1、1短文改错专题突破练 161(2018河北石家庄教学质量检测)Dear Mom,Im now in the United States,a country so differently from China.Everything is fresh but interesting!I have made some friends there and they are very kind.Still,you know how much I miss you and your cooking.The mere thought of the dishes you prepare makes my mo
2、uth to water.My friends had some strange ways of describing their hungry.For instance,“I can eat a horse!”Its a little confused,hmm?Im also sending you a few record of our daily conversations,from that you can hear real American English.It may be useful to you as English teacher.答案Dear Mom,Im now in
3、 the United States,a country so from China.Everything is fresh interesting!I have made some friends and they are very kind.Still,you know how much I miss you and your cooking.The mere thought of the dishes you prepare makes my mouth water.My friends some strange ways of describing their .For instanc
4、e,“I can eat a horse!”Its a little ,hmm?Im also sending you a few of our daily 2conversations,from you can hear real American English.It may be useful to you as English teacher.2(2018河北石家庄二模)When I was in high school,I wanted to get a scholarship to a university.I liked singing,so I try out for a sc
5、holarship for music.But I failed to get one.I was real upset.I felt like failure.I just kept feeling sorry for me.However,after a few day,I decided not to let one single loss to keep me from doing what I love.But I cheered up and devoted myself to sing again.I think that accepting failure is that we
6、 need to do first before we success eventually.答案When I was in high school,I wanted to get a scholarship to a university.I liked singing,so I out for a scholarship for music.But I failed to get one.I was upset.I felt like failure.I just kept feeling sorry for .However,after a few ,I decided not to l
7、et one single loss keep me from doing what I love.I cheered up and devoted myself to again.I think that accepting failure is we need to do first before we eventually.3I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English.As we are all know,a good learning environment is vital unless we want to st
8、udy English well.Classes teaching in English provide students with good environment. However,there are also some problem with this teaching method. As we hadnt mastered enough English words,sometimes we may find that difficult to follow the teacher.Slow learners may even lose interest on English.Pra
9、ctice makes perfect.To learn English well require a lot of practice. Therefore,I like my English classes to be taught complete in English.答案I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English.As we all know,a good learning environment is vital we want to study English well.Classes in English pr
10、ovide students with good environment. However,there are also some with this 3teaching method. As we mastered enough English words,sometimes we may find difficult to follow the teacher.Slow learners may even lose interest English.Practice makes perfect.To learn English well a lot of practice. Therefo
11、re,I like my English classes to be taught in English.4It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom,the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates,two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate imme
12、diately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father,but he had to leave to home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.答案It was on a warm autumn day that my father an
13、d I into my new high school. After in the classroom, volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates,two of arrived later. I got to know my new immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father,/ buthe had to leave home. I suddenly realized I had grown up a
14、nd that I had to look after and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had begun.5One day,I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend,Lisa. When we were talking on phone,the fire alarm sounded. I ran bac
15、k to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas,opening all the windows,but then went out of the house. In my surprise,two fire engine were outside my house. I was quite 4worry. I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking that it cause
16、d the heavy smoke.答案One day,I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone . I went to answer it immediately. was my close friend,Lisa. When we were talking on phone,the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef burnt. I quickly turned off the ga
17、s, all the windows, then went out of the house. my surprise,two fire were outside my house. I was quite . I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking that caused the heavy smoke.6Dear Jacob,How are you doing?Im writing to invite you to climb Mount Qianshan.You had already been here for a mont
18、h. So we think its the good opportunity for us get familiar with each other.Mount Qianshan has a good reputation for their brilliant scenery in different season. My friends and family is planning to make it at 8 oclock in this Saturday morning at the school gate. We are wondering that it is convenie
19、nt for you. When arrived there,well climb mountains and admire the beautiful scenery in winter.That will certain leave a deep impression on you since everything is covered by snow.Looking forward to your reply.Li Hua答案Dear Jacob,How are you doing?Im writing to invite you to climb Mount Qianshan.You
