1、1高考题型拆分组合练(六) 写作提升规范练.短文改错(2018昆明市第一中学模拟)When I was 5 years old,I started my journey to the world of music.Playing the piano becomes a great source of joy.Now,study alone abroad,I have found other way to enjoy musicperforming in my school band.I remember the very first time when I played in a band.I
2、 practiced a lot.Still,when I sat at the piano,I felt scared and it seemed that I was getting small.My hands went cold when the conductor and other band member stared at me.The string of notes that came out the piano could not be calling a melody.However,that was only the beginning of your challenge
3、s.In my opinion,even though the challenges are difficult for me to get through,but they make both me and the band even strong.书面表达(2018福州市八县/市一中联考)假如你是李华,你朋友 Brian 把他新买的 U 盘(flash drive)借给你用,但是你不小心把它遗失了。现在,请用英文给他写封信,内容包括:1告知 U 盘(flash drive)遗失的事并致歉;2描述遗失经过;3说明暂时无法赔偿及原因;4承诺一定赔偿并请求原谅。注意:1词数 100 左右;2可以
4、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3信的开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数。Dear Brian,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】 When I was 5 years old,I started my journey to the world of music.Playing the piano a great source of joy.Now, alone becomesbecame studystudying2abroad,I have found way to enjoy musicperforming in my school band.otheranotherI r
5、emember the very first time when I played in band.I practiced a athelot.Still,when I sat at the piano,I felt scared and it seemed that I was getting small.My hands went cold when the conductor and other band membermembersstared at me.The string of notes that came out the piano could not be ofa melod
6、y.However,that was only the beginning of challenges.In my callingcalled yourmyopinion,even though the challenges are difficult for me to get through, butthey make both me and the band even .strongstronger【参考范文】Dear Brian,Im sorry to tell you that Ive lost your new flash drive.Now Im expressing my de
7、epest apology for my carelessness.Actually,I put the flash drive in my schoolbag after we met in the library yesterday.But to my sorrow,it was lost on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How sorry and guilty I felt!This morning,I went to buy the same flash drive in some stores but it is too expensive for me.However,I promise that Ill tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month.Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua3