1、第一编,专题五 书面表达,第2讲 书信邮件最常考，目的明确会套语,书信和电子邮件是全国卷书面表达最热门的考查形式 常考类型：邀请信、道歉信、询问信、建议信、求助信、约稿信、申请信等,真 题 体 验,(2018全国) 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1到达时间； 2合适的礼物； 3餐桌礼仪。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,_,满分作文第一步 认真审题 谋篇布局,满分作文第二步 斟酌词句 设计亮点 1我很高兴得知你将出席你中国朋友的宴请。 高级句式(用被动语态)：Im glad/plea
2、sed/delighted to know _ _by your Chinese friend. 2你最好准时到达，因为守时在中国是有礼貌的。 高级词汇和句式(非限制性定语从句)：Youd better arrive on time， _ .,you are,invited to a dinner party,which is polite in China,3因为老人在中国很受尊重，他们通常先吃桌上的食物。 高级词汇：The elderly usually taste the food _ first because they are well respected in China. 高级句
3、式(利用不定式作定语)： _ _,served on the table,The elderly are usually the first to taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.,满分作文第三步 巧用过渡 美化成文【范文赏读】 _,Dear Terry， I am delighted to know you are invited to a dinner party by your Chinese friend.It is a really good opportunity
4、 to experience Chinese culture.Now Id like to offer you some advice.,_ _ _,First of all， youd better arrive on time because it is polite to be punctual in China.Second， it is a good idea to bring a small gift， such as a bunch of flowers or a box of chocolates if they have young children.Most importa
5、ntly， the elderly are usually the first to taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.Dont forget to praise your friend for the delicious foods he offers. I hope you will have a great time. Yours， Li Hua,【一句多译】 表达方式一： _ _ 表达方式二： _ _ 表达方式一： _ 表达方式二： _ 表达方式一： _ _ 表达方式二
6、： _ _,I am pleased to know your Chinese friend has invited you to dinner. I am glad to know you are going to your Chinese friends apartment for dinner. Now Im writing to make some suggestions for you. Here are some tips for you.,First of all，youd better arrive on time because being punctual is consi
7、dered polite in China. First of all，youd better arrive on time because it is good manners to come on time.,9组不可不记的书信类万用句式 1道歉信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 Im writing to apologize for. /I am writing to say sorry for. 我写这封信是因道歉。 I am writing to express/convey my heartfelt apology to you. 我写信向你表达真切的歉意。,名 师 点 津,(2)吸引阅卷
8、人篇中句 I am sorry for my not being able to attend your party due to the fact that. 我非常抱歉不能参加晚会是因为 The reason why I fail to show up is that I have something urgent to attend to. 我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。 (3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.
9、我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。 Once again，Im sorry for any inconvenience caused. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。,2求助信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 Im writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor. 我写信是想问您能否帮助我。 Im sorry to bother you，but I have some difficulties here and I need your help. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。 I have som
10、e difficulty in doing. which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 I cant concentrate on my lessons these days，and I failed in the last exam，which worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。 Facing/Faced with so many difficul
11、ties，I have to turn to you for help. 面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 I will be very grateful if you could help me. /I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and. 如果您能帮助我我会非常感激。 Id appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account. 如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。,3感谢信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 Im ext
12、remely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during. 感谢你在期间给予我无私的帮助。 Im writing to convey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during. 我写信感谢您在期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。 I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我想，借此机会
13、表达对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持的感谢。,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to. 非常感谢您为帮助我们所做的一切。 Thanks to your generous/selfless/kind help，without which I wouldnt have made such great progress. 多亏你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有你的帮助，我就不会取得这么大的进步。,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 It was kind and generous of you to do t
14、his for me，and I appreciate it more than I can say. 你对我如此慷慨，我真是感激不尽。 I wish there were a better word than“thanks”to express my appreciation for your generous help. 任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。 I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by. 如果我有机会通过报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。,4建议信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头
15、句 I have learned that you have some trouble in. and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions. 我知道你在方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。 Youve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding. and Ill try to make some useful/helpful/practical suggestions here. 关于你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的/有帮助的/实用的建议。,When it
16、comes to/As for. ，the following are my suggestions. /My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于，我的建议如下。 Im writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 In my opinion/As far as Im concerned/Personally，it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
17、When it comes to/As for. ，I would like to suggest/advise/recommend you should. 当涉及/关于，我建议你应该 I think it would be of great benefit/very beneficial if you. 我认为如果，将会受益。 Doing. is a good/great/better choice. 做是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 I will be glad if you will take my advice/suggestions into consider
18、ation. 如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。 I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/practical/beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益。,5邀请信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 Its my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us. 非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。 I wonder if I/we have the honor to invite you to the party. 我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你
19、参加派对。 Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. 我想邀请您一起去参观,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 We are having/planning. On. (date)and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us. 我们定于(日期)(活动)，如果你能来参加就太好了。 The following are some details about.