20、already been here for a month.So we think its good opportunity for usget familiar with each other.Mount Qianshan has a good reputation for brilliant scenery in different . My friends and family planning to make it at 8 oclock this Saturday morning at 5the school gate. We are wondering it is convenie
21、nt for you. When there,well climb mountains and admire the beautiful scenery in winter.That will leave a deep impression on you since everything is covered by snow.Looking forward to your reply.Li Hua7Last winter vacation,my parents and I went back to our hometown,where I spend my childhood. Walking
22、 slow in the quiet small town reminded me of the good old day. I went from street to street,in the search of my childhood footprints. Suddenly,I found me at the gate of the primary school on which I studied for six years. As I entered, I was surprised find that the old classroom building was gone. B
23、ut it was filling with my childhood memories!I felt such sad that tears ran down my cheeks.It was just like the feeling I had while a good friend left me forever.答案Last winter vacation,my parents and I went back to our hometown,where I my childhood. Walking in the quiet small town reminded me of the
24、 good old . I went from street to street,in search of my childhood footprints.Suddenly,I found at the gate of the primary school which I studied for six years. As I entered, I was surprised find that the old classroom building was gone. But it was with my childhood memories!I felt sad that tears ran
25、 down my cheeks.It was just like the feeling I had a good friend left me forever.8This morning,I got an email from the library. It said the book I reserved was ready to be picking up. Because I had always been waiting to read it,so at that moment I was very exciting.Outside the library,I saw the man
26、 driving around the small parking lot,try to find a parking space. He head for the disabled parking space,the only one that was free. He got off his car with a pile of library book to 6return.Seeing that,I offered to return them to him. He thanked me and jumped quick in his car and drove off,keeping
27、 the disabled parking space free for someone needed it.答案This morning,I got an email from the library. It said the book I reserved was ready to be up. Because I had always been waiting to read it, at that moment I was very .Outside the library,I saw man driving around the small parking lot, to find
28、a parking space. He for the disabled parking space,the only one that was free. He got off his car with a pile of library to return.Seeing that,I offered to return them him. He thanked me and jumped in his car and drove off,keeping the disabled parking space free for someone needed it.9In the village
29、 where I grew up,everyone knew an old man,that spent all his time in painting.People that lived in the village used to admiring his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends. Whether he was offered money,he would never take it. He said he painted for a pleasure. He once gave one of his pa
30、intings to my father, who actually wasnt interesting in art. Years later I found at our old house.By that time the old man had died and people had started to recognize his paintings as great work of art,which were worth lots of money.So an art gallery make me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and
31、 I nearly sold it,so then I decided not to. It reminds me of my childhood and of the old man who didnt real want to make money by painting.答案In the village where I grew up,everyone knew an old man, spent all his time in painting.People that lived in the village used to his works and he often gave hi
32、s paintings to his friends. he was offered money,he would never take it. He said he painted for pleasure. He once gave one of his paintings to my father, who actually wasnt in art. Years later I found at our old house.By that time the old man had died and people had started to recognize his painting
33、s as great of art,which were worth lots of money.So an art gallery me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I 7nearly sold it, then I decided not to. It reminds me of my childhood and of the old man who didnt want to make money by painting.10I was working in the garden while I felt so hungry that
34、 I went back to my house where I can get something to eat. My lovely little daughter was holding an apple in every hand. I softly asked her with smile to give me one. She looked up on me for some seconds,and then suddenly took an extreme quick bite at one apple. Then she did the same to the other. I
35、 felt the smile on my face to freeze. I tried hard not to have my disappointments shown.Then she handed one of her biting apples to me and said,“Mummy,here you are.This is the sweetest one.”答案I was working in the garden I felt so hungry that I went back to my house where I get something to eat. My l
36、ovely little daughter was holding an apple in hand. I softly asked her with smile to give me one. She looked up me for some seconds,and then suddenly took an quick bite at one apple. Then she did the same to the other. I felt the smile on my face freeze. I tried hard not to have my shown.Then she handed one of her apples to me and said,“Mummy,here you are.This is the one.”
