1、1经历与感受分析河南近 10 年中考真题书面表达可知,经历与感受类书面表达是高频命题点。2011年的书面表达要求简要描述刘伟的经历及从他的经历中得到的启示;2016 年的书面表达话题为“The biggest personal change Ive ever made“,写作要点中要求谈及变化后有何感受;2017 年的书面表达话题为“I did it!“,写作要点中要求谈及你做完那件事情后的感受。【提分好词】1.cheer up 使高兴,使振作起来2.be excited about.对感到兴奋不已3.look happy 看起来很高兴4.full of energy 充满活力5.look f
2、orward to 期待6.make sb. happy 使某人开心7.to ones joy 让某人高兴的是8.drive sb. crazy/mad 使某人发疯/发狂9.let.down 使失望10.look sad 看起来很难过11.feel disappointed 感到失望12.be worried about.担心13.be angry with sb. 生某人的气14.be mad at sb. 生某人的气【提分好句】21.Id like to talk about the thing that happened today.我想谈谈今天发生的那件事。2.On a sunny/r
3、ainy/cloudy day, I met.on the street.在晴朗的/下雨的/多云的一天,我在街上遇到3.Thank you for everything you have done for me.谢谢你为我所做的一切。4.Without thinking twice,the girl decided to help the old man.这个女孩毫不犹豫地决定帮助这位老人。5.Now I want to share some interesting things with you.现在我想和你分享一些有趣的事情。6.No matter how hard life is,I w
4、ont give up my dreams.无论生活有多艰难,我都不会放弃我的梦想。7.No matter what happens,I will be with you forever.无论发生什么,我都会永远和你在一起。8.Its very important for us to learn to be thankful.对我们来说,学会感恩非常重要。9.Its such a meaningful experience that I will never forget it.这是一次如此有意义的经历,我永远不会忘记。初中三年的学习生活即将结束。你还记得那些发生在学校中感动你的瞬间吗?也许是
5、一次老师和你的长谈,也许是一次同学对你的帮助,也许是一次运动会中的奋力拼搏,也许是一次艺术节中的精彩表演请以“A moving moment“为题,写一篇英语短文,将感动你的一个瞬间记录下来。要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数 80 左右。A moving moment3_【写作指导】1.写作要点:描述一个感动自己的瞬间2.文体:记叙文3.时态:过去时【思维模板】【高分佳作】A moving momentWhen I was in Grade 8, I was really poor at math. The teachers and my parents were worri
6、ed about me. In an exam, I did badly. I felt sad and cried in the corner of the classroom. Then my classmate Zhang Ming came up to me. He told me that I should pay more attention to what the teacher said in class and do more exercises after class. If I had problems, I could ask him for help at any t
7、ime. He encouraged me to make progress little by little. The moment we finished our talking, I felt a new life started. And the moving moment will be in my heart forever.【得分点拨】be worried about 使用准确到位,为下文描述做了铺垫该句是含有宾语从句的复合句,pay attention to 的运用为文章增色句式简单明了,encourage sb. to do sth.运用恰当语言衔接连贯,过渡自然,最后4一句呼应主题