20、 /Here are some details about. /Some details about. are as follows. 的细节如下。 To begin with，we will. Besides，there will be a number of/various activities such as. which will. 首先，我们将，此外，将会有许多活动，例如这将,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you. 我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。
21、 We/I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early/earliest convenience. 如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们/我将不胜感激。,6咨询信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 I have seen your advertisement and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course. 我看了你们的广告，我想更多地了解 Im writing to see if it is possible
22、for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning. 我写信想看看你是否能提供一些关于的具体信息。,I am. I wonder if you could provide some specific information about. 我是我想知道你是否能提供一些关于的具体信息。 I wonder/am wondering if you could/would let me know something about. 不知道你是否能够告知有关的情况。,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 I would like to know how
23、much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. 我想知道是否 Another point I am not certain about is. 我还不确定的另外一点是,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 Could you be so kind as to send me some. on the above mentioned aspects？ 能否针对上述问题寄些相关的给我？ Thank you for your kindness，and your timely attention to this let
24、ter will be highly appreciated. 谢谢你的善意，对于你对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。,7活动介绍信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 I feel delighted that you are so interested in. (活动)，so Im writing to give you a brief introduction of it. 我很高兴你对很感兴趣，所以我写信向你简要介绍一下它的情况。 I feel greatly honored to be asked to contact you，informing you of our arrangements.
25、我感到很荣幸受委托与您联系，告知您我们的安排。 In reply to your letter about the activity，I would like to inform you of some details about it. 你来信中提到了活动，我想告知你该活动的一些细节。,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 Aimed at promoting/improving/providing. ，the activity is to be held/was held. (时间). 致力于促进/改善/提供，活动将于/于(时间)举行。 The. (活动)will be scheduled to sta
26、rt on. (具体日期). 活动安排在(具体日期)开始。,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 Not only does the activity broaden my horizons but also inspires me to work harder. 活动不仅让我大开眼界而且激励我更加努力。 Through the activity，weve realized the importance of. 通过活动，我们意识到的重要性。 The activity offered us a chance to. and helped us learn. 活动给我们提供了一个的机会，并帮助我们学会,8投诉
27、信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 Im writing to make a complaint about your standard service. 我写信是为了投诉。 Im. a customer who bought. from your website several days ago. I am writing to you to complain about. 我是你们的一位顾客，几天前我从你们的网站上购买了我写信向你投诉 I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at your unfriendly attitude to cus
28、tomers. 我写信表达我对你们对顾客不友好的态度的不满。,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 To improve the situation，it is advisable for you to take the following measures. 为了改进这种情况，建议你采取以下措施。 I do hope that someone will take effective measures to deal with this matter. 我真的希望有人能采取有效措施解决这个问题。 I sincerely hope you can better your service and that mi
29、stake wont arise again in the future. 我真诚希望你能改进你们的服务并且此类错误将来不会再出现。,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 I would appreciate it if you could give due attention to this matter. 如果你能对此事给予足够的重视，我将非常感谢。 I am really annoyed about it. I trust/have great faith that you will take my complaints seriously. 我对这件事真的很恼火。我相信你会认真对待我的投诉。,9求职
30、/申请信 (1)吸引阅卷人开头句 Learning from. that you are looking for a(n). ，I would like to apply for the position. 从那儿得知您需要一名，我想申请这个职位。 I saw your advertisement on the Internet/in the newspaper and I show great interest in. 我看见你们在网上/报纸上登的广告而且我对极感兴趣。 Im writing to request a valuable chance to be. The following
31、are my advantages. 我写信申请的宝贵机会。以下是我的优势。,(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 I have teamwork spirit and can get on well with other people. 我有团队精神，善于和别人相处。 Not only am I good at. but also I am experienced in. 我不仅擅长而且在方面有经验。 I have been working in. since. ，and have therefore gained rich knowledge and experience in this field. 自从后，我一直从事，因此获得了与这个领域相关的知识和经验。,(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 I am sure I will do it well if you give me the chance to be a member of your company. 如果您给我一个机会成为公司的一员的话，我相信自己会做得很好。 I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。,
