1、英语写作基础自考题模拟 22及答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.Last year when I was in college, four of my roommates had their computers. (loose sentence) （分数：2.00）_2.He came too late. He did not see the first part of the play. (compound sentence) （分数：2.00）_3.She became a poet. That might have been due to her mother“s i
2、nfluence. (sentence with a subject clause) （分数：2.00）_4.Duke sailed into the dormitory and whistled a popular song. (sentence with a verb-ing phrase) （分数：2.00）_5.He shouted at the top of his lung as he was thrilled by the scene. (sentence with a verb-ed phrase) （分数：2.00）_6.Mike returned from the wood
3、s. His dog followed him closely. (sentence with a verb-ed phrase) （分数：2.00）_7.How to solve the problem? It needs careful discussions. (sentence with a subject clause) （分数：2.00）_8.Foreigners come to another country. They may suffer from culture shock. (complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_9.I had planned to b
4、uy an iPhone. It was too expensive. I bought a Nokia in the end. (compound-complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_10.The robot can monitor the temperature. It can also cut off the power automatically in an emergency. (sentence with parallel structure) （分数：2.00）_11.The rain became heavy. Making it impossible to
5、 continue with the game. （分数：3.00）_12.Opportunities only come to those. Who are always ready for changes. （分数：3.00）_13.There are many activities for you to keep your shape, basketball is one example. （分数：3.00）_14.The farmers had got the land, the laws were changed by them. （分数：3.00）_15.The objective
6、s include reducing the greenhouse gases, increasing greenery coverage and to impose heavier taxes on the enterprises which release untreated waste to rivers. （分数：3.00）_16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below by writing A, B, C or D.（分数：5.00）A.I collect rare books.B.Collecting rare boo
7、ks is more satisfying and more interesting than collecting stamps.C.This book is worth collecting.D.Some of the books I collect come from a friend of mine.17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence. There are at least three major problems in grain production. First, our farmlan
8、d shrinks rapidly because of the construction of factories, apartments, golf courses, shopping malls and graveyards. Moreover, peasants are eager to produce tobacco or flowers to get higher profits. Second, shortages of water often result in poor harvests because the rapid expansion of cities and to
9、wns uses up most of the water resources. In most dry provinces, a mild drought may cause poor or no harvest. Finally, since their life in rural areas is a perpetual struggle against poverty, millions of young peasants rush to cities for easier jobs and leave fertile fields lying wasted. （分数：5.00）_18
10、.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph by writing A, B, C or D. Topic Sentence: _ From Suburbia to the inner city, bicycle sales are booming. Bicycling seems to have an appeal to people of all ages. It has e
11、specially caught on with those who don“t want to get into jogging but who still want to get their bodies in shape. The latest physiological research indicates runners and cyclists have much in common in the results obtained, such as good physical fitness, lean and tightened muscles, an air of exhila
12、ration, pride of accomplishment, and mental alertness. Those who enjoy bicycling say it is simple, inexpensive, easy, natural, and never boring. Those who excel in the art of cycling say the secret is pacethe steady, rhythmic movement of legs. They say it is acquired through practice and once master
13、ed, enables one to consistently cycle farther, longer and more easily, and feel better.（分数：5.00）A.Jogging also has an appeal to people.B.It is not easy to learn the art of cycling.C.One of the newest crazes to hit the modern American public is bicycling.D.Many new crazes hit the modern American publ
14、ic now.19.Next, it greatly boosts the morale of our people. 20. Strong sense of patriotism sweeps China with the force of an avalanche. 21. Why couldn“t she be a modernized China soon? What“s more, the success has laid a firm foundation for Beijing to host the 2008 Olympic Games. 22. The successful
15、stories of the Olympic medallists fuel nationalism. 23. Through TV, people all over the world know more about New China, especially the dramatic progress made in the past two decades. 24. China, a weak nation in sports in the past, has rapidly risen up and become one of the sports giants. 25. Billio
16、ns of Chinese witnessed how the former ugly ducklings became beautiful swans, how common kids became national heroes. 26. Our success in the 27th Olympic Games is far beyond sports. First, the glory greatly enhances the international prestige of China. 25 20 22 （分数：2.00）20.Pearls are gathered by men
17、 known as pearl divers. Actually, these men do not dive. They are lowered by a rope to the bottom of the sea. Many tourists to Japan enjoy shopping for cultured pearls. Pearl gatherers work in pairs, with one remaining at the surface to help the other return from his dive. An experienced pearl diver
18、 can stay down about a minute and a half and can often make as many as thirty dives in one day, and they earn a lot of money from this. （分数：10.00）_21.Write a letter according to the following situation: Your name is Zhao Ming. You are a junior student majoring in biology at Henan University. You are
19、 applying for the position of part-time lab assistant. Write a letter to Dr. Wang Dequan in charge of this matter. In the letter, provide necessary information about yourself: academic background, work experience and so on. (150-200 words) （分数：30.00）_英语写作基础自考题模拟 22答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.Last yea
20、r when I was in college, four of my roommates had their computers. (loose sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Four of my roommates had their computers last year when I was in college.解析 本题考查掉尾句和松句之间的转换，将关键意思“four puters”提前至句首即可。2.He came too late. He did not see the first part of the play. (compound sente
