1、1Unit 21 Human Biology写作园地-议论文的写作 感悟范文假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web？”为题，写一篇英语短文。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文We are now living in an information age， in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many p
2、eople cannot enjoy themselves without them.However ， if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and therere too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also availabl
3、e elsewhere.As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.技法讨论本模块的写作任务是一篇议论文，此类作文可采用“三段式”写作模式，以达到层次清晰、观点明确的效果。1开篇引入议题。文章的开头用简练的语言自然引入要讨论的话题。2中间分述观点。文章的主体部分对人们持有的不同观点进行客观的介
4、绍。有时为了达到层次分明的效果可采用“总括句观点 1观点 2”的“总分”模式。3结尾简述个人的看法。在文章的结尾根据写作的需要可简要、恰当地发表个人的看法。黄金表达1常用的句型Everyone knows that.Firstly, it., Secondly，. some people.On the one hand，. on the other hand，.However, other people stand on a different ground.2They consider it. to do.In my opinion, .After things are considered
5、, I believe that.2常用的连接词表示“启”的连接词：first, firstly, now, nowadays, at present, to begin with, first of all表示“承”的连接词：second, secondly, then, besides, moreover, furthermore, in addition, for example, in fact, meanwhile, similarly, in other words表示“转”的连接词：but, yet, nevertheless, however, in contrast, on
6、the contrary, on the other hand, fortunately, unfortunately表示“合”的连接词：in conclusion, to sum up, in short, in brief, on the whole, in a word, as a result, in general亮点分析1本文使用了定语从句，原因状语从句等句式，使得文章条理清晰，层次分明。2本文应用了widely, rather than, cut off, available, keep in touch with 等高级词汇和短语，提升了文章档次。3本文运用了however,
7、because, besides 等连接词，展示了作者的语言运用能力。类文演练假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生。你们的班主任李老师在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和其他的学生做同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了极大的反响，大家就此进行了讨论。请你根据下表内容把辩论的结果向李老师汇报一下，并说出自己的观点。赞同的原因 反对的原因 你的观点1.人人都有长处和不足，即使表现不好的学生也有可取之处，他们可以和成绩好的学生相互学习，加深友谊2帮助他们提高学习成绩，让他们获得自信1.部分学生常常违反校规校纪，成绩好的学生担心自己会受影响，养成坏习惯2一些学生很难相处注意：1.词数：120 个左右(开头和
8、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2短文须包括表中所有要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Li，We have held a heated discussion about whether it is good or not for excellent students to share a desk with other students. Opinions are divided.3_Yours，Li Ping联想词汇1. learn from _ 相互学习答案：each other2. hold the _ 持相反观点答案：opposite view3. _ school
9、 rules 违反校规答案：break4. _ bad habits 养成坏习惯答案：form5. make _ 取得进步答案：progress连词成句1. So, they can make friends and _.因此，他们可以交朋友，相互学习。答案：learn from each other2. However, others _.然而，其他人持相反意见。答案：hold the opposite view3. Firstly, some students are always _， which may cause excellent students to _.首先，一些学生总是违反
10、校规校纪，这会导致成绩好的学生养成坏习惯。答案：breaking school rules; form bad habits too连句成章_4_答案：Dear_Mr._Li，We_have_held_a_heated_discussion_about_whether_it_is_good_or_not_for_excellent_students_to_share_a_desk_with_other_students._Opinions_are_divided.Some are for the idea. They think everyone has his own strengths a
11、s well as weaknesses. Although some students are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields. So they can make friends and learn from each other. In addition, excellent students can help common students get more selfconfidence by helping them improve their studies.However, others hold th
12、e opposite view. Firstly, some students are always breaking school rules, which may cause excellent students to form bad habits too. Secondly, some students are hard to get along with.As far as Im concerned, Id like to share a desk with a common student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together.Yours，Li_Ping
