult illiteracy A. During WW, the problem of extensive adult illiteracy first being to pay attention 1. 30% of the men enrolled into the arm
35、ed forces with either illiterate or barely able to read 2. The creation of President Herberr Hoovers the United States Advisory Committee on National Illiteracy 3. During the Great Depression, the problem without being paid attention until after WW B. Since the 1960s adult illiteracy having become a
36、 focus of government and private institutions 1. The cause of individual deprivation 2. The cause of enormous social and economic consequences (1)The huge burden of welfare and unemployment (2)The greater costs of lost productivity (3)The tendency of illiteracy to be passed from one generation to an
37、other . Making efforts to combat adult illiteracy A. Starting programs to train the illiterate adults 1. President Lyndon Johnsons the Adult Basic Education Program 2. Making many privately funded programs B. Most training programs using materials for practical use 1. Students getting job certificat
38、ion with the help of materials 2. Students reading want ads and filling out job application with the help of materials 3. Having no materials read for pleasure)解析：解析 此题是列提纲。在总结提纲时，要抽取意思，而不要照搬原文。这篇文章分为 5 个自然段。通读全文，可看出文章分为三层意思。第一自然段为第一层，讲 20 世纪 80 年代晚期美国成年人的文盲人数。二、三两段为第二层，主要讲述美国政府开始对此给予注意。最后两段为一层，描写政府
39、的一些措施。其中，各个层次中间又有自己的结构。 第一自然段很明显分为两个层次： AHaving an estimated 1721 million illiterate adults in the U.S. BHaving seven million more with minimal reading ability 二、三两段各自又可独立划分。虽然总体是关于“The U.S. government paid attention to the problem of extensive adult illiteracy”，但第二段是讲述一战时期此问题刚刚受到重视，第三段是讲 20 世纪 60 年
40、代文盲问题成为政府和私人机构的重点问题。 最后两段也可总结为两部分，叙述具体的政策。第一是一些计划的实施，另外是大多数教育计划运用一些实用材料。通过层层剥笋，文章脉络一目了然。三、B(总题数：1，分数：60.00)3.E-mail is an entirely new means of communication, but it gains growing popularity rapidly. Write an essay (about 300 words) expressing your view on it.（分数：60.00）_正确答案：(Electronic mail, or E-m
41、ail for short, is an entirely new way of communication by means of computers. Being fast, inexpensive, highly efficient and convenient, E-mail is so popular in developed countries that it is difficult o imagine modern life without it. Nowadays, millions of computers all over the world have been conn
42、ected to form a global network called Internet. You can send or receive by E-mail a variety of information and documents such as letters, papers, video and audio files to anyone in over 170 countries in a short time. Moreover, language barriers are not a problem, because Internet software is capable
43、 of translating your mail into whatever language you want. You can also store, delete, edit, compile and search your E-mail or simultaneously send it to different places. And user defined passwords will keep your mail a secret. Most importantly, E-mail helps us overcome space and time limitations in
44、 communication. With the rapid growing popularity of computers and the fast expansion of the information highway, wider and wider applications of Internet E-mail will be developed and E-mail will soon become an indispensable means of communication.)解析：解析 阅读题目可得知，该作文题目是讲电子邮件是一种新型的交流方式，但它的发展势头却迅猛。就有关问题发表一下个人看法。 关于发表个人意见和看法的文章属于议论文的范畴。要考虑议论文的特点和行文结构。要在文章中条理清晰的陈述自己的意见。想要表述自己在电子邮件的新型交流方式这个话题上的看法，需首先在脑海中形成一个大致框架，想要从哪些方面着手。如方便、廉价、高效等特点。在总述之后可以就其各个特点稍微展开论述。最后可就其前景做简要阐述。 考生要从以下几个方面考虑行文结构： 1文章切题，内容充实。 2结构清晰，语言流畅。 3思维清晰，用词准确。 因此，要着重从以上诸多方面下功夫，才能取得良好成绩。
