1、第一编,专题五 书面表达,第1讲 满分作文的3大技巧,高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠，为作文添彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两点： 1不“人云亦云”原则 写作时恰当使用其他考生可能想象不到的词汇会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。如 attractappeal to吸引 (2017北京卷满分作文)Its certain that the amazing scenery along the river will appeal to you. 河沿岸美丽的风景肯定会吸引你。,技巧1 词汇高级，“语”众不同,be active inget actively involved in积极参与 (2017天津
2、卷满分作文)I will get actively involved in the volunteer work for the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin. 我将积极参与即将在天津举行的第13届全运会。 be busy withbe absorbed/engaged in忙于 (2017天津卷满分作文)With the college entrance examination drawing near，Im engaged in/absorbed in preparing for it. 随着高考的临近，我正忙于准备考试。,chance
3、opportunity机会 (2017全国卷满分作文)I wish you could take advantage of this opportunity to learn Chinese traditional culture further. 我希望你能利用这次机会进一步学习中国传统文化。 do well inhave a good command of做得好 (陕西卷满分作文)I have such a good command of English that Im elected as assistant to my English teacher. 我精通英语被选为英语老师的课代表
4、。,helplend a helping hand帮助 (2016全国卷I满分作文)I wonder if you could lend me a hand to polish my application. 我想知道你是否能帮我润色我的申请信。,2短语优先原则 短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，因此考生宜利用短语巧妙表达文章的意思。如 besidesin addition/whats more另外 (2017全国卷满分作文)In addition，there are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot
5、. 另外，著名艺术家会现场表演如何剪纸。 considertake. into consideration/account考虑 (2016全国卷I满分作文)I would really appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration. 如果您考虑我的请求我将不胜感激。,manya large number of许多 (2016全国卷满分作文)I remembered you showed me a large number of photos on the theme the last time you visited
6、 our school. 我记得你上次来我们学校时给我看了许多关于这个主题的照片。 rememberkeep/bear in mind记住 (2017全国卷)What you should keep in mind is that you have to apply for membership before the deadline. 记住在截止日期前申请会员资格。,understandhave a better understanding of理解 (2017全国卷满分作文)Only through the activity can you have a better understand
7、ing of the Chinese traditional culture. 只有通过这个活动你才能理解这个节日。 verymore than非常 (2017北京卷)Im more than delighted to receive your letter and know youre coming to China. 收到你的信，知道你要来中国我很开心。,书面表达中的句子如果都是简单句一定得不了高分，精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式和复合句，让句子“靓”起来。 1陈述不如倒装妙 倒装句是一种简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。开头用否定词、地点状语、only状
8、语，so形容词/副词that，形容词as主语 (2017全国卷满分作文)So diligent are you that Im more than delighted to teach you. 你这么勤奋我很乐意教你。,技巧2 句式生动，文采卓然,2强调省略很精彩 强调句可以突出强调某一部分内容，吸引读者的注意，而省略句可以使句子更简洁、明快。 (福建卷满分作文)It is the sprit that the story conveys that really matters. 这个故事所传递的精神最为重要。 (2017全国卷满分作文)As scheduled，an art exhibit
9、ion will be held next Sunday in the local museum. 按照计划，下周日将在当地博物馆举行艺术展。,3主动不如被动巧 被动语态符合英语表达习惯，如在文章中利用两个被动语态的句子，会使整篇文章句式丰富。 (2016全国卷I满分作文)Your timely help will be very much appreciated by me. 我会非常感激你及时的帮助。 4分词结构不可少 (2017天津卷满分作文)To get admitted，I have made good preparations，trying to know as much as I
10、 could about my city. 为了被录取，我做了充分准备，努力深入了解天津。,5虚拟语气最委婉 虚拟语气在写作中的使用可以使表达更委婉，更吸引阅卷老师的注意力。 Without your kindness and generosity，I would not have enjoyed myself so much when visiting England. 没有你的善良和慷慨，在英国旅行时我就不会玩得这么开心。,6各类从句添亮点 (陕西卷满分作文)You mentioned youd like to teach English in return，which is exactl
11、y what Im dying for. (定语从句和名词性从句) 你提到作为回报你可以教英语，这是我一直期望的。 (2017全国卷满分作文)My advice is that you should take this opportunity to participate in our school team. (名词性从句) 我建议你利用这次机会加入我们校队。,过渡词语就像纽带一样把文章紧紧连接起来，更像润滑剂，使文章衔接流畅。 1文章或段落起始常用的过渡词语 to begin with(首先)，first of all(第一，首先)，in the first place(首先)，as yo
12、u know(如你所知)，as is known to all (众所周知)，as is shown in(正如展示的那样),技巧3 过渡巧妙，完美文章,2文章或段落结尾常用的过渡词语 therefore/thus(因此)，in conclusion(总之，最后)，in brief(简言之)，to sum up(总而言之)，in a word(总之)，generally speaking(总体上讲)，on the whole(总的说来) 3常用的表示先后次序的过渡词语 first(第一)，second(第二)，next(其次，然后)，last but not least(最后但同样重要)，af
13、ter that(之后)，eventually(最后，最终)，since then(从那以后)，afterwards(以后，后来)，meanwhile(同时)，immediately(立刻)，finally(最后，最终),强烈推荐以下组合 适用于两点的情况：on the one hand，on the other hand；for one thing，for another。 适用于三点或以上的情况：to begin with，then，furthermore，finally；to start with，next，in addition，last but not least；most impo
14、rtant of all，moreover，finally。,4常用的表示因果关系的过渡词语 accordingly/consequently(因此，所以)，for this reason(由于这个原因)，as a result of(作为结果)，in this way(这样)，due to/thanks to(由于)，therefore/thus(因此)，because of(由于) 5常用的表示比较和对比的过渡词语 in contrast with(与相比)，similarly(同样)，on the contrary(相反)，different from(与不同)，on the other hand(另一方面),6常用的表示举例的过渡词语 a case in point(恰当的例子)，that is to say(也就是说)，for instance/example(例如) 7常用的表示强调的过渡词语 furthermore/moreover(而且)，besides(此外)，in fact(实际上)，also(而且，也)，indeed(的确)，in particular(尤其，特别)，naturally(当然),
