1、12019 中考英语作文优享编（四）Passage-A在你所学的科目中，你最喜欢的科目是什么？请你以“My Favorite Subject”为题，根据以下写作要点，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文。要点提示：1.介绍你最喜欢的科目；2你喜欢该科目的原因；3谈谈你今后的学习打算。写作要求：1.内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；2语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；3文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。My Favorite SubjectIn school we study many subjects.My favorite subject is English.I
2、 think English is very interesting.Its widely used in the world.Wherever you go，you can use it.I can not only learn many new words and phrases but also get the latest news about western countries.Besides，I can make many foreign friends，too.In the future，I will take notes carefully and focus on corre
3、ct spelling and grammar.When I have some problems with my English，I will turn to my teachers and friends for help.Passage-B最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”(“Dont keep your worries”) 的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。要求：1、内容包括：调查结果（如图所示） 、对老师和父母的建议。2、词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。2One possible version:Our school has made a survey “Dont kee
4、p your worries“Here are the resultsAbout fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homeworkThey have so much homework to do every dayAnd they feel stressed too muchAbout thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them （in their studies） Its diffi
5、cult for them to get along/on well with their parentsThe other twenty percent of them say they are weak in healthThey complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activitiesDear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom an
6、d dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthyWe will try/do our best and we also want to play on our ownPassage-C假如你校英语报七月份将开展“校园之星“（Star of the Campus）评选活动，请你根据图中的信息，向校英语报写一篇短文，介绍你心目中“校园之星“康康的情况。提示词：helpwith spare time get along with do housework要求：1文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词；2文中不得出
7、现真实姓名、校名和地名；33词数 100 左右（文章首段已给出，不计人总词数） Our school will select（挑选）“Star of the Campus（校园）“in JulyI think Kangkang is the most suitable one_【参考范文】At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our classHe also loves sportsHe often plays football at week
8、ends with his friendsWhats more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after classAt home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare timeBesides，KangKang gets along well with his neighborsThis is why KangKang is so popularIn short，KangKang is an excellent s
9、tudent and he is always ready to help others in needHe sets a good example for us 【解析】 Our school will select（挑选）“Star of the Campus（校园）“in JulyI think Kangkang is the most suitable one At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our classHe also lo
10、ves sportsHe often plays football at weekends with his friendsWhats more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after class 【高分句型】 （在学校的表现） At home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare timeBesides，KangKang gets along well with his neighborsThis is why
11、 KangKang is so popular 【高分句型】 （在家的表现） In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need 【高分句型】He sets a good example for us这是一篇图画作文内容是介绍你心目中“校园之星“康康的情况时态主要为一般现在时人称主要为第三人称 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文 4其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 描述图画；在学校：康康学习努力，成绩好，爱足球，关心同学帮助同学 在家：帮
12、助妈妈做家务，邻里关系好 常用到的重点短语： study hard 努力学习 whats more 再者 care for 照顾 help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 get along well with sb 与某人相处的好 【高分句型】 1Whats more，hecares for other students，so he alwayshelps them with their lessons after class whats more 再者 care for 照顾 help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 2This is why KangKang is so
13、popular why 引导的从句和 is 构成系表结构 3In short，KangKang is an excellent student and heis always ready to help othersin need in short 简言之，做插入语 be ready to do sth 乐意做某事 in need 在危急中，做后置定语，修饰 others这是一篇看图作文看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节 （2）结合提示词，明确考查意图所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料有时还会给出起始句（
14、这就给出了时态） ，学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了 （3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用 （5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等5Passage-D给出, 不计入总词数。提示词语： collect bottles turn off duty make a real differenceGood environment is important for everyone.【参考范文】Good environment is
15、 important for everyone. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.As students, I think its our duty to protect the environment of our school. And even the simplest activiti
16、es can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And its also a good idea to take part in recycling programs.I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.解析试题分析：作文要围绕要点展开写作：具体做法，感受，建
17、议。要符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性.注意提示语 collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference 的运用。注意作文的升华，提出环保的意义。【亮点说明】To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides,I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classr
18、oom.1.具体做法最好写上三点，三点之间要有过渡。过渡不要频繁使用 first，second，third。这篇文章处理的很好，to help with it, Besides, and。2. 注意从句的运用，比如时间状语从句，定语从句等。Passage-E假设你是 Alice，请你根据 Lily 的来信的内容写一封回信。针对 Lily 的困惑，首先谈谈你的看法，然后给 Lily 提一些建议，建议提示如下：1去她的朋友家里或打电话与她的朋友交谈；62给她的朋友写信或发 E-mail；3请她的朋友购买不同的衣服或留不同的发型；要求：1回信内容必须包括你的看法以及所有的提示内容，可适当发挥；2信的
19、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3词数：70 个左右。【参考范文】 （One possible version）Dear Lily，Im glad that I received a letter from you.I think you should be happy that you best friend likes your clothes and haircut. If not, I have some advice that may help you. You should go to her house or call her up to talk to her. You co
20、uld write or send an e-mail to her about your problem. You could also ask her to get different clothes and have a different haircut, or maybe you could find a new best friend.Good luck!Yours,AlicePassage-F（朋友与周围的人） 根据要求完成短文写作。来自美国的小迈克看完了这篇报道后深受感动，他觉得不仅中国人应该向雷锋学习，而且如果全世界的人都能做到这样，世界就会更美好。下面请你帮小迈克完成这篇发
21、出号召的演讲稿。内容包括：1. 简单介绍雷锋的事迹；2. 提出学习雷锋的具体行动建议(至少三条)；3. 呼吁大家都来学习雷锋。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, my dear teachers and students! _7_Thats all for my speech! Thank you for listening. 【参考范文】书面表达Good morning, my dear teachers and students! I fe
22、el so glad to talk about a Chinese model soldier named Lei Feng. On December 18, 1940, Lei Feng was born in a poor peasant family in a small village which lies in Hunan Province. Lei joined the Communist Party in 1960. He loved the Party and the people. Whats more, he was selfless, hardworking and a
23、lways did good for others. As a result, he became a model soldier one year later. Its a great pity that Lei died in an accident in 1962. What a great example Lei Feng is !I think people from the whole world should learn from Lei Feng.To learn from Lei Feng, we can do what we can to help people in ne
24、ed and raise money for the poor. Whats more, we can do much voluntary work to make our city more beautiful. As students，we should help to clean the teachers offices, study hard and help each other with study. Hopefully, Living Lei Feng will live all over the world.Thats all for my speech! Thank you
25、for listening. Passage-G难忘的初中生活即将结束，你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。要点如下：1时间：6 月 26 日下午 3：00；2地点： 301 教室；3活动内容：(1) 对老师用话语表达谢意；(2) 与同学交流暑假计划；(3) 师生合影，互赠留言。8参考词汇：look back at，say goodbye to，express thanks to，talk about，take photos注意：100 词左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总词数。Boys and girls，The wonderful middl
26、e school life will go to the end.So we are going to have a class meeting at 3：00 on June，26th in the Classroom 301.The theme of the class meeting is to say goodbye to our middle school.We plan to express thanks to our teacher first，then we can talk about our summer holiday which is coming.At last，all the teachers and students will take photos together and give your wishes each other.Please prepare for it carefully and be there on time