21、nce) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：He came too late, so he did not see the first part of the play.解析 本题考查将句子改写为并列句。题目中两句是因果关系，故可用 so连接构成并列句。3.She became a poet. That might have been due to her mother“s influence. (sentence with a subject clause) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：That she became a poet might have been due t
22、o her mother“s influence.解析 本题考查将句子改写为含主语从句的句子。“that”引导从句可以作主语，故本题可直接在句首添加“That”构成主语从句。4.Duke sailed into the dormitory and whistled a popular song. (sentence with a verb-ing phrase) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Whistling a popular song, Duke sailed into the dormitory.解析 本题考查将句子改写为含动词-ing 短语的句子。“whistled a s
23、ong”是 Duke进入寝室时发生着的动作，故可改为现在分词形式做状语。5.He shouted at the top of his lung as he was thrilled by the scene. (sentence with a verb-ed phrase) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Thrilled by the scene, he shouted at the top of his lung.解析 本题考查将句子改写为含动词-ed 短语的句子。重写方法是将 as引导的从句直接车成过去分词短语“thrilled by the scene”。6.Mike retu
24、rned from the woods. His dog followed him closely. (sentence with a verb-ed phrase) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Mike returned from the woods, followed closely by his dog.解析 本题同样考查含动词-ed短语的句子，只是本题是由两个句子组成。这里可将第二句先转换成被动语态，再去掉主语和谓语，与前句连接构成一个句子。7.How to solve the problem? It needs careful discussions. (sentence
25、 with a subject clause) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：How to solve the problem needs careful discussions.解析 本题考查将句子改写为疑问词短语作主语的句子。原题中简略的问句可以在去掉问号后直接作主语，和“needs careful discussions”构成一个句子。8.Foreigners come to another country. They may suffer from culture shock. (complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：When forei
26、gners come to another country, they may suffer from culture shock.解析 本题考查将句子改写为复合句。题目中第一句句首添加连接词“when”，将首句转换成时间状语从句，与后句一起组成复合句。9.I had planned to buy an iPhone. It was too expensive. I bought a Nokia in the end. (compound-complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Although I had planned to buy an iPhone,
27、 it was too expensive, so I bought a Nokia in the end.解析 本题考查将句子改写为并列复合句。本题也可改为：Although I had planned to buy an iPhone, I bought a Nokia in the end for it was too expensive10.The robot can monitor the temperature. It can also cut off the power automatically in an emergency. (sentence with parallel
28、structure) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：The robot can monitor the temperature and also cut off the power automatically in an emergency.解析 本题考查将句子改写为含平行结构的句子。题目两个句子中动作均由“the robot”发出，故二者可形成平行结构。11.The rain became heavy. Making it impossible to continue with the game. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：The rain became heavy,
29、 making it impossible to continue with the game.解析 本题考查-ing分词引起的破句的修改。此类题可直接将-ing 分词与前面句子连接。12.Opportunities only come to those. Who are always ready for changes. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：Opportunities only come to those who are always ready for changes.解析 本题考查修饰语错置引起的病句。题目中的第二句内容是第一句中 those的定语从句，应紧跟其后而不
30、可单独成句。13.There are many activities for you to keep your shape, basketball is one example. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：There are many activities for you to keep your shape, basketball being one example.解析 本题考查串句的修改。最佳修改方法是将原题后句中“is”改成“being”，使这部分作状语。14.The farmers had got the land, the laws were changed by t
31、hem. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：The farmers had got the land, and the laws were changed by them.解析 本题同样考查串句的修改。可采取增加连接词使前后成为并列句的方法改正。15.The objectives include reducing the greenhouse gases, increasing greenery coverage and to impose heavier taxes on the enterprises which release untreated waste to rivers.
32、（分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：The objectives include reducing the greenhouse gases, increasing greenery coverage and imposing heavier taxes on the enterprises which release untreated waste to the rivers.解析 本题考查错误平行结构的修改。将“to impose”改成“imposing”即可实现正确的平行连接。16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below
33、 by writing A, B, C or D.（分数：5.00）A.I collect rare books.B.Collecting rare books is more satisfying and more interesting than collecting stamps. C.This book is worth collecting.D.Some of the books I collect come from a friend of mine.解析：解析 A 项概括过于宽泛；C、D 两项内容则过于狭窄，故只有 B最合适。17.Read the following parag
34、raph and underline the topic sentence. There are at least three major problems in grain production. First, our farmland shrinks rapidly because of the construction of factories, apartments, golf courses, shopping malls and graveyards. Moreover, peasants are eager to produce tobacco or flowers to get
35、 higher profits. Second, shortages of water often result in poor harvests because the rapid expansion of cities and towns uses up most of the water resources. In most dry provinces, a mild drought may cause poor or no harvest. Finally, since their life in rural areas is a perpetual struggle against
36、poverty, millions of young peasants rush to cities for easier jobs and leave fertile fields lying wasted. （分数：5.00）_正确答案：()解析：There are at least three major problems in grain production. First, our farmland shrinks rapidly because of the construction of factories, apartments, golf courses, shopping
37、malls and graveyards. Moreover, peasants are eager to produce tobacco or flowers to get higher profits. Second, shortages of water often result in poor harvests because the rapid expansion of cities and towns uses up most of the water resources. In most dry provinces, a mild drought may cause poor o
38、r no harvest. Finally, since their life in rural areas is a perpetual struggle against poverty, millions of young peasants rush to cities for easier jobs and leave fertile fields lying wasted. 解析 主题句是一段话中最具有概括性的话语，寻找主题句一定要以理解段落的意思为前提，因为主题句的位置并不是总在句首，还有在句中、句末的情况，所以切勿凭感觉想当然地看问题。做“标出主题句”这类题时，一定要理解句意和句子
39、之间的关系。这道题很简单，因为这段话的层次比较清晰，第一句话是说在谷物生产中有三个主要问题，下面就是对这三个问题的描述：第一个是耕地面积减少，第二个是缺水，第三个是青壮年劳动力进城工作。显而易见第一句话是主题句。18.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph by writing A, B, C or D. Topic Sentence: _ From Suburbia to the inner city, bicycle sales are booming. Bicycling seems to have an appeal to people of all ages. It has especially caught on with those who don“t want to get into jogging but who still want to get their bodies
